AsYa..FF - Qubool Hai - Pa5/Pg23 - 12/27/12

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Guys

I am in love.

Yep, I am in love with Asad and Zoya. I just adore their bickering contrast relationship. After first week of Qubool Hai I have many hopes with this show and its storyline.

I am back with sizzling another fiction on AsYa. I hope you'll like it. I ain't going to waste time explain the characters because they are same as the show; but starting of my fiction is different.

Personally I am Hindu so please forgive me if I can't write some words properly or describe the event properly.

Thank You
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Teaser 1 Qazi (I believe its a priest) asking a guy "kya apko Zoya Qubool Hai"

he asked three times.

Index of Qubool Hai

- Teaser 1 (Above)
- Part 1 (Page 1)
- Part 2 (Page 7)
- Part 3 (Page 13)
- Part 4 (Page 19)
- Part 5 (Page 23)
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Please forgive me if I made any mistake.

Part 1

Big mansion shown inside that mansion three people live and its special day for Zeenat and her husband Anwar. After many difficulties Zoya finally agreed to get married and settle down in her life.

~ Zoya's Room ~

Zoya sat on her bed...

She look completely confuse and wondering if she token right choice of getting married and stopping half way in her quest finding the answers to her question she came from New York.

Zoya sigh.

~ Welcoming the Groom ~

Anwar welcome the groom and his family (only his mother and sister). Many people kept on asking about the groom's father. Groom is controlling his anger by turn his hand into fist.

His mother notice him and place her hand on top of his shoulder "Asad" he slowly calming himself down after hearing his mother's voice.

Asad sighed.

Anwar brought Asad toward the stage surrounded by many males. Asad sat down between those males (since males are separated by curtain from the females) and silently hoping for the rituals happen quickly. He can't tolerate people assuming things without knowing the reason behind it. He hasn't seen his father pass 17yrs and doesn't want to meet him either.

~ Zoya brought down for her Nikaah ~

Zeenat gone to bring Zoya down. Its time for the Nikaah to take place. Inside Zoya's room..

Zeenat have emotional talk with Zoya.

Zoya has tears streaming down her face. She hugged Aapi tightly and shared her nervous with her.

Zeenat assured her that everything is going to be fine after this Nikaah and her husband is great companion for her.

Zeenat clear her tears and cover her face with the duppata than brought her down where everyone is waiting for her.

~ Nikaah Ceremony ~

{Sorry friends I am Hindu so I am going to write it shortly. Please forgive me if I make a mistake.}

Qazi stating some facts before asking Asad "Asad Ahmed Khan apko kya Zoya Qubool Hai" Asad close his eyes and recall his conservation with his mother. Qazi repeat himself twice.

Asad open his eyes "Qubool Hai" repeated himself three times afterwards Qazi question Zoya "Kya apko Asad Ahmed Khan Qubool Hai" Zoya looking at her Juju than her Aapi.

Zoya sighing and closed her eyes. She can hear the Qazi repeating himself several times. Zoya herself is very confuse (her mind telling her to remain quiet and her heart telling her to accept the Nikaah) her heart won against the confusion.

Her Aapi looking at her worriedly.

Zoya heard the Qazi repeating himself last time. Zoya slowly open her eyes and directly look at her Aapi "Qubool Hai" she repeated herself three times. Everyone cheer in happiness and congratulation one another. Zoya's Aapi looked extremely happy.

Zoya smile at her Aapi.

Please leave behind your comments and let me know if I should continue.

Thanks
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This is just a beautiful piecešŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘ I am in love with your writing and storyline
šŸ‘Mujhe bi apki ff qubool haišŸ˜³šŸ˜†
Please pm, when you update

Please write soon😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing start!!
Pls add me to the pm list :P
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey Iam new to this forum and I saw ur FF now...its really amazing tht just after 1 week episode ppl are able to write long FF based on the same story line...u are so talented...šŸ‘šŸ‘
actually in serial they are not gonna show the ASAD-ZOYA marriage so soon, but thanks to ur FF we can see them married since episode 1 itself...😊😊
please add me to the PM list and do notify about any further updates...
😃😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing work dear...šŸ‘
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I would say mujhe Aapka ff qubool hai :)
Lovely start :) wud luv to read more :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This is beautifully written, loved the way u right :-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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beutiful piece of work dear
loved it
continue soon...
n pls pm me...

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