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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: mijanur
Superb update.
I like it very much.

Thank You.😃

Originally posted by: ShonaKSGian
OMG! It was so cutee !
loved it !
continue soon !

Thanks alot..😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: nimmycub
hahahaha so filmi and spontaneous zoya is. i loved it. thankyou so much for the pm. plz continue soon.

Thanks alot.😃 Haha yeah Zoya is very filmy, I wanted her to be really filmi in my Short story.😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: hiddenpearl
Hey..you write so well...this chapter was so much fun...even i was surprised when she said FRIENDS...and their next meeting tat was so typical of this angry young man to scold girl like this but the best part is tat phone cal...they are friends...and they are going to meet again...loved it...awesome...love to read more...thanks for the pm...update soon

Thank Youuu so much dear.😃

Haha, there is a reason why she is getting so friendly with Asad.
Yeah typical, but also showed he has no experience how to talk to girls.😆😆

Once again thanks alot, and will surely write soon.😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: risingsea101
I love Asad's Attitude.
The Part was to die for.
Asad and Zoya friends...YES!
Totally Opposite
Continue soon
<3

Haha Asad's attitude is just great. He is really nice from inside.😃

Thank You Soo Much , thanks alot for the comment, and will surely continue writing soon.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: prava55663
awesome..loved the way he asked her mujhse dosti karoge...he he..liked it..
thanks for pm

That was a song lyrics actually, continued with 'sochongi, soch ke kal parso bolongi'.😆😃

Thanks for the appreciation.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: ApurvaLovesARVI
wow super duper great update...loved it...

Thanks Alot for the comment.😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: Mojo.
The update was very nice and a really cute one <3 Love it. Ty for the pm :)

Thanks alot.😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: -Hiralious-
Lemme start with the first chapter. This was totally awesome. Loved it to core. The way you started the chapter was amazing. His conversation to himself is really funny and sweet. Totally liked their first encounter. Wonder why she does that.
Now moving to the second chapter, this one was amazing as well. Zoya wants to become his friend so soon is kinda suspenseful. But there conversation was hilarious. She is a damn clever girl, no actually, I am dumb! This line is hilarious 😆
He insulted her in front of everyone Argh but nevertheless, he apologized and actually cared awwh. And he says okay yaar in the end :P and yay they are meeting again. Can't wait to read that :)
Really great start. Both the chapters are very well-written. DO continue soon and definitely PM me about every update.

HIRAAA 🤗

I am so sorry I am replying you all in the end, but pehle un sab ko reply karna tha who read OS so much and are commenting..😃😃 Khair, so yeah I was waiting for your comment and U commented.. I dunno I always want more of your comments 🤣 i guess tum kanjoosi bohut karti ho ya apne haath nahin dukhana chahti tu isliye less likh deti ho 🤣 haha not ur fault, I demand long comments 🤣

Okay so yeah, thanks alot for commenting 🤗 haan suspense tu hain us mein, lekin mein khud nahin janti kya suspense hain 🤣 I am randomly writing yaar. 🤣

He said 'Yaar' because he wanted to prove ke now he has no prob with Yaar and all, as Zoya - his friend says it. haha the dumb waala dialogue also I liked alot 😆

haan wo shouting was really bad, but I included ke kyunke I wanted to show his inexperience incase of girls.