AsYa SS: T.L.C. Chap 16, pg 100 - Page 50

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: J12L85

Hi Adeeti, wow fantastic update. Loved the life lessons the update aimed at. Its so true that our clothing cannot change a persons thinking. What appears on the surface is not always matched to what is within. Loved the womens liberation lesson and so true that we claim to be a much more advanced thinking generation yet some age old pre conceived notions still live on. Its outrageous how a womens image is dented if she was in a past relationship but its normal for a man... the past is the past and should never affect your present, a true man is one who can differentiate between this differences and appreciate what he has. Asad was outstanding in this part as he both trusted Zoya to be alone with Ayaan and gave a befitting reply to treachorous thoughts. Loved the empowering lessons and thanx for the PM:)


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Loved what you wrote... Thanks for understanding what I was trying to communicate. Yup, Asad is a good man despite all that unresolved anger and other issues.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Rarepearl

uff after such a long time u cont. khair it was worth all da wait. it was a beautiful chapter. it was disgusting to see Ayaan go so low to get her, if he ever loved her, he wudn't hav hurt her like dis n secong wud neva play dirty to hav her back. i loved how Asad controlled his emotions n anger n dealt wid Ayaan. he was so rite in saying dat he neede to get back to where he belonged, dats Zoya's past. Asad's words proved how much he loves her for wat she is n not for her physical self. i wish ppl out here also understand dis point. Zoya wud be so proud of Asad and her love is gonna multiply infinte times for him.

do cont soon,
love,
Nimra.


Nimra,
Glad it was worth the wait. Ayaan is plain selfish and stupid.

Yup, I feel Asad has realised the depth of his feelings for Zoe. And she got the opportunity to hear it from him.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Idiot Ayaan, did he really think Asad would fall for such lies ??!! I'm glad that Asad gave it back to Ayaan in such a subtle manner. Waiting to see how he will comfort Zoya after this !!
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Posted: 12 years ago
how could ayaan speak abt zoya like that...such a jerk...😔 and asad is the perfect gentleman...šŸ‘even though he was mad at ayaan for speaking abt zoya like that, he kept his cool...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ABBY92

Idiot Ayaan, did he really think Asad would fall for such lies ??!! I'm glad that Asad gave it back to Ayaan in such a subtle manner. Waiting to see how he will comfort Zoya after this !!


Abby,
Ayaan was stupid from day one! He let Zoya go in the first place and never realised her worth.

Asad I think acted out of character... He might have preferred hitting Ayaan but chose the adult way to respond.
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Posted: 12 years ago
thanks for the pm please update soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
It was superb. Please continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Am Liking this Story. And Thank god ayhan is out of the scene now! Please pm me for Updates!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Adeeti, beautiful and wonderful story it is. Jus' read it from the beginning and I loved it a lot! :D

Continue Soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Micha1005

Am Liking this Story. And Thank god ayhan is out of the scene now! Please pm me for Updates!


Hey Micha,
Thanks! Yup, he's out.

Will PM you for sure 😊

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