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Jezmine, what will I say! u r such a creative writer! I have become a fan of u! adi and pankuri made for each other, adi is childish,it would be hard to handle adi for pankuri,it would be hard for dadaji to give dadi's payel,I loved these lines .Feeling like l am watching a serial on tv. I can imagine all the scenes. thank u very much. waiting for next monday.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: loving77

Jezmine, what will I say! u r such a creative writer! I have become a fan of u! adi and pankuri made for each other, adi is childish,it would be hard to handle adi for pankuri,it would be hard for dadaji to give dadi's payel,I loved these lines .Feeling like l am watching a serial on tv. I can imagine all the scenes. thank u very much. waiting for next monday.


Thank you so much! I'm very glad that you can visualize the story! That's how i write anyway - i visualize and write what i would have wanted to see if this was onscreen! The fact that you can visualize it along with me means this story has successfully met its target! Do keep leaving me comments and supporting this venture! 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Sana_J.

nice...
continue this...


Thank you! Do keep reading, updates are on Mondays! 😊
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Chapter 36

Later that day, in the living room,

Dadaji: Purushottam, we are heading home now, our flight is in 4 hours.

Nanu: But Jaggu, why so fast?

Dadaji: If we don't leave now, it will be really hard for us to do so!

Avantika: I understand your concern but why don't you all stay here for a few more days?

Dadaji: Avantika Beti, thank you for the invitation but we have to go back. Besides, there are a lot of things pending and we will need to handle all of those!

Sheila: We'll miss you all!

Ambika: We'll miss you all too!

Pankhu along with the younger generation enter the living room then.

Adi: What did we miss out?

Nanu: Adi, Jaggu is leaving to Kullu later.

Adi: What?! Why?

Pankhu: Dadaji! Why didn't you tell me this at all?

Dadaji: Calm down Pankhu! We just didn't want you to feel sad!

Adi: But this is unfair Dadaji!

Dadaji: Adi, we are just going home! In fact, you can come there anytime you want!

Diwakar: Yes! Pankhu Beta, we will still be keeping in touch with you so don't worry!

Pankhu smiles weakly and excuses herself. She then heads to her room. Adi notices her behavior and follows suit.

In their room,

Adi: Pankhu, are you okay?

Pankhu: Yeah! Just a little upset that they did not tell me at all!

Adi: I know! I feel the same way too! It must be hard right? To leave your home and stay here? You know I feel so bad that I am the cause of this separation!

Pankhu: Don't be silly! It is hard but not for me! In fact, I left my home in Kullu but I came back to my home in Mumbai!

Pankhu and Adi embrace. Just then,

Knock Knock

Adi walks to the door and opens it.

Kaira: Adi Bhaiyya, Dadaji has called for you both. He is leaving for the airport now.

Adi: Let's go then!

He gestures Pankhu, who follows him.

In the living room,

Ambika: Thank you very much for the hospitality.

Avantika: This is your home too! You don't have to thank us.

Diwakar: Pankhu Beta, I'm sorry for the extremely last minute notice! We just didn't want to make you upset...

Pankhu: Don't worry Papa! I'm all okay! In fact, I went up to get this!

She shows her Selfie stick to the family.

Pankhu: I don't want to miss this opportunity to take a family picture.

Rubel: Pankhu, I can take it for you.

Pankhu: Rubel Bhaiyya, when I meant family, it includes you as well. Now, let's take a Selfie.

The whole family gathers for a few selfies. Soon, the Gupta family leave for the airport. Just as Diwakar is about to step out, he passes Adi and Pankhu an envelope and smiles at them. Once they leave, Harish does the same. Soon, the family disperses and Adi and Pankhu head back to their room.

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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update jesmine..
marriage traditions over so now pankhu's family returning to kullu..
pankhu takes selfie of all d family members...
but before leaving diwakar handed adi-pankhu an envelope & even harish gave an envelope.. wat is there in envelope? honeymoon trip??
excited for next part..
monday cum soon
continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: coolhi1988

awesome update jesmine..
marriage traditions over so now pankhu's family returning to kullu..
pankhu takes selfie of all d family members...
but before leaving diwakar handed adi-pankhu an envelope & even harish gave an envelope.. wat is there in envelope? honeymoon trip??
excited for next part..
monday cum soon
continue soon...


Keep thinking! 😉 You know i personally hate cliff hangers but this time, i just felt like doing it!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Jezmine


Keep thinking! 😉 You know i personally hate cliff hangers but this time, i just felt like doing it!

😳😳
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Chapter 37

In Adi and Pankhu's room,

Adi: I wonder what is in the envelope!

Pankhu: Me too! Let's open it up.

Adi opens the first envelope that Diwakar gave him. Adi looks at the content and smiles at Pankhu.

Pankhu: Why are you smiling?

Adi: Make a guess?

Pankhu: I don't know!

Adi: Like seriously?! If I say make a guess, then at least attempt to guess!

Pankhu: Oh come on Adi! Just give me the envelope.

Pankhu takes the envelope and looks at the contents.

Pankhu: OMG!!

The envelope contained a few papers and a letter. The letter read as such -

Dear Aditya and Pankhuri,

Congratulations on your marriage and here is your wedding gift! The forms in the envelope contains a few important details of your honeymoon package, except for your destination! You will not know the destination until you reach the airport so don't even try to get any of us to speak! Your flight is tomorrow morning! Now don't panic! Your luggage is all sorted out and ready. Have fun for the next two weeks!

Love,

Deewan and Gupta Parivaar

Pankhu: I totally can't believe this!!

Adi: Me neither!

Pankhu: What's in the second envelope?

Adi: No idea. This time, let's open it together.

Adi and Pankhu open the envelope and in it, there was another letter. The letter read -

Dear Mr and Mrs Aditya,

We are pleased to inform you that both of you have been appointed as the Managing Directors of Deewan Group of Industries.

Together with Mr Rubel Deewan, Miss Kaira Deewan and Miss Payal Agarwal, the five of you will take over the responsibilities of the Deewan Group of Industries from Mr and Mrs Anuj, Mr and Mrs Harish and Mr and Mrs Sameer, with effect from 1st January 2015.

Mr and Mrs Anuj, Mr and Mrs Harish, Mr and Mrs Sameer will form a new committee in the Deewan Group of industries - Advisoral Committee. They will be guiding the five of you.

I am sure the five of you will be able to lead the Deewan Group of Industries to much greater heights. All the best for your future endeavors and Congratulations on your new appointment.

Best Wishes,

Purushottam Deewan

Founder

Deewan Group of Industries

Adi: This was totally unexpected! I never thought we would take over the leadership positions so quickly!

Pankhu: This just feels like a dream.

Just then,

Knock Knock

Adi: Come in Kaira!

Kaira enters the room followed by Rubel and Payal.

Kaira: Adi Bhaiyya, how did you know it was me?

Adi: Well, I also know why you are here now!

Kaira: You do?!

Pankhu: Yes we do!

Rubel: Anyway, Congratulations everyone! But Adi, isn't this a little too early?

Payal: Besides, I am not even married into the family! How could everyone be so confident and appoint me as well?

Nanu: Well, only I can answer that question!

Adi: Nanu!

Nanu walks into the room and joins the five of them.

Nanu: This was long due! Your graduation gifts! And as for Payal's question, you are part of the family so it is only right you get the same as everyone in the family.

Pankhu: But Nanu, how sure are you that we are ready?

Nanu: I know you all are! You just need guidance and the family is there to assist you!

The five of them look at each other and immediately they share a group hug with Nanu.

Nanu: Now, you all should head to bed! Especially Adi and Pankhu! You both have a flight to catch in the morning!

Before Adi and Pankhu could ask him anything else, Nanu walks out and is followed closely by Rubel, Kaira and Payal. Adi and Pankhu look at each other and decide to call it a day.

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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update...🤗jesmine..
loved it..well written...👏
yeah i knew it would b honeymoon trip in 1 envelope...🥳
but destination unknown.. may b wil know in next part...
another envelope contains new responsibilities & duties for next generation.. older generation taking a break from work & wil only b advising them & guiding them...😳
i know d grp of 5 wil tk deewan grp to news heights of success...😎
liked d new idea of giving d gifts in form of letters & not just by announcing publically as a surprise...
letters can b stored & this memories wil b cherished always...😳
continue soon...
Edited by coolhi1988 - 10 years ago

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