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Leone

@Silver_Shiver

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Posted: 7 years ago

#71

My all doubts and queries are cleared now!

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Asshi...

@Asshi...

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Posted: 7 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: Silver_Shiver
My all doubts and queries are cleared now!

Glad to hear they are cleared. Now I'll like to know how you find the clarification.😉

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Asshi...

@Asshi...

Dazzler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#73

What the...

There's no comment yet like really? C'mon guys this is not fair. You eat my head for update and now no one comment about it yet.

Really bad!

Am upset especially by Sana and Maina. The two who actually made me update it yesterday. C'mon Maina now unres your comment yr am waiting to hear from you.

And Sana where are you yar? Get here soon and I want your comment or else forget am going to buried secret soon 😆 Am making the deal get here fast 😆

Oh well I just noticed I didn't even put up the link on first page and modified title. I'll do it now.

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sonia khanna

@soniakhanna01

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#74

THANKS for posting

Sorry for late reply

Awsome ending

I also want a happy ending

YOU gave us happy ending

FINALLY family complete

But in arjun case

I know he did a mistake but he is guilty too

He didn't deserve gathered from then and specially ananya

She should not hate him

But thanks for giving us happy ending

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sonia khanna

@soniakhanna01

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: Asshi...
What the...
There's no comment yet like really? C'mon guys this is not fair. You eat my head for update and now no one comment about it yet.

Really bad!

Am upset especially by Sana and Maina. The two who actually made me update it yesterday. C'mon Maina now unres your comment yr am waiting to hear from you.

And Sana where are you yar? Get here soon and I want your comment or else forget am going to buried secret soon 😆 Am making the deal get here fast 😆

Oh well I just noticed I didn't even put up the link on first page and modified title. I'll do it now.

Sorry for this but don't know that you updated next sorry

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Leone

@Silver_Shiver

Rocker

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Posted: 7 years ago

#76

I am sorry Asshi! I am just busy with packing and family!

I will unres soon for sure!!

But the part was excellent!!

Beautifully written!

I will unres my both res soon!!

I apologize for the delay!

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Leone

@Silver_Shiver

Rocker

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Posted: 7 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: Asshi...

Glad to hear they are cleared. Now I'll like to know how you find the clarification.😉

Yeah they are cleared!

I was basically finding difficulty in understanding what was Abhay??

I got to know that he was the King of dark world by the way both Vampires and Werewolves were following his order but wanted confirmation!!

Second confusion I can't recall!!😛

Will tell you once I remember it!😆

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Leone

@Silver_Shiver

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Posted: 7 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: Asshi...

Am upset especially by Sana and Maina. The two who actually made me update it yesterday. C'mon Maina now unres your comment yr am waiting to hear from you.

I am sorry but as I mentioned earlier I am a little busy!!

I will unres soon!! Sorry for the delay!

But will give a proper constructive analysis on this sequel!!

Don't be upset! Your chirpy version is better!!😉

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Nikvi29

@Nikvi29

Sparkler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#79

Res.

I will unreserve very soon dear

Wow this even better than what I imagined I loved it

Beautifull penned down.👏

I will write More comments soon dear.

I wrote this in a hurry.

Next time dear just tell us you have an exam coming . If we knew we would not have any problems waiting.

🤗

I loved it all

How Abhay took there powers and did not kill them himself.

I loved how jeh had to beg Abhay

I loved it how Abhay is rudra and how he said he does not lie.

Because Abhay was a leader. And when he died he was able to gather powers from all the dark world members werewolves and vampires.

But Abhay made jeh pay I loved it

I loved how Abhay turned into a bat and back to his human form.

Poor Abhay it took him 20 yrs to gather his powers.

He became king wow.

I loved how Abhay entered Arjun house and he could see and read Arjun's mind and see the past. See he is repenting.

I loved it how Aanya ya turn out to Abhay and Piya's daughter. That was even better then reincarnation track.

I glad Abhay forgave Arjun but going to make him pay for it by making him repent all his life.

He did not give him death .

He is happy that Arjun gave his daughter the name he wanted to give her Aanya.

I loved father daughter reunion.

Piya gave her life for Abhay and Ananya

Abhay and Ananya brought back to life

I loved the father daughter scenes

When piya came back she wiped Abhay tears and the smile they gave to Ananya was breathtaking.

This ending turned out to be even better than I imagined.

Good job and I loved it.

I just wish you wrote alittle more about Abhiya and Ananya after family reunion.

I wish you could explain alittle more how Abhay gathered his powers alittle more .

I loved it I am going to read it again and again .

Thank you dear for writing this master piece and thank you for sharing it with us and thank you for dedicating the chapters to us and me .

Thanks a lot

Edited by Abhiya_Visu - 7 years ago

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Asshi...

@Asshi...

Dazzler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#80

Originally posted by: soniakhanna01
THANKS for posting
Sorry for late reply
Awsome ending
I also want a happy ending
YOU gave us happy ending
FINALLY family complete
But in arjun case
I know he did a mistake but he is guilty too
He didn't deserve gathered from then and specially ananya
She should not hate him

But thanks for giving us happy ending

Thank you sweetie.

No sorry okay? Its not like I'll update and by magic you'll get to know and even got free to read and comment 😆 So chill😛

Exactly he was guilty so why would Abhay go on killing him. As for Ananya, she can't hate him right? Even though he wasn't her real father she knew that all along and they developed that love of father daughter between them. I didn't made her day anything about Arjun because honestly I didn't have words. You can't suddenly hate the person you considered your father just because he was the reason of your father death and now is feeling guilty and even saved you.

But she deserves to be upset so no comments on that.😉