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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: anopama

awesome work keep it up enjoyed it


thank you! and i will!!😃😃 glad you enjoyed
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: khadupam

lovely update wao👏


awww thank you sooo much!!!!!🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: vaishnavi31


ahaha well check thing, you on IF :O well done fatty, and yeah gurll i will update today or tmrw!! 🤗


of course im on IF where else will i be? 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Thanks!!!!! ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: asyafreva

aaawwwnnn!!!!!! ❤️ this was sooo swweeett...!!!!! nd plz update chap 23 asap...!!! its lyk m dyin to noe wats next nd widout it I m nt able to move on...!!!!!!!! HATS OFF TO UR WRITING...!!!! nd cud uplz pm me wenever u update if possible..??

thnx...!!


thanks like so sooo much!!!! ill update tonight or tmrw yaar dw! and make sure you send me a buddy request for pms, i just send you a request go and accept it!🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: khadupam

lovely updates it soo amazing👏

continue soon will be waitingg😊


aw thanks so soo much!🤗 yes ill continue soon 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
omg this is jus tooo cute love it
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Posted: 11 years ago
okay so as promised here goes part 22. thanks for bearing with my late updates. 😊And thanks so so much for all the words of encouragement i get after every chapter 🤗, i know i haven't been able to reply to all comments, but thanks to alll, every single comment makes me smile. i hope every chapter makes you guys smile too😉😆
so pms will be sent later, remember if you want pms, send me a buddy request okay? okay. And without further delay here is chap 22, Enough chit chat vaish😆😆 enjoy and let me know what you think, lots of love from vaish 😊

Chapter 22

'Good Mornnn... uhh kya?' Zoya's chirpy good morning suddenly went off key, her eyes bulging out of her head.

'Zoya? Tum... theek ho na?' Zeenat asked.

'Zeenat Phupi, Zoya is just as surprised as us, you see, uske Asad is never late' Najma said, winking at Zoya as she said uske', to which Zoya raised her hand as if she were going to hit her playfully.

'Najma, don't tease your bhabhi!' Dilshad scolded, and Zoya turned red.

'Waise Zoya, you're saying good morning, but I think we all should say GoodLastNight to you instead na?' Dilshad winked and raised her eyebrows.

'Allah miyan! What's wrong with all of you! Instead of teasing me, you should try to find Asad, who is apparently missing' she said defensively, trying to dissolve her blushing as she scratched her head looking around.

'Arrey haan, nice way to change the topic, but, since morning we noticed Asad isn't here as yet.'

'Haan Ammi, I knocked on his door too but no reply, so I thought he's still sleeping'

'But Tamatar, Asad never sleeps till this late. It's already 7. I think we should check on him'

'Haan, I guess. I thought I'd let him sleep, but you should know better' Najma teased.

'Jao Zoya, see what's going on with him' Dilshad ordered.

'Haan Phupi.'

All at the table laughed, and talked about the new couple, while Zoya left to check on her Jahanpana Six Packs.

She knocked on the door twice. No answer. 'Jahanpana! Darvasa kholo na'

Still no reply, so she opened the door and walked straight in.

'ALLAH MIYANN!!'

All came running to see what had happened.

'Ye dekho, I'm waking since so early, but he, he's sleeping like a baby here.!'

'Asad ko kya hogaya?' Dilshad asked concerned.

'Maybe he's tired from last night. I mean he probably used up all his strength to be so romantic with Zoya na?' Najma teased.

'Nahi tamatar, mujhe lagta hai ki kuch theek nahi hai'Zeenat and Anwar looked at Dilshad and the three smiled at her concern.

She moved forward to touch his arm and wake him up, calling 'Asad' softly.

She immediately sprang back her hand and felt his neck and forehead.

'Ya allah, he has a fever' she said panicky.

'Kya? But Asad never gets sick!'

'Haan, he said the same thing yesterday, and look at him now!' Zoya said.

'mmm' Asad groaned in his sleep and shifted, opening his eyes groggily.

A sloppy smile came on his face as he saw Zoya.

'Jaan...' he said and all burst out into laughter.

He realized there were others in the room and jumped up, and regretted it right after, as he felt his head spinning.

'Sss'he hissed, holding his temple.

'Jahanpana kya hua?' Zoya asked placing her hand on his head.

'Forget that. First tell me what you are doing in here. Once again you have come in without knocking Zoya. All of y... ACHOOO'

Zoya leapt across to the table, got a tissue from the tissue box and offered it to Asad.

'Bechara Asad. Think he's got the flu. You poor thing, acha I'll go make some soup for him' Dilshad said.

'Woh Bechara nahi hai, Phupi. In fact, I prefer this Asad. He can't scold me, he'll just end up sneezing!'

'Youu!!!' he started to say, but stopped as he felt another sneeze coming on and screwed up his face.

Zoya put a tissue on his nose just in time for when he sneezed. 'You what?' she asked, smirking.

Asad rolled his eyes, and dropped back on the bed.

'I'm fine, you all go continue with your breakfast. I'll just sleep it off'

'Nahi Jahanpana, we are all here at your service' she said, making everyone laugh.

'Bas bas. Meri bhaijan ko mat tang karo. Chalo hum sab nashta khayenge. Zoya you take care of bhaijan theek hai?'

'Oh no, that can't be good' Asad muttered.

'Tumne kuch kaha?'

'Nahi.'

'Thought so'

'Zoya, I'll just go look for some flu pills and bring them for him.'

'Nahi Ammi, they mighten work. And you know especially how I don't really get sick often' he said, shooting an angry stare to Zoya.

'Maine kya kiya!' zoya said defensively.

'So all went back to continue having breakfast, while Dilshad looked for pills and gave them to Zoya.

Zoya then thought, that Asad shouldn't take pills on an empty stomach. She went to check on him and saw he was asleep again.

'You poor thing' she said in a sad voice, touching his cheek.

She kept his tissue box beside him on his bed, and covered him halfway with the blanket, and caressed his head before heading out of his room.

At once, she went to the kitchen and began making breakfast for him. 'Oatmeal is healthy right, and should be easy for him to eat while he's sick' she thought as she quickly whipped it together.

After checking her ipad, she realized it was a good idea to make some ginger tea for him, and that she did.

After having breakfast, Najma left for college and Anwar left for some work.

Dilshad and Zeenat were catching up and talking about the wedding, when they realized Zoya was missing, and hadn't had breakfast.

They found her in the kitchen busy as a bee, talking to her self, about what she should add to her breakfast tray.

'Zoya, what's all this?'

'Woh actually, Asad didn't have any breakfast, and he should have something before taking medicine right? So I made this!' she said, dangling her fingers towards the tray, raising her eyebrows and smiling.

'Arrey wah!'

'Oatmeal, ginger tea! How come you never did this for me when I was sick Zoya?' Zeenat teased.

'But Zoya, you know Asad na, he doesn't like ginger tea. For all you know, he'd make you get him black coffee'

'Nahi, he can't say no to me' she beamed.' And well even if he does, I'll make him drink it, you don't worry'

'hmmm okay good luck! Nurse Zoya, how about I make some soup for him, for lunch?'

'Sounds great Phupi! I'll help you after'

'Nahi Zoya, you take care of Asad, give him lots lots of love. I will help your Phupi make the soup' Zeenat said, and Zoya nodded.

Tray in hand, a smile on her face she walked towards Asad's bedroom and went in.

'Asad?'

She put the tray down and called out, he wasn't in the room.

A few seconds after, she saw him come out of the bathroom, wearing his dress pants and a shirt.

'What's wrong with you? Where do you think you are going?'

'Zoya, I have a meeting at 10, I can't miss it'

'Are you mad? No. Not at all. you're not going anywhere'

'Zoya try to understand..' he was interrupted by the ringing of his cellphone.

'Haan Prasad, I'll be there shortly..ZOYAAA' he yelled as she snatched his phone from his hand.

'Good morning, This is Asad's fianc speaking. Actually your boss is very unwell, but you know how stubborn he can be. Please send a message to postpone his meeting, because he's too sick to attend'

'Oh sorry Maam. I'll postpone it. Boss should stay at home and rest. Thanks for taking good care of him. Allah hafiz.' Prasad replied.

'So, someone's home today' she sang loudly.

'Zoya! tum..' he started towards her but gasped and held his head.

'Asad! Asad kya hua?' she said, her voice laced with concern as she held him by his shoulder and made him sit.

'I just felt dizzy'

'Hmph and you wanted to go to work. Now come on, change into your normal clothes, and let's get you something to eat' Asad complied and returned a few moment later wearing sweat pants and a white t-shirt.

Zoya sat him down on the bed and sat in front him, the tray on her lap.

'You made this?' he asked.

'Mhhmmm all by myself, just for you' she replied.

'But Zoya, i... I hate ginger tea!'

'And? It's good for you, and it will help with the cold so stop being a baby.'

He whined and whined which led to Zoya forcefully lifting the cup up to his mouth.

An idea then struck him.

'Waise, jaan, I'll drink it under one condition.'

'Kya?'

'For every sip, you have to give me a kiss'

He took one sip and motioned for her to come closer. 'Allah miyan! What's wrong with you? Chal stop this, and drink your tea'

Asad shook his head and crossed his arms.

'Well fine, remain sick then' she said and got up, about to leave.

She turned around, You're supposed to stop me!'

'Zoya, I'm not drinking that'

'Don't be stubborn na!'

'Nope.'

Half blushing, half smiling she went forward, to sit on the bed again. And lening in, she placed kiss on his cheeks, letting her lips linger longer than just a few seconds.

'Happy?' she asked, sarcastically.

'Very' he replied as he opened his mouth as she fed him oatmeal. In between whenever he took a sip of the tea, she would kiss his cheeks, and she had to admit, she was glad he laid down that condition.

He had finished his oatmeal but Zoya still found him sipping from the cup, and she had to keep giving him kisses.

'Asad, can I see the cup?' she asked.

'Nahi! it's mine' he said defensively.

With that she knew and grabbed it from him.

'It's empty! and you have me like a fool here kissing you!' she pouted.

'But jaan,... I just wanted your kiss.' he made a sad puppy dog face and her heart melted at once, and something came over her and made her lean to him, and caress his neck. She placed her lips on his for a few seconds, smiling against his and then pulled back, blushing.

'Now come on, you've got enough kisses, now get some rest okay,' she said after making him take the flu pills.

She got up to leave, but he held her hand, stopping her.

'Stay with me?'

She smiled and nodded.

She sat on the bed, and he wriggled to rest his head in her lap. She gave him a soothing head massage, hoping it would help his headache to ease up, and soon enough he fell asleep.

Zoya gently got up and placed his head on the pillow, and covered him up before stepping out of the room.

She then went to accompany Dilshad and Zeenat in the kitchen who were making soup.

Zoya wanted to help, but they forced her to sit and have breakfast instead.

Around lunchtime, Zoya woke up Asad and fed him soup, and in return, he fed her as well, knowing she hadn't eaten.

Dilshad and Zeenat saw this and teared up looking at the two love birds.

After feeding him, she noticed some sauce on his mouth and wiped it off with her finger.

'Good, now Mr Patient, get some rest okay'

'Okay Miss Nurse' he replied, smiling.

She kissed his forehead before turning to leave.

'Jaan!' he called out.

'Thanks for taking care of me today'

'No need to say thanks for this, Jahanpana, waise bhi, I'm going to take very good care of you, not only today, but every day of our lives' she said, looking at him lovingly.

'I love you.' he said, before he drifted off to sleep with a smile playing on his lips.

' I love you too' she said softly, closing his door.

❤️

Next : Chapter 23

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I am back... 5 hours later. yep i dreamt four 5 hours! This was ooo nice! IT WAS SOOO AMAZING!!! i Just loved it!! please PM me!!!!
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