this is what is wrong with Ayaan & Humera's story

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Posted: 12 years ago
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i would love to love their love story, but i think the main problem is that the writers are making it wayyy too cheesy! here is what i think the problem is with the characters:

humera: the way she CONSTANTLY blushes and flirts with ayaan, and those googly eyes she makes towards him, are very VERY 1950s! its even stupider how he doesnt notice this. i mean, if they wanted to show two friends falling in love, then they should show that! ..not a girl being completely latoo to the point of pathetic, over a guy!

ayaan: i think the shayari is cute, but sometimes his character goes too over-board with the "happy-go-lucky" guy. in his scenes with rashid and shireen, we get to see a depth to him, some maturity and responsibility too, but otherwise, he is too 2-dimensional! oh and he could look SO much better with a haircut!

my main point is that they are too OTT - sweetness overdose, googly-eyes overdoes..diabetes ho jaayegi yaar!
i love AsYa because you see the fire, the spark. With humera and ayaan..yes there is chemistry..but there is no DEPTH to their love story. I really hope that the writer's work to develop these two characters and their story, because it would be very beneficial for the show..PLUS there is just so much scope!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I have so many problems with them but from my personal view I never felt their chemistry from the start so I was never boarding that ship.

When Asad/Ayaan both saw Zoya for the first time I felt both of their connection with Zoya. I normally dislike triangles but this one I'm somewhat looking towards too.

Humaria & Ayaan I don't even know how that is allowed in the household. I don't know what kind of Muslim ways this show is trying to show.

With your point definitely over the top scenes with those two. Okay she likes him BUT even when she knows how he is she's still tailing behind him and Ayaan just misleads her. Theirrelationship is recipe for disaster. He's never going to marry her and I feel she's going to end up on the tracks of how are her mother is if she doesn't end up with Ayaan.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: enchanted.

i would love to love their love story, but i think the main problem is that the writers are making it wayyy too cheesy! here is what i think the problem is with the characters:


humera: the way she CONSTANTLY blushes and flirts with ayaan, and those googly eyes she makes towards him, are very VERY 1950s! its even stupider how he doesnt notice this. i mean, if they wanted to show two friends falling in love, then they should show that! ..not a girl being completely latoo to the point of pathetic, over a guy!

ayaan: i think the shayari is cute, but sometimes his character goes too over-board with the "happy-go-lucky" guy. in his scenes with rashid and shireen, we get to see a depth to him, some maturity and responsibility too, but otherwise, he is too 2-dimensional! oh and he could look SO much better with a haircut!

my main point is that they are too OTT - sweetness overdose, googly-eyes overdoes..diabetes ho jaayegi yaar!
i love AsYa because you see the fire, the spark. With humera and ayaan..yes there is chemistry..but there is no DEPTH to their love story. I really hope that the writer's work to develop these two characters and their story, because it would be very beneficial for the show..PLUS there is just so much scope!



the line in black cracked me up hahaha😆

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -a04

I have so many problems with them but from my personal view I never felt their chemistry from the start so I was never boarding that ship.


When Asad/Ayaan both saw Zoya for the first time I felt both of their connection with Zoya. I normally dislike triangles but this one I'm somewhat looking towards too.

Humaria & Ayaan I don't even know how that is allowed in the household. I don't know what kind of Muslim ways this show is trying to show.

With your point definitely over the top scenes with those two. Okay she likes him BUT even when she knows how he is she's still tailing behind him and Ayaan just misleads her. Theirrelationship is recipe for disaster. He's never going to marry her and I feel she's going to end up on the tracks of how are her mother is if she doesn't end up with Ayaan.


yeah..that's also very true. i know that some muslim families have inter-related marriages, but these two are SO closely related! she's prolly his first cousin or something 😕 even though i've tried liking them, and i cant, i still hope that they stay together, cause i REALLY don't want ayaan to come between ASYA!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I agree they are too chessy ...But I rather see him with Humeira than with Zoya

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