Poem : I thought you're with me!

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@hateme2

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: DevvivekAshNI
thankyou Sayan🤗. Yeah, it suits on Avantu. Her character is just puzzled! .

P.S - nah, he's Angry with me so I'm trying to manofy him😭

Better.

Saibal is a nice man.

P.S. - when you quote, why those codes come ?

yeah! I hope he undrstand me again.

P.S- Becoz most of time I use my Mobile to Quote you rather than my Lappy.

understood.

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Saibal Routh

@SAIBALROUTH

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

I'm broken deep inside.
I can't take much more.
You lie about everything.
I dislike you to the core.

At once I felt your love,
But it turns out a lie.
I've lost all your trust,
So leave now and let me die.

You tricked me so easily,
I couldn't believe it.
You were just so clever,
It's hard to admit.

Now that you're leaving,
I do feel some guilt,
But my anger never faded.
My heart started to wilt.

Two emotions kill my life.
I blame you for it all,
But why do I keep it up,
After all my tears fall?

P.S.--> This poem is on behalf of Avantika and it is dedicated to Harish

Readers are advised to exercise extreme caution and not take it as personal as it dedicated to some fictional characters

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Saibal Routh

@SAIBALROUTH

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

My broken heart will never mend 😭
With all the pain you have to send, 😭
Pain that feels like splitting wrists, 😭
Wrists that will not heal. 😭

But have no care for why should you?
It's not your fault it's mine for even thinking that I could be yours,
but the winds will change in time. 😭
So for now goodbye my dear old friend 😭
With all the pain who has to send, 😭
but it won't be long before you feel 😭
my broken heart that never mends.😭

P.S.--> This poem is also on behalf of Avantika and it is dedicated to Harish

Readers are advised to exercise extreme caution and not take it as personal as it dedicated to some fictional characters😳

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Rashmi

@Rashu1505

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

😭😭aww poor avantu so touching

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Saibal Routh

@SAIBALROUTH

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: --Rashu--
😭😭aww poor avantu so touching

yeah feel so bad and the separation/divorce at present. 😭
Heartbreaking for Avantu 💔 😭

Kyun daard hai itnaa 😭
Tere liye ishq mein 😭
Rabba ve, Rabba Ve, Rabba Ve Rabba ve 😭

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Archana Ramprasad

@Achram

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Dear dev ji , very nice poem ..!

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Rashmi

@Rashu1505

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Sun sajna
Sajna sajna
O mujhe ek pal chein na aaye
Mujhe ek pal chein na aaye sajna tere bina
Sajna tere bina
Mere dil ko kuchh nahin bhaaye
Mere dil ko kuchh nahin bhaaye sajna tere bina
Sajna tere bina sajna tere bina
Mujhe ek pal chein na aaye
O mujhe ek pal chein na aaye sajna tere bina
Sajna tere bina
Akhiyaan milake tu na jaane ki hai ye kaisi baat
Haath ki mehndi mehke maahi ab to saari raat
Tu meri jaan hai tu meri dhadkan

Tu hai meri zindagani
Milke likhoonga saath mein tere
Is jeewan ki kahani
Judaai judaai
Kabhi aaye na judaai
Judaai judaai
O rabba aaye na judaai
Har mod pe jee ghabraaye
Har mod pe jee ghabraaye sajna tere bina
Sajna tere bina
Mere dil ko kuchh nahin bhaaye
Mere dil ko kuchh nahin bhaaye sajna tere bina
Sajna tere bina sajna tere bina
Mujhe ek pal chein na aaye
O mujhe ek pal chein na aaye sajna tere bina
Sajna tere bina
Naa pehnoon main jhoomar kangna na chandan ka haar
Tere pyaar ke gehnon se main kar loon sau singhaar
Tan man donon ko pighlaaye in saanson ki garmi
Phoolon se bhi naram hai jaanu in honthon ki narmi
Judaai judaai
Kabhi aaye na judaai
Judaai judaai
O rabba aaye na judaai
Meri pyaas ko kaun bujhaaye
Meri pyaas ko kaun bujhaaye sajna tere bina
Sajna tere bina
Mere dil ko kuchh nahin bhaaye
Mere dil ko kuchh nahin bhaaye sajna tere bina
Sajna tere bina sajna tere bina .

😭😭

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Saibal Routh

@SAIBALROUTH

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Rain, rain, go away,
Because of you,
My pain will stay.
Slit my throat,
Slice me open,
Leave me here,
Tear me apart.

Poisonous tears run down my face,
My heart struggles at a steady pace
As I try and stand again;
to find I'm alone in the rain.

I don't need you anymore…
Is what I think while tears pour,
I hate you, just as I hate when you brag you scored;
But love cuts like a blade.

Love is death as death is you;
My pain stains like a black tattoo.
Those memories come back again,
They bind me in ropes of poisons from you.

My burning blood streams down my head,
Staining it with deep, deep red
Just like a long, silk ribbon,
Tied on by a thread,
To a steel bullet, a hole in my skull…

Now you're a memory that's faded and dull.
As the black slips me away,
I hope you'll see me soon dead,
Waiting along the bay.

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Saibal Routh

@SAIBALROUTH

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Amazing poem Dev, suits Harish and Avantika fine and clearly depicts their present situation 😊

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Atharva Dev

@*Dev.*

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: --Rashu--
Sun sajna
Sajna sajna
O mujhe ek pal chein na aaye
Mujhe ek pal chein na aaye sajna tere bina
Sajna tere bina
Mere dil ko kuchh nahin bhaaye
Mere dil ko kuchh nahin bhaaye sajna tere bina
Sajna tere bina sajna tere bina
Mujhe ek pal chein na aaye
O mujhe ek pal chein na aaye sajna tere bina
Sajna tere bina
Akhiyaan milake tu na jaane ki hai ye kaisi baat
Haath ki mehndi mehke maahi ab to saari raat
Tu meri jaan hai tu meri dhadkan
Tu hai meri zindagani
Milke likhoonga saath mein tere
Is jeewan ki kahani
Judaai judaai
Kabhi aaye na judaai
Judaai judaai
O rabba aaye na judaai
Har mod pe jee ghabraaye
Har mod pe jee ghabraaye sajna tere bina
Sajna tere bina
Mere dil ko kuchh nahin bhaaye
Mere dil ko kuchh nahin bhaaye sajna tere bina
Sajna tere bina sajna tere bina
Mujhe ek pal chein na aaye
O mujhe ek pal chein na aaye sajna tere bina
Sajna tere bina
Naa pehnoon main jhoomar kangna na chandan ka haar
Tere pyaar ke gehnon se main kar loon sau singhaar
Tan man donon ko pighlaaye in saanson ki garmi
Phoolon se bhi naram hai jaanu in honthon ki narmi
Judaai judaai
Kabhi aaye na judaai
Judaai judaai
O rabba aaye na judaai
Meri pyaas ko kaun bujhaaye
Meri pyaas ko kaun bujhaaye sajna tere bina
Sajna tere bina
Mere dil ko kuchh nahin bhaaye
Mere dil ko kuchh nahin bhaaye sajna tere bina
Sajna tere bina sajna tere bina .
😭😭

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Edited by DevvivekAshNI - 12 years ago

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