PaYa FF My Boss ..ch 4 (a)! updated 11may

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Interesting...continue soon😃
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Good start please continue we would love to see more!
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Love it! Keep writing more!! Fabulous work girl! 👍🏼
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KEEP writing plz! we lack writers!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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So here is the most awaited 1st chapter...hope you all like it 😊 plzz do hit the like button
CHAPTER 1::
adi :come in
pankhu enters a beautiful cabin ...with not much fancy ...but perfect sophistication ...
Pankhu: Good morning Sir
Adi lifts his gaze from the file towards her and as soon as they see each other they both shriek simultanuously
Adi: tum!
Pankhu: aap!
FLASHBACK:
when Adi was returning home from a tiring day at office ..and was immensely tired ...he presses the sudden break of his car ...as he was about to hit a lady
Adi:Oh s***!
as he rushes out to see what happened he finds pankhu lifting up the old lady and helping her...
Adi:I am really sorry...
Pankhu:(cutting him) (angry) aree ! aap yeh kaise gaadi chalate hain...agar nahin chalani aati toh phir ek driver rakh lijiye naa...ameer hain toh kya raah chalte sabhi se takraate rahenge!
Adi: (now flaring up) Excuse me ...yeh kya tareekaa hai baat karne kaa...main keh raha hun naa galti ho gayi ...and im ready to compensate for it...aap iska issue kyun bana rahi hain??
Pankhu: main issue bana rahi hun! aur kya kaha aapne ...aap compensate karenge ...agar kisi ki jaan chali jaye toh kaise compensate karenge aap...ek toh aapne galti ki ,...aur ulta mujhe gussa dikha rahe hain
Old Lady: are bacchon ...kyun lad rahe ho...jaane do..(to pankhu) itni bhi zyaada chot nahi lagi beta ...tum fikr mat karo...(To Adi) koi baat nahi beta ...galti kisse nahi hoti...aur phir bas halki si chhot hai..chalo main chalti hun
Adi:nahi aunty ...phir bhi...aaiyye main aapko hospital chhod deta hun ..
Old lady : par..
Pankhu: yeh theek keh rahe hain aunty ...chaliye ...
FLASHBACK OVER
Pankhu (in her heart) Oh no! ab toh yeh mujhe iss job pe kabhi nahi rakhenge ...kitna sunaya thaa uss din inko...ohh nooo!!)
Adi : so ...tum yahaan?
Pankhu : sir main pankhuri hun...mujhe aapki PA ki job interview ke liye bulaya gaya thaa...
Adi: aur tumhe lagta hai ki..
Pankhu : (cuts him in between) I know sir maine uss din aapke saath bahut badtameezi se behave kiya...im really very sorry sir ...please sir...mujhe iss job ki bahut zaroorat hai ..aur
Adi : ek min ...ek min...pehle toh sit down and have this(hands a glass of water)
Pankhu : par
Adi: (strict tone) I said have it!
Pankhu :(scared) She gulps it down
Adi; now listen to me first...mujhe tumhara resume padhne ke baad lagta hai ki u r perfect for the job ...infact main toh yeh pooch raha thaa ki tumhe lagta hai ki tum aaj se hi kaam shuru kar paogi...
Pankhu (feeling very happy): yes sir thank u sooo much sir ...aur phir se uss din ke liye im really sorry sir ...aisi galti dobara nahi hogi
Adi: (smiles)Its fine pankhuri...I know ki voh tumhara concern tha uss waqt ...uss lady keliye...so relax ...its absolutely fine ...
Pankhu : smiles
Adi : so tumhara cabin yahi hai ...towards the left...aur tum apne work schedules ajay se collect kar sakti ho ...
Pankhu : ji sir..
PS:Continuation completely depends on the respose !
Warning: Please do not post this ff anywhere else without my permission...otherwise ill stop writing.
SPECIAL NOTE::
I would like to request you all...please help me with a banner for dis ff ...it wud be gr8 if any of you talented people can make a banner for dis ff ...And the 2nd chap will be updated only after I have the banner !!
Edited by lovepkdh - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lovely...Loved it imensly😃
Well, for the request i honestly suck at editing..soo i wont be of any use...😳
Post soon...and plzz if you could just PM me..😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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its great would love to hear next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lovely start so far, would love to see you continue! =)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow loved the starting! Loved the flashback.. I don't know why but it reminded me of the Rubal and Pankhu scene where Rubal runs over that woman and Pankhu goes mental but I also love this with Adi!
It will be interesting how their love will blossom into something special!

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