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Posted: 9 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: Let-It-Go

Everything is a mess basically. CVs are trying to serve to many dishes in a plate which makes it distasteful.

Naina gurl is defo a way for Ishaan and Preet to come closer but it could have been done sensibly than makjng that gurl do downright idiotic things.
Bebe needs to calm down now.. For few episodes it was fine but now water has crossed the bridge. She is being an intrusion or merely a pawm for keeping Meghna parents for few more days in Hooda Dharamshala.
Shabnam..well she was most decent out of my all hated characters. She did what she was suppose to do but it was baseline.
Shergill, interesting entry but as I said, He is coming when already three four parallel tracks are running..which makes it even more cumbersome to adjust his screenspace among dancing jokers.

Preet and Ishaan, well honestly, they might be in the worst phase of their relationship where one tries to talk and another is snubbing it gloriously and the very next dori scene makes Preet ti forget everything and she smiles like a teenage Gurl.
Story needs to get a grip.. Everything was chaotic today except for Sid.



Dancing jokers ruchi.. That cracked me up ssly... 😆😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#82
Okay so i went for a walk and we cover three pages! 😆
That just shows how attached we are to this show and its characters! 😳

Anyways coming to Rizwaan i totally agree the writers need to UNDERSTAND that they cant get away with glaring loopholes every time, but my perspective today is that we have to give the benefit of doubt to the daily soap tradition. They are gonna make mistakes and destroy characters! Thats what they are famous for!😆 but for the time being, itna kuch nai hua that would make me angry or dissappointed on Rizwaan. They have given us enough background and basing to let his connect with his character.

Also Jay says the way he shook hands and the way his eyes looked, and so does Rizwaan, that is why Rizwaans facial expressions didnt bother me bcz both of them said the same thing. Also one more loop hole. RAW agents don't roam around telling everyone that we are RAW agents! Kuch tu secrecy rakho, and the general is kinda funny! 😆

and thank u payal, i love brownies, and i love this line by shelly! 😳 and jhanvi awww 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
#83
Jaanu ;)
Chalo Goodnight folks.. Had a long day today but enjoyed the exchange of idea.

Take care :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: pp29

I loved the new entry! Not so much a fan of the actor, since in Pavitra Rishta his character was very annoying, but I know he does a good job acting, so glad they chose him, plus if there was a more popular actor th

yes he was so annoying in pavitra rishta. I hated manav too though for being as spineless as he was though. No offence. 😆
Then they would have to divide screen space between him and Iqbal, which I rather not have :P

But, this RAW agent is a good new addition, to spice up and take the story forward. Better than saali Naina at least, to make Rizwan and his mission and identity and everything start working gears.
Yes its agood move and if handled properly,it will be interesting catch me if you can track. Rizwan needs to strike a balance between his real mission and the obstacles he faces thanks to his emotional turmoil. He is still an agent on a mission and does not seem to have changed his mnd either. So he better pull up his socks to counter RAW agent and try to antagonise his deeds. Then it will be fun. kis me kitna hai dum.
Mr. Shergill is so fast like Chacha Chaudhary ( whose brain works faster than a computer), he already has a doubt on Mr. Ishan. :P I'm glad they are showing RAW agent who has enough training to notice expression and handshake and know if something is off or not. Rizwan and his gang also need a solid takkar from intelligence agents on this side. So it's a good match. Dekhne mein mazza aayega.

Every hero needs a powerful nemesis to match. In this case morally hero is SHergill and villain is Rizwan and I hope shergill is powerful enough to stop the attacks on 26th Jan. But as a viewer, Rizwan is a hero and Shergill is going to chase him. :P
yes every hero or should I say anti hero needs a nemesis to reach his culmination. His retribution cant be this smooth , I hope he realises that and fights all the roadblocks to finally get his way, lets see where it takes him.


Replied in blue. But the makers need to slow down with so many new entries at a time. In two consecutive episdes two new entry in two different directions makes it look clumsy imo.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: daydreamers

Payal, tejaswini ( can I call you teju?) 😛 kitna likh re ho 😆

And kya likh re ho? 😕 sorry didn't read ab tak...

The whole show is giving me an impression ki riz ko ekdum bechari gaay banake chod re h 😆

But let's understand this... I ges I had posted it earlier also...

Preet and huddas have kept the 6 year old alive..and very unfortunately he has attached to them emotionally...

Its not that he hasn't got a perfect training instead "rizwan ka dil dhadakne laga hai" kya dialogue tha atif ka.. Gives out a lot...

And today's

"Itne Saalon se huddas ko bewakuf bana rahe ho" 😛

Bahot bada pointer h...
Kal tak I got a feel ki may be preet will be trapped in everything... The camp will successfully evict riz from there and very cleverly frame preet in everything...

But aj k raw agent ki entry has again twisted things... Let's c what more v have

Jus my pov didn't read ur posts yet so maafi


kuch nahi likh rahi thi! 😛 bas ek khayal aaya and i was trying to trace that. 😆 this naina woman went on and on about IshMegh's morning routine of yoga and waking up together and spending cosy time in the morning...this was all after marriage. naina and co hadn't seen IshMegh since their elopement so how in the hell did she know all this? she's not seen or heard from her sister for YEARS and she knew all this about her married life? 😕

call me teju, tej, tejas...anything! 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#86
Teju its a fake planted live bomb...
Kahi atif ne toh kiya nahi?

Cz he was quite chilled out when riz came and told about his so called saali
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Posted: 9 years ago
#87
Also i believe that if Jay Shergill sensed something amiss about Rizwaan then so did Rizwaan. If Rizwaan gave himself away then so did Jay. Mtlb he couldn't act cool or keep Rizwaan off the guard. Rizwaan is totally alert on him, maybe this is the reason that scene didn't bother me. Yes Jay tried to act smart by keeping a straight face but that didnt help.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: daydreamers

Teju its a fake planted live bomb...

Kahi atif ne toh kiya nahi?

Cz he was quite chilled out when riz came and told about his so called saali


i actually thought so too! but then Atif knowing how to play Preet's insecurities so well...idk. and also endangering their mission like this...😲 but then again kuch bhi ho sakhta hain. i just want sid to b safe from this idiot.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#89

Originally posted by: Let-It-Go


Preet's past should have been the turning point of the entire story according to me.. Because it had everything to turn Rizwaan against his own people ( Obviously by then Rizwaan should have been totally, madly in love with Preet) but i guess it was revealed way to early to impact the story much and now it is just another painful past.

ok here is my take. The things are happening in rapid succession, its okay till the tracks are given bit time to settle down and have some space to breathe its own. Its like one after the other. There is no time given to sink in the emotions, the situations, the transitions from one phase of relationship to the other. It lacks fluidity imho. Rizwan felt the angst knowing her past getting linked with his people. he impulsively confronts Aatif, comes back , and in a jiffy admits who he is, which readily gets brushed off as a joke. No significant space for the scenes to have its impact. isn't it? Then he wants to distance himself which gets washed away in hurry when preet lands up in trouble. then why to even show the distancing Rizwan and Preet feeling sad. from there, Preet wants to atke the relationship forward, Rizwan get boosted by sana and becomes all romantic nd inhibitionless forgetting all his conflicts. Ok its his impulses, his desires, not mch contro over that, but that too gets brushed off in the same scene by entry of another grom his past. He now becomes indifferent to the same person whom he was romancing few minutes back,. so why even bother to create the situation ? now when they plan to show the insecurities cropping up in the relationship , here comes an agent to with another mission. Rizwan and Preet relation and its dynamics in a second becomes insignificant from this angle as Rizwan wants to succeed in his mission by hook or by crrok. I mean whats the central track regarding the protagonist? Please care to explain cvs.
don't know whts the root cause of this jumbled up execution but hope it gets its grip quickly as the show does have much potential and the leads character sketch and the actors are top notch.
Edited by pinkeye - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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@Fantasia Rizwaan knows that Jay is a RAW agent.And then Bade papa mentioned about 26th Jan plan.That's what made him alert.
Jay on the other hand doesn't know about Ishaan being Rizwaan...still he doubted him!That's where I liked him..He's a secret agent and behaved like one!

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