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Okay so I have continued with my writing after an year or so😆 , and god knows how I wrote, but I felt like writing on Asad-Zoya, so I wrote.
Its a short story.
@Mods : Didn't know about rules of SS, FF or OS, so can transfer into FF section if its against rules.😊

and yes, here is it..

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Chapter 1

I sat on the burning sad, so that they could not only swallow my feet but my body also. Don't know why but I felt like getting absorbed into the coffee sprayed little grains that had engulfed the pavement to the royal indigo creamed water and before that to the twirling waves trotting together. The golden round shaped sun continued to pour his luminous sensation on me. Acting like a tough guy, I raised my eyebrows to fight back with the sun, but I failed. The bright natured sun continued with his rays. Sometimes, arrogance makes one act like a child. Haha!! Wait, I actually smiled? That's quite shocking for me. Hey, wait! I agree sometimes arrogance makes one act like a child, but fewer times, stupidity, immaturity, and idiocity ' I don't care if such word doesn't exist in English Language Dictionary ' makes one act like a child. For instance, that girl Zoya who is standing totally right of me, waving at her friends and doing crazy acts. Don't mistake this encounter as the first one. I have already met her before, and don't ask how! Well I'll say, but a long story, and yeah, don't blame me if your head start to spin in the utmost velocity because I know this is the consequence of hearing her crazy story.

On one fine evening, when the sun had set, I was with my family in the RA Shopping Mall and this lady just bumped into me telling me the usual dialogue 'Mein tumhare bache ki maa banne waali ho' and I was just bomb shelled. I was totally shocked a girl coming to me and saying this crappy dialogue. I mean, I never had any girl as a friend also. By me, I mean Asad Ahmed Khan. My mother and my sister started laughing at that thinking it's a joke, Ayaan joined too. As soon as I could react, she just ran away from there in 0.02 seconds like a cheetah.

So yeah, I couldn't miss this awesome opportunity to take revenge. I started to approach her, keeping every step slowly and deeply. My feet started to sink, but controlled the movements. I was just one step away from her that I fell on my knees.

'Dekho tum chor ke math jaaon mujhe, tum jo kahogi mein karoonga, hamare bache ka tu khyal karo'.
'BACHAA?' her mom interrogated being astound.
'Nahin maa, ye bakwaas karaha hain', said she getting nervous.
'Bakwas? Jaan tum meri baaton ko bakwaas keh rahi ho. Theek hain mein Ahmed ko keh deta ho mama nahin arahi ;) Bye!'

I then came back to my old place and sat. I saw her from a very distance, she was trying to convince her mother, but her mother did just not understand anything. She finally controlled her hyper mom. Made me remember the quote, like mother, like daughter. Haha! And with this Asad Ahmed Khan aka me laughed twice. ;)


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter List

Chapter 1 : Page 1
Chapter 2 : Page 5
Chapter 3- Page 11
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Wow!! This is awesome!!
Pls add me :)
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Love the update.pleas add me.
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Originally posted by: TheDarkKnight

Wow!! This is awesome!!

Pls add me :)


Thank You. 😃
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Originally posted by: mijanur

Love the update.pleas add me.


Thanks alot. 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMGGG thank you

i wanted to read FF/SS/OS on AsYa

YOU MADE MY DAY...!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: kritzksgian

OMGGG thank you


i wanted to read FF/SS/OS on AsYa

YOU MADE MY DAY...!!!!!!!!!!!!


Aww my pleasure..😳
And yes I have got a reader like you, thank you.😃
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WOW!! I really loved it!
plzz add me too in ur pm list
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Originally posted by: Princezz22


Aww my pleasure..😳
And yes I have got a reader like you, thank you.😃


completely my pleassure...i was craving like hungry beast for AsYa FF...😳

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