A JOURNEY TO REMEMBER FOREVER-ASYA OS - Page 5

Hmmm. . Main kya bholu??
Mere ko na samajh nhe aa rahaa Im stunned...
Hy asma u always ryt amazing ff's
But today,this AsYa ff jus rocked
It was perfect..
I jus loved firstly how asad saved Zoya from the goons
And their attachments to each other
Baar baar eye locks ho
Aise lag raha ta ki mere saamne yeh play ho raha hain
It was amazing how they finally admited their love fpr each other
Style was perfect... I loved asads comments and Zoya's classic Allah miyya whats wrong with u?
This if the first OS ive commented on and it was amazing
Ek baat bhulgayi
Yeh ghaana ka edition mast ta yaar
Aur baarish ka mausam jo rakha it was so romantic
Awww atlast jahapana de dil ki baat kehdi
I just loved it
Do write more OS n pm me wen u do!!
Thx for the pm Asma
Keep writing ur an awesome writer


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Sammara

😳 😳 😳 no words...it was too good..keep writing more.

hey thanks 4 the pm..
the os was awesomeee..luvd it...awww luvd asad😆

Tooo gud dear

awesome os...
beautifully written..
hats off!!!!
do write more of such stuff!!
thanks for the pm

Uff.. Allah Mian, Asma what have u done? dis OS has become one of my favs and has increased my obsession for Jahanpanah if could get any more. i lovedd it. simply a beautiful piece of work by you. n u dint think it was how you wanted it to be. oh please it ws great. it felt so connected to the real scenario in QH. the whole journey was so eventful and memorable as ur title says. i just loved the care Asad showed towards Zoya in the hut,how he controled himself, then fighting with his brain to get rid of her thoughts once back home and in the end bursting out in anger on thinking she would belong to someone else. awesome and simply awesome!keep up the good work and plzzz do writemore on ASYA.

This was beautiful... I have no words amazing

Res :D