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Posted: 12 years ago
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I was alone
You were alone
Parallel lines that touched one another. Just feeling our way,
Lost in the dark,
Drawn to each other.

So much to say
So much to do
So much of you for me to discover
Like what makes you laugh
What makes you cry
How does a friend become a lover too?


I've waited all of my life to find ...
Someone who'd need my heart and read my mind To light my days and warm
my nights
Someone I know I could call,
My someone for all my life

Looking at you
Looking at me
Loving the look of love that I see there. I find when I look deep into
your eyes,
Reflections of me there.


I've waited all of my life to find
Someone who'd need my heart and read my mind To light my days, and warm
my nights
Now all at once in your arms, everythings new, All that I feel tells me
its true
All that I ask is all of my life with you <3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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@ violetshine

wow wht a lovely poem <3<3<3,,,, loved it :))

perfect for paya :))


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sudipta1988

@ violetshine

wow wht a lovely poem <3<3<3,,,, loved it :))

perfect for paya :))


Thank you Sudipta 😊 glad you liked it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: violetshine

Thank you Sudipta 😊 glad you liked it.


🤗🤗

whts ur name dear???
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sudipta1988


🤗🤗

whts ur name dear???

My Names Sana 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: violetshine

My Names Sana 😊


sana ,,,nice name 😊😊

u from ?? wht do u do ???
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow sana...wonderful poem dear and very apt for our PaYa...particularly because eyes of both of them tells a lot...

You wrote it i suppose?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ankur281

Wow sana...wonderful poem dear and very apt for our PaYa...particularly because eyes of both of them tells a lot...


You wrote it i suppose?


Thankyou 😃

& yes i wrote it myself 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This is beautiful Sana! :') Love it and the last line was just so adorable! The first paragraph just took me back to the days when Adi & Pankhudi were two complete strangers, it's as if you've summed up their journey within words. Your truly talented, I'll be on the lookout for your upcoming ones now ;) haha x
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Posted: 12 years ago
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When you express with your eyes,

no words are needed.

Lovely poem, Sana.

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