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Posted: 12 years ago
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Dear soumya18

Thank you for the concern

Found it rude not to reply so came only for this

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Dear SacredLove

Thank you for the concern

Found it rude not to reply so came only for this

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Dear abhiyakreya

Thank you for the concern

Found it rude not to reply so came only for this

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Dear memebers,

Please update your stories quickly

It is the only way to beat the boredom when I can't write

Would love to read the updates on Our AsYa

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 13


Mr. and Mrs. Asad Ahmad Khan were in the washroom enjoying their respective baths and the view in front of their eyes. Down below Dilshaad and Najma returned from their dinner. They freshen up. There was a dim light in AsYa room. They assumed that they were awake and working on some important work. Dilshaad knows that Asad likes to have a coffee when he is tesened. He was tensed about Zoya's past and the hurt it could cause her. She wanted to speak with him about taking cautious steps while searching for Zoya's past. She comes up to their room and calls for Asad from outside and asks for a coffee. He said," Haan ammi main shower le raha hoon Thodi der mein aata hoon." As the washroom door was open the voice could travel. She left. Najma always took Z Bhabhi's help in every college project of hers. She was more a friend than a S-I-L to Zoya. The very next second Najma came to the door and called out for Zoya, "Z bhabhi college ka kuch art work hai aap meri help kar dengi?" "Haan Najma main bath le rahi hoon thodi der mein aati hoon."

Asad shockingly propped his head out from the shower area. His eyes were bigger than the saucers accompanying the cups in his house. He looked baffled and almost scolded Zoya. "Kya kar rahi hai aap? Maine abhi ammi se kaha main shower main hoon. Aur aapne Najma se kaha aap bath le rahi hain. Dono ne aapas mein baat ki toh? Kya sochengi ammi anur Najma?" "Main kya karroon? Main pehle bath lene aayi thi phir aap aaye. So the bathroom is first mine. Aap kyun aaye andar?" She was a little miffed and blushed too.

Asad was reminded of the times she would say 'First come first serve'. Both of them quickly finished their bathing. Asad was still in some naughty mood but Zoya was really scared and nervous. While getting dressed he tried his naughty and devious ways with her. She was too quick to slap his hand away. "Later I promise." They got ready and went down stairs. "Allah Miyan bacha lijiye humara raaz na khul jaye." They both prayed with every step they took. Their prayer was answered. All four of them had coffee. They chit chatted about the day they had. Asad filled in both Dilshaad and Najma with the details of their upcoming quest.

The pic of the monument was very old but Dilshaad sort of recognized it. It was a monument near the old lake. Zoya said,"Main kal hi jaakar wahan ke sab monuments check kar leti hoon." "Nahi Zoya B aapko jaane ki zaroorat nahi hai." He asked Najma to get his laptop and explained to Zoya that they could check it out right now on the net. They found the monument. Asad told them that ammi's house was behind this monument which was a very old dargah. They were one step closer to her past and the man who ruined it.

Next day Asad and Zoya decide to meet after his office at a coffee shop and then go look for the Photo studio. While Zoya was crossing the road her attention was on Asad and she was almost hit by a car. Asad ran towards her like a crazy man. The man in the back seat was scared to death to see Zoya. She did not notice him and his fear. Zoya was dressed in a salwaar suit with her head covered. The man saw Zoya and Asad. Asad saw the man and his car. He saw his white face which had sheer fear on his face. Asad and Zoya move towards the coffee shop. They sip their coffee and searched the net for the studio. They got the address from an archive site of vintage palaces in BHOPAL. They visited the place where the studio should have been but instead there was a boutique there.

They asked the boutique owner about the photo studio but it was way before her time. The shop was a rental and had changed many hands in the last 20 years. It turned out to be a dead end. Asad was into construction and property dealership so he had some contacts to assist him. It would take some time and patience. Asad and Zoya comforted one another and made a pact not to loose hope. The people on the quest for the truth have to face test, failure and challenge at every step. When a door closes many windows open. One such window would open but Asad had to recognize it.

They were distracted by Ayaan's call asking about the lunch treat. Asad wanted to postpone but Zoya signed him not to. Asad told Ayaan they they would go for the lunch treat the next day. Ayaan told him that abbu grilled him about his and Zoya's relation but he did not disclose anything as per Asad's instructions. Fine he will deal with it when time comes Asad told his baby bro. "Bahijaan ek aur tension hai." Ayaan said. "Theek hai kal milo baat karte hain." "Nahi bhai bhabhi aur tazaa khabar waaliyon ki maujoodgi mein nahi." "theek hai parso subah hummari jagah par milo." Asad fixed a bhai date with Ayaan.

Later on in the evening Asad was in the lawn and Questions were raised in his mind. Why was HE scared to see Zoya? Was it because HIS car hit her? Or was it something else?

On the other side of the city in a big haveli Questions were raised in that man's mind. How can she be alive? No can't be She is so young? She looks just like her? Could she be her daughter? Could she be MY daughter? How did she survive? What if my family finds out?

Edited by chahat11 - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
#86
I am shuridh.
I hope you are well now.
Superb update.
I suspect the man is ayan's mamujan.
continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey dear awesome part love it
hope ur ok now?
Do cont. Soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88
Beautifully written
New Twist? superb
Continue soon <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kriti_rox

I knw the man is mamujaan



even i m having the same feeling...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
nice ff. I like it so much. Loved how you portrait AsYa's characters.
They don't need anybody else when they are with each other.
cont soon.
pls pm me when you update.

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