AsYa FF: silent love updated (Prt 6 pg 11)

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(Guys this is my first time writing a fan fiction so please do bear with me. Also please do leave some comment below. Tell me what I can change, thanks J )

*Story takes place after Asad finds out that Zoya is Hiding Mariyam in his house*

ASAD: Mariyam, what are you doing here? Let me guess.. Ms. Farooqui brought you here didn't she?

MARIYAM: nai nai bhaijaan. She is only helping me. I came to her. I have nowhere to go until my bhaijaan gets back. This is not Zoya's fault. She is very generous and sweet. She saved my life before and put herself in danger, knowing this she is once again helping me.

Asad has a flashback of him yelling at her in the jungle, her being put in the dirt and him looking for her like a maniac. Then he remembers the truth of why Zoya helped Mariyam. "She put her life at risk for my cousin" he thought. Asad's heart softened a bit

******meanwhile in the storage room*******

Zoya: Mariyam.. I brought you food. Mariyam, don't worry no one is here come out. Mariyam?

Zoya put the food aside and began to look all around. Maiyam was nowhere to be found.

Zoya: Allah Miyaa! Whats wrong with her. What is she went into jahapana six pack's room. Allah miyaa, please save me!

Zoya runs into asads room and as soon as she runs in, she trips over her foot and lands in Asads arms. (Mitwaa ishq pe zor nahe) AsYa eye lock

Mariyam awkwardly coughs and they both come back to their senses. Asad puts her back up and moves a bit away from her.

Zoya: Look mr.Khan. Its not what it looks like. Mariyam needs to be here. Her parents will kill her If she goes back. She needs to stay here till her bhaijaan gets back.

Asad interrupts her

Asad: yeah that's fine she can stay

Zoya not even listening continues to justify herself

Zoya: No no Mr. Khan! She cant go! Why don't you'' wait what did you just say?

Asad rolls his eyes and repeats himself

Asad: I said she can stay

Zoya was shocked. Jahapana six pack agreed with her without even fighting. How can this happen?

Mariyam: thank you soo much bhaijaan. I will never forget this

Zoya is just stairing at asad

Asad: Don't worry about it Mariyam. It's the least I can do. Why don't you leave the storage room and move into zoya's room. I think that would be a bit more comfortable for you

Zoya is still stairing at asad.

Mariyam: alright bhaijaan, I will never forget this and thanks once again.

Asad smiles and turn to see zoya stairing at her.

Mariyam leaves the room and zoya follows her. Right before zoya exited his room asad called her name.

Asad: Zoya wait. I have to talk to you

Zoya stops and realizes her heart is beating really fast. She turns arounf

Zoya: Ji?

Asad: I just wanted to aplogogize for everything that happened before. You risked your life for my cousin and I just mis judged you. So im Sorry

Zoya's eyes widned. In complete shock and confusion zoya faints.

Next part:
Zoya wakes up to see herself on asads bed. She turns to see asad sitting beside her with a glass of water ready to give to her



Hope you liked the 1st part

Part 2: Page 3

Part 3: Page 4

Part 4: Page 6

Part 5: Page 8

Part 6: Page 11

Edited by Madubala.K - 12 years ago

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Wow, you continue dis rite now hun, imma interested in dis one!!
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omg im so loving it..next update jaldi milegi please😳
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LOL she fainted outta shock cuz hez being so nice and agreeable !? Awesome 😆 PM me when u do continue ...
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Wow this was really nice. Interesting. Update soonish and pm me too if possible
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OMG I loved it!!! Ur writing style is so professional !! Can't wait for the nxt part ! Pls add me on to ur pm list!
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Interesting!!..
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loved this start! continue soon and do Pm me plz 😉
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I like it- please continue it ASAP.

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