HKKMJNM: Part 24a, Pg 145 - Page 13

Thanks for the pm. I realized that I never actually commented on your story , and for that I would like to say sorry. 😃 However, your story and others that were superb were the reason I made an IF account . I truly loved your story from the beginning. Your FF is the perfect mix of comedy and intrigue and I really enjoy the way the story is going. 👏 Waiting eagerly for your next update. 😆

Originally posted by: Mahi982

OHMYGOD that was so cute!!! Asad kept looking after zoya. he even gave zoya his coat and on top of tht he said he trusts her!!!!!!!!!

I hope Hammad starts falling for Nazma!!

PLZZZ UPDATE SOON!!!! I really don't think I could wait

Originally posted by: crazy4KASH_AR

Awesome part.
I loved it a lot.
Zain is flirting with Zoe.I liked the way Asad appeared protective about Zoe.
I loved it when Asad gave his coat to Zoe.
Ishan's game was amazing.
All in all this update was wonderful.
You are a wonderful writer dear.
Please update the next part soon.

Originally posted by: marialuvsarshi

thanks for the pm i cant wait until zoya and asad confess their love for each other!

Originally posted by: Asyalover

thnks for the pm ...wonder who put the hand on zoya's shoulder,,guess it would be asad...cont soon

Originally posted by: irock321

Amazing chapter! Loved everything about it! LOL Zain is such a weirdo xD I wonder who put their hand on her shoulder?!? I sorta want it to be Zain ...then Asad comes out of nowhere and helps her out or something ...or he gets jelly and tells Zain to leave which leads to an emotional convo b/w Asad and Zoya but not the confession. Idk ...confession sorta seems early for this story ...I think you should wait out till its maybe the last day for them at the camp or when they come back from the camp...Upto you though! Just a suggestion :)

Originally posted by: -Laiba-

awww its been ages i've been waiting for this ff to be continued 😆 the part was awsome!! i totaly loved it!! Asad is such a sweetheart ❤️ I l just loved the way he showed his care to Zoya by putting his coat on her stuff and pretending he doesn't know. The game part was just perfect! fit perfectly in the story ❤️ I wish there were more scenes of Zain Zoya and Asad just to see how he would have reacted more in an extreme jealousness without Zoya being to close to Zain 😆 fool'n final Asad and Zoya are made for each other ❤️ dying to read more =)
continue soon and do pm me if u do send pms =)
Love, Laiba

Originally posted by: bigj66

just read this all in one go, and loved it!!!!

hope Najma and Hammad get together and Zoya and Asad as well:$

Also, if possible could you please pm me when you update? And update soon please :)

Zainab

Originally posted by: cheezluver98

Thanks for the pm. I realized that I never actually commented on your story , and for that I would like to say sorry. 😃 However, your story and others that were superb were the reason I made an IF account . I truly loved your story from the beginning. Your FF is the perfect mix of comedy and intrigue and I really enjoy the way the story is going. 👏 Waiting eagerly for your next update. 😆

Originally posted by: Alveena12

i think you should do a scene where they get closerrr during the camp