Abhiya TS - I Live Because Of You *last chapter on page 9* COMPLETED * - Page 10

Originally posted by: Abhiya_Visu

Res.

I will unreserve very soon dear

Wow this even better than what I imagined I loved it

Beautifull penned down.👏

I will write More comments soon dear.

I wrote this in a hurry.

Next time dear just tell us you have an exam coming . If we knew we would not have any problems waiting.

🤗

I loved it all

How Abhay took there powers and did not kill them himself.

I loved how jeh had to beg Abhay

I loved it how Abhay is rudra and how he said he does not lie.

Because Abhay was a leader. And when he died he was able to gather powers from all the dark world members werewolves and vampires.

But Abhay made jeh pay I loved it

I loved how Abhay turned into a bat and back to his human form.

Poor Abhay it took him 20 yrs to gather his powers.

He became king wow.

I loved how Abhay entered Arjun house and he could see and read Arjun's mind and see the past. See he is repenting.

I loved it how Aanya ya turn out to Abhay and Piya's daughter. That was even better then reincarnation track.

I glad Abhay forgave Arjun but going to make him pay for it by making him repent all his life.

He did not give him death .

He is happy that Arjun gave his daughter the name he wanted to give her Aanya.

I loved father daughter reunion.

Piya gave her life for Abhay and Ananya

Abhay and Ananya brought back to life

I loved the father daughter scenes

When piya came back she wiped Abhay tears and the smile they gave to Ananya was breathtaking.

This ending turned out to be even better than I imagined.

Good job and I loved it.

I just wish you wrote alittle more about Abhiya and Ananya after family reunion.

I wish you could explain alittle more how Abhay gathered his powers alittle more .

I loved it I am going to read it again and again .

Thank you dear for writing this master piece and thank you for sharing it with us and thank you for dedicating the chapters to us and me .

Thanks a lot

Originally posted by: cuteariya

after I read this chapter I felt pain at first but end with happiness 😃

wow abhay had so much power that he came back in life but it took him 20 yrs

but his pain not able to save his pia & their baby broke my heart🥺

so rudra was abhay & haseena couldn't identify abhay

jey got shocked seeing abhay alive & with passing moment he understood power of abhay

I love the part when jey begged in front of abhay for his life👏

it remind me of abhiya helpless how they begged in front of jey haseena & Arjun 💔

thank god abhay didn't kill them he only took their power👏

OMG ananya is abhiya's daughter😲

Arjun took care of ananya & letter felt guilty for betrayed abhiya 😡

he even named her ananya as once abhay mention tha name

just seeing ananya's face abhay understood she is his daughter😊

it was really emotional moment between abhay & ananya both met each other as father daughter😭

abhay forgave Arjun for not killing ananya but didn't forgive for his betrayed him & I agree with abhay 👏

wow ananya wanted to bring her mom pia glad she thought abt it😃

coz of ananya abhay also got hope to see pia & their perfect family😃

but seeing the same place where he lost his love he got so emotional🥺

OMG pia came alive ananya was right coz of pia ananya & abhay alive so coz of them pia will alive

finally abhiya families complete abhay also took his revenge from those power hungers

I'm so glad & thanks to u for giving happy ending dear🤗

sweetie can u update epilogue as want to know how abhiya life would be with their daughter😳

I'm so greedy isn't it?😳

Originally posted by: arwakantawala

Sorry for the late revert but wonderful Update atlast Abhiya are Together as a family and every emotion is clear as water in this update for Abhay and Ananya loved it to the core

Originally posted by: MyDriYa

Finally Read it completely & got the ans of my many questions.. 😳

I liked this Badass Abhay veryyy much.. Playing with his prey

Also when I read 'Rudra" I felt like he must be a +ve char or with Abhay.. But u made him Abhay only.. Ahaan I like it.. Actually I have an affection for name related to lord Shiva..

And Fireee!! Abhay is always a fire.. "Dur raho mujhse, aag hun main, JAL jaogi" 😎

Hmmm u know It was more perfect than perfect ending.. After that saddest ending.. This one seems like a fairy tale..

Pia also come back.. Ananya has Pia's face.. Awesome!!

U can write 3rd sequel to focusing Ananya powers.. LoLzz see! Expectations never end!!

So Do whatever u want to do man (copied Salman's dialogue)

Originally posted by: sana1819786

sorry Ashi dear

but u know my health na wo phirse bahoth bigad gayi 😭and I was hospitalized again kal hi discharge mila hai so cant read and comment here

and more over u haven't pm😡 me then how come I know about the story being updated

ya I was stalking 😉this story but it doesn't mean that u shud stop PMing me ok😡

today when I was going through pms I got to know that this sequel is completed so peeped in to see that u r complaining about us and making one sided deals which are not valid

and dont u dare to stop 😡posting Burried Secret

I will read it soon and comment on it as early as possible

but dont stop updating BS ya I haven't read that one too so give me little time for reading and commenting on both stories

update BS very soon

Bye take care

Originally posted by: Asshi...

Thanks😛

Right it was fun to write Abhay playing with the oblivious fools😆

I know right! That's what Ananya felt and that's how she just jumped into for Piya thinking all the fairy tales she ever read. 😉

Not really Ananya has similar features not completely ditto copy.😉

Oh!! in this case WHOM should I imagine as Ananya!!

This girl?

Haha I know and I'm not planning to write third sequel am ending it right here. I got more than ten half done stories to focus on that are even not on forum yet.😆

Oh ! U r a busy writer.. Come back to Abhiya after done with all stories 😳

Originally posted by: MyDriYa

Originally posted by: Asshi...

Originally posted by: Silver_Shiver

Okay so here I am!!

I will be giving a collective review Asshi!!

Can't give separate reviews cause then many things will be mixed up!!

Will update my review in an hour!!