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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome plz do continue soon =)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey Amaazing start loved it
i also like them both
pls pm me for the next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: AnjaliSharma



Can u please pm me when u update!!?? Pleasee!


Why wouldn't I message you? Just keep on replying after my each update to get message by me.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: disha_Maan.GC

this is really beautiful misti...
do continue sooonnn... m already loving it...😳


Thank you Disha (I hope I am correct)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ARHI-SKLOVERS

nice ff plz pm me when u will update


Don't worry I will
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I made note of it. Don't worry.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweet1210

Hey Amaazing start loved it

i also like them both
pls pm me for the next part


Thank you sweetie
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Gosh! I never knew I would get appreciated by many response. It mean so much to me.
thank you so much guys.

Please note if you like to get message from me than please reply after my each updater otherwise I might miss messaging the people want to get a message.

Part 2

~ Dilshaad Assuring Zeenat and Anwar ~

Zeenat shared her concern with Dilshaad Auntie about Zoya and her childish behaviour..

Dilshaad: Don't worry Beta (she look at Zoya talking with Najma) now Zoya is apart of our family.

Zeenat felt relief after hearing Dilshaad Auntie. She silent pray to her Allah to keep her sister happy in her marital life.

Dilshaad saw her son looking at her and she understood him.

Zeenat: Auntie, what are you thinking?

Dilshaad: I think we should proceed toward our destination and complete our further rituals at home otherwise Asad going to be upset since he have early morning meeting.

Zeenat: After Nikaah Asad going to work? I thought he's going to take some time off from work and spend time with his newly wedded wife.

Dilshaad: Actually its very important meeting. He tried to reschedule his appointments and mostly them are reschedule, but this meeting he couldn't because the foreign delicate are coming from London.

Zeenat: Oh! Its alright. We should proceed with further rituals. I just inform Anwar to bring Zoya's belonging.

Dilshaad: Okay.

Dilshaad excuse herself and inform Asad about the leaving arrangement. He gave his keys to his mother and her mother took Anwar toward their vehicle. He place Zoya's belonging inside the vehicle. Dilshaad surprise knowing Zoya is taking only three suitcase otherwise some take more than enough.

Anwar: Zoya is sensible girl. She always bring materials that important to her and if she need something more she always buy them.

Dilshaad just smile because she knew feeling of sending a daughter away keep feeling of worried in hearts of her family.

Anwar: Auntie, Zoya have always been closer to me. I know she's very childish and if she make any mistake please forgive her.

Dilshaad: Don't worry about her. She's apart of the family now and its our responsibility to take care of her now. I promise you that Zoya is now my daughter and her smile means everything to us.

Anwar felt relax after hearing Asad's mother and knew inside his heart Zoya is going to be very happy in her sasural.

~ Zoya's Vidaai ~

{I am not sure what happens after a Nikaah, but I believe every girl have right to cry on her family's shoulder before stepping into her new life}

Zoya crying on her Aapi's shoulder "Aapi, mujhe aap ki bahut kami mehsoos hogi" Zeenat controlling herself and assure Zoya everything going to be fine.

Zoya: Juju

Anwar hugged Zoya tightly "always remember you are heart beat of our lives and never stop believing in yourself. Always take care of your in-laws and never give them any chance to complain" Zoya agreed to her Juju. She kept on crying, but control herself.

Anwar asked Asad to take care of their Zoya after Zoya sat inside the car. Zoya look at her Aapi from the window for last time before she couldn't she them anymore.

Asad drove silently toward his home. Dilshaad and Najma trying to cheer Zoya up..

~ Arrival at Zoya's Sasural and Asad's home ~

Zeenat told Najma to take Zoya to her room.

Najma Jee Ammi

Najma took Zoya with her to Asad's room. Najma assist Zoya on Asad's bed than left her room. Zoya sat on the bed wondering "honestly I don't know who Aapi chose for me. At that moment I agreed, but now I am feeling weird because I haven't seen his face and yet I have feeling I know him. How can I feel that?" she shared her confuse state with her Allah. Only her Allah know what's going to happen tonight.

~ Asad conversation with his Ammi ~

Asad stood outside his garden looking at the moon. Many question developing inside his mind regarding his marriage.

Dilshaad saw her son standing outside and knew what's bothering him. She decide to chat with her son and clear his doubts. She went outside and tap Asad's shoulder.

Asad look at her.

Dilshaad: What's the matter?

Asad: Ammi haven't agreed for this marriage, but still I have some doubts. What if I make same mistake Abbu done? Since his blood runs in my vein.

Dilshaad made Asad sit with her on the swing and cup his face "Asad if his blood runs in your vein than your Ammi's blood also run in your veins and I have faith in my son. He won't make same mistake as his Abbu done." Asad stare at his Ammi for some time before stating his confusion. Dilshaad again assure him that she trusts him and have faith in her upbringing.

Asad: Par Ammi

Dilshaad cover his lip with her finger "now enough of talking. Zoya must be waiting for you and don't forget you have early morning meeting with your clients" Asad agreed with his Ammi and left for his room.

Dilshaad pray silently to her Allah for keeping her children happy with his blessing and always show them correct path in life.

~ Asad entering his room ~

Zoya kept on complaining to her Allah Mian about her heavy bridal wear and plus her jewelries are more heavy than her clothes. She kept on cursing her husband who is taken forever to come (Zoya is pacing back n forth) because she wants to change and her belongings are inside his vehicle.

Asad turn the knob to enter his room. Once he open the door he found it weird and stare at his wife.

Zoya kept on walking forward without looking at her surrounding and collide into Asad.

Asad with quick reflex caught her. He try looking at her face, but her face is covered by flocks of her hair.

Zoya wiggle in her husband's grip. She flick her hair away "Allah Mian What's wrong" she froze after snapping. She couldn't believe her eyes "tum" Asad couldn't believe his luck "Aap"

Zoya: It can't be

Asad: great!

He drop Zoya on the floor in shock.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
OMG It was awesome!!
He actually dropped her on the floor out of shock 😲😆
Thnx for the pm!! Waiting for the next part :P
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanks for the pm
I am reserving my sport
I will back, after I cook dinner and make sev

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OMG what a update👏

Allah Miyaa what his wrong with Asad, dropping his newly wedded bibi/bride out of shock 🤣 I really can picture that happening on the show😆😆😆

I really hate bidaai, it is really just😭

I always think that even though Zoya is childish she knows how to cook the basic and she has feminine mature side than she let on. I hope in your story, she knows how to cook. 😆 Sometimes I hate Indian tv serials that always show Desi girls no matter what religion in bad limelight like rich/spoil/ and they don't know how to cook. Which is not true

I really enjoyed reading your beautiful ff, keep writing 😊 Your update brought a smile on my face😛
Edited by *Piku* - 12 years ago

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