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Posted: 4 years ago
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Hi All




I got this crazy idea and I am turning it into a 5-6 update Short story.




But, only if you guys want me to continue.




So, here is the background:


Once upon a time there was a cursed book and anyone who reads even one word in it got trapped into it. But , now it's 2021 who believes in all that plus no one really knows if there is even a so called cursed book.


So, what will happen when our Piya tries reads it?






Now, I will write part 1 and probably post it later.


Please let me know if you want me to continue.

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Piya is looking for a new book to read on the bookshelf at the bookstore. She finds a book there that looks dusty and dirty. She wonders why no one even cleans the book . She feels pity for the book and decides to check it out. She finds it rather very odd. So, she goes to the cash register in the front and says I ready to check this book out. The old lady looks horrified that Piya even chose this book no one touches. She decides to warn Piya.

The old lady: Piya beta please don't take this book choose another book.

Piya: why Auntie

Old lady: people say this book is cursed in fact anything related to this kingdom is cursed.

Piya: Kingdom and book cursed? Auntie how can a book be cursed. I think there probably were certain people who did not like this book so they told everyone that it is cursed. Auntie there is no such thing as a cursed book. Please tell me how much does it cost.

Auntie: Piya I cannot sale it to you after knowing what people say about it.

Piya: please trust me there is no such thing.

Auntie I really want to read this book now.

Auntie: okay Piya I warned you about the book but I still can't give you this book.

Piya: please auntie I really want to read it.

Piya decides to buy it at the other register and the young boy gives her the book.

At night in her room

Piya opens the book and reads a magical message that popsups and says

Savdaan this book is magical; read this book at your risk . The book can also even mean death. You have been warned

Then the message disappears

Then Piya reads once upon a time in the 15th century there was a kingdom named Vijaygarh. It was known for its victory and especially the royal prince.

Then a light comes out of the book and it pulls Piya into the book .

Piya feels she is drowning in the never ending dark tunnel. Until she ends up into a forest and she faints.

A group of young soldier searching for the missing child finds piya on the floor fainted. They take Piya to royal doctor and decide to inform their prince.

Rajkumar we found this young women in the jungle and she might be the witch who is sacrificing children.

Prince: Bring her to me

The soldiers carry a fainted Piya to Abhay

Abhay looking at Piya thinks what the hell is this women wearing. This witch is the pretty type.

At the same time few people come in and plead to the prince saying just now one of the village children got kidnapped. Abhay thinks then this women cannot be the culprit. He tells his maid to take this young women and provide her with appropriate clothes as she is the royal guest.

Piya wakes up after few days. She wonders where she is is and why she is in a royal bed and in the most soft silk dress.

To be continued soon.

So, how is it friends? Do you like it?

What do you think? Please let me know.

I am still trying to learn how to use this forum . I prefer the older

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Yes yes plz continue

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Piya's Pov:

Piya wakes up and looks around and finds herself in a large room with furniture made of gold. She wonders where she is and gets up and decides to find someone and a way out.

Then a maid walks in and says my lady you are finally awake. Let me call the doctor and inform the prince.

After awhile the doctor arrives tells Piya she is absolutely fine.

After few minutes the maid comes in and says my lady the prince is waiting for you in the court room.

First let's make you look presentable. Piya looks at her dress and sees for the first time she is in a soft baby pink ball type of gown. She asks maid where are my clothes. The clothes are washed and in the process of being dried.

The small meeting room

Abhay is sitting on the big chair .

Piya and the maid walk in and the maid says your highness here is the guest.

Abhay waves his hand to the maid to leave.

Abhay asks Piya what her name is and where did she come from as she does not have Vijaygarh identity card.

Piya says my name is Piya and I am from Dehradoon and I was reading the book about your kingdom and the curse and I was pulled into the book.

Abhay hears this and starts laughing and says what nonsense

You are reading about my kingdom and you are pulled into the book. So tell me miss Piya what will happen next?

Piya says please trust me and please tell me how may I return to Dehradoon.

While looking at piya's baby brown eyes Abhay sees geniuness and takes a deep breath and sighs

Then he says after a long pause.

I will try my best to help you miss Piya. Tells her she may rest in the palace till they figure out how to send her back.

Back to Piya pov:

How did I land myself in this castle. How will I get out.

In another location

Abhay calls his most trusted friend and guide Tanmay.

He ask Tanmay to find the old lady named pagli

He needs her help to send Piya back to her place.

Tanmay says Abhay why are you asking for the pagal lady's help and for what

Abhay narrates the whole incidence

Tanmay says alright I will go her. But I would not trust her to help a stranger. I don't trust her. You know what she will ask you? Are you really willing to make the sacrifice for a stranger?

Meanwhile Piya is visiting the garden and she sees a 5 yr old boy running around and he falls and Piya runs quickly to the little boy and picks him up. He looks up to Piya with his blue eyes looking just like the miniature version of the prince.

She says brave boy be careful. What is your name. He says my name is Rishi .

He asks her what your name?

Piya: My name is Piya.

Rishi: will you be my friend.

Piya says sure.

Rishi ask where do you live?

Piya says I am the guest at the castle.

Rishi says with excitement:Are you really her my new mommy?

Piya: shocked look and says I am just a guest Rishi

Continued soon

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Thanks I'm restarting it.

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