AsYa SS: T.L.C. Chap 16, pg 100

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Peppy

@darkangel93

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Posted: 12 years ago

#471

lol ayan got busted!!!! i love this ss of urs!!! i keep checkin for updates... continue soon!!!

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CrazyBilli

@CrazyBilli

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Posted: 12 years ago

#472

Fabulous chapter!!! aayaan is such a **stard!Loved the way u pointed out sum important social messages.

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adeeti10

@adeeti10

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Posted: 12 years ago

#473

Originally posted by: ras224
hey adeeti i simply luv ur writing style babe👏...u r 1 of da strongest writers of dis forum & whn i say it i really mean it😃...urrgghh!!!dat ayan...he actually got on my nerves whn he said those utter rubbish abt zo😡...& yeah true luv mein nothing matters whether she's a virgin or not...its all abt understanding each other...ek req. hai ji apse...plz dont bring ayan again in dis story...i mean uska chapter toh abhi khatm ho gaya na😆...cont soon😳

Thanks Ras! I updated my other SS as well - Summer love.

I'm glad you wrote back. If you read the last line of this chapter, I think it's pretty clear. Ayaan realizes it's over. 😆 Just like you said!

I will write again next week - it took me 3 hours on average to write 3 chapters. About 1200 - 1500 words each!

So the earliest I will update is next week. Until then, enjoy the stuff that Del and I have written. Hope you like the new updates.

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adeeti10

@adeeti10

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Posted: 12 years ago

#474

Originally posted by: sparikh
U r hitting some good home truths! Keep it up; really enjoyed last few ch...

-Sona

Thanks Sona!

Yeah it's important. I think deep down despite his edginess, Asad has his heart in the right place. And Ayaan was always a jerk. Zo never realized it!

It's important these home truths be conveyed. We don't get to hear these often enough! 😉

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adeeti10

@adeeti10

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Posted: 12 years ago

#475

Originally posted by: antara2309
Fabulous chapter!!! aayaan is such a **stard!Loved the way u pointed out sum important social messages.

Thanks Antara... glad you liked the social messages... I wasn't sure if I should include them as I didn't want to preach! But I'm glad I did... a lot of people wrote back appreciating it.

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adeeti10

@adeeti10

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Posted: 12 years ago

#476

Originally posted by: darkangel93
lol ayan got busted!!!! i love this ss of urs!!! i keep checkin for updates... continue soon!!!

Thanks darkangel!

Ayaan deserved it! I'm doing PMs once a week after a weekly update. So you'll have the message delivered to your inbox now on 😊

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janestone6

@janestone6

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Posted: 12 years ago

#477

Finally you updated this one.🤗

One of my favourite SS.

I love this Asad. So calm and polite to his guest. Wish to see something like this in the serial. It contained a great message :)

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Sophia

@sophie420

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Posted: 12 years ago

#478

Awesome update!
Glad Ayaan got busted and realized he is Zoya's past!

Thanks for the pm!

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Anjinie

@Anjinie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#479

I hope that was the last of Ayan. somebody should smack him for saying those thing about Zoya. loved Asad reply to him. and it is gud that Zoya heard for helfself what Ayan had saidm looking forward to the next part. thanks

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Barayah

@irock321

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Posted: 12 years ago

#480

I absolutely loved this ...Asad cares sooo much for her. He knows the truth and plus he knows that he also has a past ...and pasts aren't always good ...they are obvs meant to be in the past. I really jsut loved it how he stood up for her and not let her go like some other guy would do ..like Ayaan. Their relationship is just mesmerizing! I can't wait for the show to finally become like this when he won't be ashamed to be with her. Unfortunately, he's being a bit of a douche! xD LOL Thanks for the PM :))