Poem : I thought you're with me!

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Atharva Dev

@*Dev.*

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Posted: 12 years ago

Hey Guys, after a week I'm opening a topic here, is busy with Many things around ,but some thoughts were in my mind so thought to write them down, dont know What I had written gud or bad, hope you Like it !

Poem : I thought you're with me!

Whenever I was In need , you was there

whenever I wanted your support, you was there!
The Love , the moments you had spent with me, are Memorable!

Suddenly a Misunderstanding came between us , you doubted my Love, you felt Betrayed,

but you never found the reason of it!
You believed Others! And Mistaken me!
But you never thought what I felt!

For me, I lost my Buddy, i lost my Trust, I Lost my Respect within us!

You never knew! That I Lost YOU! Who was my Life!

I cried in Anger , I was Numb!
What to say and What to do!

I understood your Pain but You need to Feel me!

I know its difficult! But pls Forgive me, forgive me, forgive me!

I'm hoping a Ray of Hope with my Positive Way of Road!

I'm alone and I need you! Please Forgive me! Now my Life!

Dedication : Dedicated to All my Friends here Especially Saibal.

Regards Dev🤗

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Sabrina the Witch

@shesherkobita

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Posted: 12 years ago

Nice poem...suits Pankhuri and Aditya when they show separation track...

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Atharva Dev

@*Dev.*

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shesherkobita
Nice poem...suits Pankhuri and Aditya when they show separation track...

thankyou Sabi🤗 Yup but I dont want PaYa seperation.

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Sabrina the Witch

@shesherkobita

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: DevvivekAshNI
thankyou Sabi🤗 Yup but I dont want PaYa seperation.

i think there will be a separation ...I think this Kailash guy will put a wedge between Adi and Pankhuri...the Guptas and Dewans will snap ...and Pankhuri will leave bcos she will think its all her fault or something dramatic like that...just a prediction though.

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@hateme2

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Posted: 12 years ago

Dev, nice poem.

It partially suits Avantika also.

The lady who likes to live in MU.

P.S. Is Saibal heart broken ? Be careful.

Bengal is the Land of Devdas.

We want to see no more Devdas.

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Atharva Dev

@*Dev.*

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shesherkobita
i think there will be a separation ...I think this Kailash guy will put a wedge between Adi and Pankhuri...the Guptas and Dewans will snap ...and Pankhuri will leave bcos she will think its all her fault or something dramatic like that...just a prediction though.

but Sabi if it happens, then there would be no diff. In other stories and PKDH

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Atharva Dev

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: auosearahman
nice poem :))

thankyou😳

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Atharva Dev

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: SAYAN18
Dev, nice poem.


It partially suits Avantika also.


The lady who likes to live in MU.


P.S. Is Saibal heart broken ? Be careful.


Bengal is the Land of Devdas.


We want to see no more Devdas.