AsYa FF: silent love updated (Prt 6 pg 11) - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey Kawal. Firstly congratulatioms on the birth of ur baby bro. May u all have all da happiness and love in the world.
now coming to ur ff, i just came across it, and it was nice reading it. AsYa's concern for each other shows dey hav feelings for each other but r hiding or havn't discovered it themselves yet. all da parts were beautiful. especially Asad holding Zoya everytime she falls. i know Dilshaad n Najma must b shocked to see da two people who r always at loggerhead now freaking out wen the other is hurt. i hope dey come closer soon. plz do add me to ur pm list if u hav one and cont soon,
Love,
Nimra.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
Lovely update!
Please add me to the pm list!
~Sophie ;)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
Aww That Was So Cute. Asya Are Feeding Each Other Pizza.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
this is very nice, good going pm me when u continued
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey guys! sorry for the late update and thank you for continuing my story so far. please do continue to comment! makes me want to write more :D

Part 5:

For the rest of the movie they secretly got glances of each other not even paying attention to the movie. Once the movie was done Najma and Zoya picked up all the plates and cleaned up the mess. Everyone than went into their rooms. When Zoya walked into the room and saw Mariyam sitting on the floor very weak.

Zoya: Mariyam, what's wrong? Are you ok?

Mariyam: Zoya I'm really hungry.

Zoya: oh yeah, you didn't even get anything to eat. Hold on Mariyam, let me go get you some pizza.

Mariyam nodded and Zoya tiptoed out of her room.

***

Asad walking around his room, could not stop thinking about what had just happened with his and Zoya. He looked at his hand and had a flashback of Zoya cleaning up his cut and looking so concerned. He tried not to think about it but his heart wouldn't let him move on.

Asad: I think I'm going to get some water.

He quietly left his room and walked towards the kitchen to see a shadow

Asad (In his mind): Who could be awake and in the kitchen at this time?

He couldn't see the face because it was too dark.

Asad: I hope it's not Mariyam!

He walked towards the zoya but she was turned around getting a plate from the cupboard. He put his hand on his shoulder.

Asad: Mariyam?

Zoya quickly turned around whipping her hair in Asad's face.

Zoya: Mr. Khan it's Zoya. What are you doing here? Are you still hungry?!?

Asad: no Zoya, I came here to get a glass of water. But it seems like you're still hungry.

Zoya looked down at the 3 slices of pizza

Zoya: no, no Mr. Khan! This isn't for me. It's for Mariyam. she hasn't eaten yet so I came to get her some pizza.

Asad: Oh I see.

He went to go get a glass for him and Mariyam.

Asad: Why don't you pour her some coke as well.

He passed her the glass and took out the coke. Zoya took the coke from him and poured it in the glass. Asad was watching around to make sure no one would come. All of a sudden he saw a shadow coming down the stairs. Without thinking he grabbed Zoya's hand and ran into his room. He shut the door behind her and took a deep breath.

Zoya: Allah Miyaa! What's wrong with you Mr. Khan? Why did you bring me here? I have to give this to Mariyam. ( she said as she was pointing to the pizza.)

Asad: sorry Zoya, there was just someone coming down so I just brought you here.

Zoya was silent. All she could processes was Sorry Zoya.

Zoya (In her head): did he just say sorry.. to me!! And did he just say Zoya!

Zoya: oh, sorry for yelling Mr Khan, but how am I supposed to give this food to Mariyam?

Asad: Here, give it to me.

Zoya passed the plate to him. Asad slowly opened the door and saw that the place was clear. Before he left he looked back and lied.

Asad: some one is still there and if you go you will do something wrong, so ill just go and give it to her and you wait here.

Asad only said that because he didn't want her to leave. She nodded and he left. Zoya sat down on his bed with her back on the back board and her legs stretched out.

Asad came back and slowly opened the door to see her sitting on his bed with her eyes closed. He walked towards her.

Asad: Zoya, wake up. Zoya?

Zoya was in deep sleep and was nowhere near the position to wake her up. Asad smiled and decided to do some work until she wakes up.

Next part:

Zoya wakes up to see Asad cuddling in her lap.

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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
I didnt get a pm very bad! 🥺

But soo sooo soo cuteee!! 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

I didnt get a pm very bad! 🥺


But soo sooo soo cuteee!! 🤗


Omg sooo sorry
You'll be the first one next time :P
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
Love ittt! Cant wait for the next part. Can u pm me too? Ill add u
Edited by misha93 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
Asad cuddling in her lap...like seriously???
i am dieing to see that scene...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
Soo cute! Can't wait for the next part!
Asad cuddling in her lap! 😃
~Sophie :)

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