AsYa SS: T.L.C. Chap 16, pg 100

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Prem4everRamsha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#401

Loved it! Great job with the chapter, it really shows how much they care for each other. I'd actually love to see the insecure side of Zoya like you showed a glimpse of in this chapter, so that Asad can help her. It was quite different and really nice to read :)

Update soon!

Ramsha

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Nim

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Posted: 12 years ago

#402

excellent part Dee. it was so different from the previous part yet reality based. it showed da other emotions Asad & Zoya hold for each other. it was attraction, desire n passion last time but dis time it was care, support n mutual understanding, n dis is wats required for a relationship to move ahead widout faltering. i hope now it'l b easy to face Ayann n discover Zo's abbu's identity wen Asad's wid her, along wid the consents of their mothers.

cont soon n thanx for a long chapter. i hope u wnt take dis long againg for updating.

love,

Nimra.

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kandygrover

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Posted: 12 years ago

#403

Loved it... Aww poor zoya got hurt... Thank you for the pm.

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Tanzia Scott

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Posted: 12 years ago

#404

AWW this was so sweet.

I totally loved it . I love the way these two communicate, wish it could be like this in the show.

Beautiful, Absolutely fantastic.

Please update soon

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npatel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#405

This was so beautiful. Your write so well. I have read this SS a million times. Every time I read it, its like im reading a new SS.

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delena90

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Posted: 12 years ago

#406

This was a really sweet update. I like that they both realize that labels are not important. It's touching and heartfelt. Loved the update, Dee! 🤗

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noesha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#407

This is beautiful! I read all parts in one go! You are extreemly talented.. plz update soon 😃

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kriti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#408

this is my fav. ff

awsomeee

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Arnavdewaani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#409

its so honest, they dont know whether this is love but they do share a strong bond and want to move ahead with it...beautiful

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e_enigma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#410

I love this! Do I need to say more? Okay, maybe a little more :P

So I love the fact that they aren't defining their relationship. But at the same time promising to be there for each other. I love that back story you gave Zoya about the hotel and what not.

Hence...love it!