AsYa SS: T.L.C. Chap 16, pg 100 - Page 42

Originally posted by: Prem4everRamsha

Loved it! Great job with the chapter, it really shows how much they care for each other. I'd actually love to see the insecure side of Zoya like you showed a glimpse of in this chapter, so that Asad can help her. It was quite different and really nice to read :)

Update soon!

Ramsha

Originally posted by: Rarepearl

excellent part Dee. it was so different from the previous part yet reality based. it showed da other emotions Asad & Zoya hold for each other. it was attraction, desire n passion last time but dis time it was care, support n mutual understanding, n dis is wats required for a relationship to move ahead widout faltering. i hope now it'l b easy to face Ayann n discover Zo's abbu's identity wen Asad's wid her, along wid the consents of their mothers.

cont soon n thanx for a long chapter. i hope u wnt take dis long againg for updating.

love,

Nimra.

Originally posted by: latanzia

AWW this was so sweet.

I totally loved it . I love the way these two communicate, wish it could be like this in the show.

Beautiful, Absolutely fantastic.

Please update soon

Originally posted by: npatel

This was so beautiful. Your write so well. I have read this SS a million times. Every time I read it, its like im reading a new SS.

Originally posted by: delena90

This was a really sweet update. I like that they both realize that labels are not important. It's touching and heartfelt. Loved the update, Dee! 🤗

Originally posted by: --Kriti--

this is my fav. ff

awsomeee

Originally posted by: Arnavdewaani

its so honest, they dont know whether this is love but they do share a strong bond and want to move ahead with it...beautiful

Originally posted by: e_enigma

I love this! Do I need to say more? Okay, maybe a little more :P

So I love the fact that they aren't defining their relationship. But at the same time promising to be there for each other. I love that back story you gave Zoya about the hotel and what not.

Hence...love it!