PaYa FF My Boss ..ch 4 (a)! updated 11may

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lovepkdh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: NISHADEEP
Please continue!!!!! Please don't stop!!!! I liked your first chapter!!! Please carry on I will always read

Thank u sooo much (NISHADEEP)... u have always been so encouraging ! love u ! :) will surely post ch 2 verrry soon :)

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: lovepkdh
Thank u sooo much (NISHADEEP)... u have always been so encouraging ! love u ! :) will surely post ch 2 verrry soon :)

aaw...😳 its ok u r a great writer😃

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lovepkdh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

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Chapter 2 (a) !!-

After half n hour...Pankhuri in her cabin ...Working when she gets a call on her desk..

p: hello

a: Pankhur come to ma cabin rite now...aur voh mehta n sons vaali file le aao

p: yes sir

In Adi"s cabin

a knock is heard...

a: come in

p:yeh lijiye sir

a:thanks...so do u have ny suggestions on this bid pankhuri?

p:(surprised) sir! ... i mean...voh ... aap...mujhe...

a:kya hua ?kucch galat kaha kya maine?

p: no sir...not at all..but main toh sirf aapki PA hoon ...main kaise

a: (smiles) pankhuri...i value my employees' suggestions...mujhe apni company mein sirf "yes sir" kehne vaale log nahi chahiye..so tell me ...wat did u wanna say

p;(explains her point of view) n then-

a: im impressed pankhuri.. good job :)

p: (really happy ) thank you so much sir

After a few hours ..,.its 7 pm n everybody has left for thier houses...except pankhuri ... and adi...

A; looking at his watch (to himself) arre 7 baj gaye ! mom ne toh aaj jaldi aane ko kaha tha ! shit !

he picks up his blazer n makes his way outside the office n find that pankhuri"s cabin lights are still on ...n so walks there. he opens the door to find her deeply engrossed ans immersed in work wid a pen in one hand n the other hand desperately trying to push the flick of her hair back as they wer really irritating her at the moment... he felt a sudden urge to push the hair behind n was mesmerized by the simple yet sooo enchanting lady in front of him ...

Meanwhile Pankhuri realizes somebody else's presence in d cabin and looks up to find adi loking towards her ...n is shocked at the sudden appearence of her boss

P: she panics n stans up n says-Arre sir ! aap ( and that pulls him out of his trance )

A; office hours kabke khatam ho gaye hain pankhuri ... tum yahaan itni der tak kya kar rahi ho?

p: actually sir voh mittal deals ka pending kaam wrap up kar rahi thi...tie ka pata hi nahi chala

A: (touched by her sincerity) accha par aaj ke liye itna kaafi hai...bahut der ho gayi hai...aur iss waqt tumhara akele jaane theek nahi hai...come...ill drop you...(seeing her about to protest, back in his stern n strict tone) im not asking you...its an order ...move !

Precap: car ride ...Pankhuri"s hostel...intro of Harish avantika n much more!!

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Really sweet chapter...I loved the PaYa scenes...reminded me of the old days of pkdh...

I especially liked Adis dialogue ' mujhe sirf yes sir kehne wale log nahi chahiye'

Well done!!! Keep writing!!!!

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lovepkdh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: NISHADEEP
Really sweet chapter...I loved the PaYa scenes...reminded me of the old days of pkdh...

I especially liked Adis dialogue ' mujhe sirf yes sir kehne wale log nahi chahiye'

Well done!!! Keep writing!!!!

Thank youuu 😊 ... will post next one verry soon !

Edited by lovepkdh - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: NISHADEEP
Really sweet chapter...I loved the PaYa scenes...reminded me of the old days of pkdh...

I especially liked Adis dialogue ' mujhe sirf yes sir kehne wale log nahi chahiye'

Well done!!! Keep writing!!!!

I completely agree@Nisha. Loved the PaYa scenes and for a moment I thought that we had gone back to those magical days of pkdh. Sometimes I go back and watch the epi's at the beginning of the serial and then watch what is happening now...I am forced to think that PKDH has lost it's charm.🤢

But coming back to the chapter, it was ...😳. Loved every bit of the chapter.

Edited by tragedy - 11 years ago

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lovepkdh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: tragedy

I completely agree@Nisha. Loved the PaYa scenes and for a moment I thought that we had gone back to those magical days of pkdh. Sometimes I go back and watch the epi's at the beginning of the serial and then watch what is happening now...I am forced to think that PKDH has lost it's charm.🤢

But coming back to the chapter, it was ...😳. Loved every bit of the chapter.

Thank you 😃😃...even i miss d golden days of pkdh ...

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lovepkdh

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Posted: 11 years ago

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_Nish_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#29

aaw...whats all the special thanks for now? Its ok😃 I'll always read you work

I'm loving all the PaYa moments in your FF...really wish we could see some of these in the real PKDH too...

I really love your writing and I'm serious. The cute Adi scene aaw...and you've made them all exactly like the characters in the serial but changed the story to make it more magical. Well done!👍🏼 And no need for all the big thanks!! Just keep going

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lovepkdh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: NISHADEEP
aaw...whats all the special thanks for now? Its ok😃 I'll always read you work

I'm loving all the PaYa moments in your FF...really wish we could see some of these in the real PKDH too...

I really love your writing and I'm serious. The cute Adi scene aaw...and you've made them all exactly like the characters in the serial but changed the story to make it more magical. Well done!👍🏼 And no need for all the big thanks!! Just keep going

Thank you!😊...there r lots of exciting updates in store waiting for u !!😃😃😊

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