And so the Lion fought for his Lioness - Page 5

Originally posted by: adeeti10

Great analysis Ankita!

Loved the way you analysed it. In fact, I think you've given this scene more than its due! Well, I mean you've got it bang on in terms of what they were trying to convey but some things didn't just cut it for me.

1. Asad asks Zoya "Are you ok?" - would have been more impactful if they showed his hand trying to reach her to help out first, and then Zoya shunning it.

2. Zoya's reaction: mainly her body language when she says "Allah Miya, what's wrong with you?" - the shrug was not typical of someone who had been slapped and was in a dangerous situation. Agreed she's spunky, but even the most brave of us all would be a bit unnerved by this.

It would have been more realistic if she was shocked on seeing him there, after all, it's not like she was expecting him there, was she?

3. Goons typically aren't gentlemanly enough to wait till their victim and her rescuer finish their dialogues but these guys were rather polite 😉

4. When Asad pulls her behind him - it would've been awesome if she looked at him in wonder cos after all this girl has fought her battles herself until now and that's why it didn't occur to her to hide behind him

5. All the extra pauses when they're in each other's arms could have been shortened to give us a post fight scene

The poor guy got hit on the head by a beer bottle - her concern, maybe reaching out to ask if he's ok. Him shrugging her concern off

What also irked me a bit is that it would be realistic to show Asad needing medical care - he was bleeding. At least a band aid for god's sake! 😉 The next morning at his place, it seems like he wasn't in a fight at all! 😕

I loved the rest of it though, but these things would have made a GOOD scene PERFECT for me! 👏

Originally posted by: ..Gowri..

Oops! Sorry guys fr butting in..! Another EHM member here!

@Anki : LOL, was getting possessive of ma VirMan spammer! So came to catch hold of ur ears & drag you back to EHM forum!!😆😆😆

Bt wen i came here, I saw ur post had 49 likes & LOL I ended up liking the post to take u to a half century!😛!

On the post, well i dont watch QH, But from anki's post & from the pics.. They indeed look like the lion & his lioness... The looks fierce, the arrogance pierce & yet, the passion reverberating!!

PS: Anki..Should i think of another title, eah???

Originally posted by: Noe123

Agree with all the points you have raised. Many nuances were missing which could have made scene not only realistic but also fantastic.

And, Zoya should have said 'Thank You'. Not many guys would take a bottle on your head for you. Akad, zid all things on one side and basic manners on one side. But, Zoya baby has her own faults. Hope she will learn.