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Posted: 12 years ago
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Passionate whispers of desire.. Do like and comment guys thanks



His deep sultry voice whispers to me, "You are a desire I can't run from Pankhuri"

He reaches his hand up and gently brushes a ringlet of my hair from my cheek. As his finger trails across me and leaves my skin burning with a deep wanting for him. Leaning in closer with his body cradling me with the strength of him, he softly says, "Nor will I try to run from."

I wanted nothing more then for him to take me. His gaze burns through me and finds the core of my heart igniting it into an inferno. Am I his desire? How could those big blue eyes do so much to my body in a matter of seconds from across a room? It scares me to think what might happen if our lips were to ever touch.

When I close my eyes I can't help but think about his body pushing up against me. The power of his presence from behind me makes my body tremble. He knows it too. I felt it. His breath deepened in my ear and left me in a poised state of waiting. Waiting for his words. Waiting for his touch. Waiting for his kiss. Is this what happens to lovers? All the confusion. The desperate longing. The need to feel something for him...anything. I want to scream stop and at the same time cry out for him to touch more of me.

Pankhuri, you have never been kissed before have you?" Was I foolish for shaking my head no. Should I have tried to convince him of a false? Does he care if I have not?

"Adi... I-"

"Sshh," he whispers.

His lips graze my neck so very softly. It causes me to wonder what his warm moist tongue feels like elsewhere on me. He then trails them up to my ear and whispers, "Now you have." A rush from the cool night air fills the space where his body just was. I should have called out to him to come back but I was confused. I have never felt this way before. The smell of him when he draws near paralyzes my words. The very thought of catching his eye thrills and terrifies in the same moment. How can I possibly want something so desperately and be frighted by what he may deliver onto me. My mind races to make sense of the moment while my body screams for him to touch all of me. My heart cries for him to embrace me tighter.

The notion of never being able to feel this way for another second in time causes distress within me. He has captivated my soul with his words, his gaze, his touch. How am I to turn away from this? Is it real? Is what I see in him real?

My fantasies of him are growing more intense. The added reality of what I now know has mixed with the desire of the unknown.He does the most wicked things to me in my dreams.. Pankhuri says "Only for you I am. Only for you I will be. Only for you I love."

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice One...and great title too.😃.Keep writing dear

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: anusha.cochin

Nice One...and great title too.😃.Keep writing dear

Ur name?



Thank you so much and my names Sana :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Omg why didn't I see this earlier?![:O] This is amazing! Your such a great writer! Love the way you write and quite honestly, I had chills down my spine! Seriously this was beyond what words could suffice, this is brilliant. Please do keep writing!😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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well done sana ,,,,

u r a vry good writer,,,,,love ur writing style ,,,

nice starting ,,,

carry on :))
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Gunjan-

Omg why didn't I see this earlier?![:O] This is amazing! Your such a great writer! Love the way you write and quite honestly, I had chills down my spine! Seriously this was beyond what words could suffice, this is brilliant. Please do keep writing!😃

Aww, thankyou so much 😊 glad you liked it hun.
& i will write more when i get some free time just so busy with college work at the minute but as soon as i get time i will continue writing for you :)
really appreciate your comments 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sudipta1988

well done sana ,,,,


u r a vry good writer,,,,,love ur writing style ,,,

nice starting ,,,

carry on :))

Thank you so much hun glad you liked it :)
i will definitley carry on as soon as i get the time 😊 x
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow wow wow ! Amazing Sana ! Love your writing
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: violetshine

Aww, thankyou so much 😊 glad you liked it hun.
& i will write more when i get some free time just so busy with college work at the minute but as soon as i get time i will continue writing for you :)
really appreciate your comments 😃



Your in College as well?!😲 What year?
Aww yes please do!😃 Your absolutely brilliant & very talented!
And you deserve all the praise Sana! x
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Gunjan-



Your in College as well?!😲 What year?
Aww yes please do!😃 Your absolutely brilliant & very talented!
And you deserve all the praise Sana! x

yeahh im at college, its my Second year 😆 so very stressful and busy yet i never miss a second to come on the forum haha :)
& 🤗 big hug girly! i think i might write another story since im home 😃 xx

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