Abhiya ff: Destined To Be Alone * Chapter -14 :updated*

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Posted: 7 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: Pkyekdiehardfab
yup stories Destined To Be Alone and Painful Love😛
What is DHYAN??😕
Will be waiting for your comments😉

Umm dhyan is a Hindi word which is called Attention in English 😉

I will read it then do comments 😳

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Pkyekdiehardfab

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Posted: 7 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: soniakhanna01
Nice update👏

Thanks😊

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Pkyekdiehardfab

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Posted: 7 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: cuteariya
So abhay remember abt the fight but he couldn't see pia's face
He didn't tell to anybody abt the fight
Misha was glad that abhay didn't remember the fight
Awe pia was waiting for abhay & misha tease her
Now misha in mission to bring abhiya together
When misha told abhay abt pia's pain his heart broke
Awe finally abhiya got little cute moment
But I think it's jay who is looking at abhiya furiously
Continue plz

Thanks for reading dear!!

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Pkyekdiehardfab

@Pkyekdiehardfab

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Posted: 7 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: pirl18

Umm dhyan is a Hindi word which is called Attention in English 😉

I will read it then do comments 😳

oh acha I got it😆

No problem.. Take ua time dear😊

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Pkyekdiehardfab

@Pkyekdiehardfab

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Posted: 7 years ago

#65

CHAPTER - 6

MOUNT COLLEGE... LIBRARY

Abhiya were lost in their dream land n a guy was glaring at them .

He angrily went out of the library..

The bell rang pulling our love birds back to reality.. Abhay quickly straightened himself balancing Piya and feel embarrassed

Abhay: r u okay?

Piya: mm...ya.

Both bend down to collect the books

Abhay: waise tum ye books ki pyramid lekar kaha ja rahe the..

Piya: tumse matlab ???

Abhay: mm..baas u hi!

she is a tough cookie to crack , u need to work hard Abhay.

Abhay: Hi my name is Abhay Raichand...can we be friends.

Piya silently collected all her books n move towards her seat ignoring Abhay.

Abhay: o hello...

lagta hai God ne duniya ki sari rudeness issi me dal di hai

God plz help me..

Abhay shook his head n goes to sit beside Piya.

Abhay again tried to start a conversation with her..

Abhay: Hi my name is. Abhay Raichand...mmm...what your name.

plz say something Piya..

Piya(rudely): Piya dobriyal.

Abhay smiled and mentally patted himself..

Good going Abhay ...laga rah!!

Abhay: Piya u know na ...I'm new here...

before Abhay cud complete.. Piya harshly cut him off.

Piya: So???

Abhay started fumbling

Abhay: so...mmm...actually...

Bap re jungli billi ..Always ready to pounce..

Abhay: wo actually notes I don't have notes na ...so will u help me...

In return Piya pull out something from her bag n thud it in front of Abhay

making him startled by her action..

Piya( pointing towards the bunch of paper ): NOTES...

Abhay looked at her in disbelief

lo isne to kahani suru hone se pahle hi khatam kar di...

Abhay's thoughts were interrupted by a group of students

Boy 1: listen guys! all students are requested to report in drama hall...

After the students left, Abhiya also left for drama hall..

IN DRAMA HALL

Abhiya, misbir(Misha + Kabir)and all other students were waiting for the announcement..

Drama teacher: Students there is an announcement regarding the fresher's party which is going to be held after two weeks... we are organizing a singing competition so I wud request interested students to give there names...Along with this there wud be a dance performance for which I'm going to select some couples...m I clear students

Yes sir !!.. everyone sang in union.

Teacher started making pairs

Angad- Ruhi

Chirag- Maya

Kabir- Misha

Abhay- Piya

Teacher: so students from tomorrow dance practice will start...

Piya cut him off

Piya: sir I don't want to participate in this performance...

Teacher: Miss Piya Dobriyal I'm not giving u any choice... its a strict order so better u accept it..

Piya angrily left the hall

Abhay was highly happy n exicted

After the all students left , Abhay run towards the drama teacher n hugged him tightly

Abhay: thank u so much Shankar bhai!!

Shankar: no need to thanks Abhay ...u r my best friend's brother n I too consider u as my little brother... so anything for u...

*Flashback*

While going towards Library Abhay bumped into someone

Abhay (without looking at the person): m sorry ..m really sorry.

guy: Aree ..Abhay tu ??

Abhay : Shankar bhai aap yaha

Shankar: Ha ...maine aajhi ye college join kiya hai as a drama teacher..

Abhay: wow thats great...so u enjoying your new job..

Shankar: what enjoying.. pahle di hi itna pressure ..fresher's party u know...us party ki sari responsibilities mujhe dedi principal ne...singing competition ki arrangements then selection of couples for dance performances aur bhi bahut kuch...

Something strikes on Abhay's mind

Abhay: mm..Shankar bhai ...mmm...will u do a favor on me..

Shankar: Since when did u started asking ...just say it...and your wish will be granted.

Abhay: Shankar bhai will u pair me with Piya dobriyal for dance performance

Abhay said in one go closing his eyes.

Shankar look at him suspiciously

After not getting any response Abhay opened his n look at suspicious Shankar.

Abhay: Shankar bhai.. ..mmm... ..wo... mmm...actually... wo

Looking at Abhay's condition Shankar started laughing

Shankar : Stop fumbling Abhay..I know somebody is in love...u don't worry I'll handle it..

Abhay: Thanks.

Smiling in return Shankar goes from there.. while Abhay recalls Shankar's word " somebody is in love"

Abhay (smiling): Yes! I'm in LOVE.. ...I'm in love with Piya dobriyal...

*FLASHBACK END*

BTW tumne apne is new adventure ke bare me Sid ko bataya hai...

Said Shankar bringing Abhay back to earth.

Abhay: mm...nahi but jaldi hi batadunga..

Shankar: okay all the best...chal aab main chalta hu mujhe principal se iss party ke bare me discuss karna hai

Abhay: okay see ya later!!

After sometimes Abhay saw Piya walking through the corridor n he call her..

Abhay: Hey!! Piya Stop...

Piya: what u want now??

Abhay: nothing important.. baas puchna tha tum kal college aogina...

Piya: its none of your business..

Abhay: why u always behave so rudely with me Piya did I asked something wrong??

Piya looked at Abhay for few seconds

No Abhay u didn't do anything wrong but I can't allow u to enter my dark world.

Piya immediately composed herself n glare at Abhay

Piya: JUST STAY AWAY FROM ME..

and she left place in hurry...but the pain in eyes doesn't got unnoticed by Abhay.

Abhay: I know Piya u r not what u show ...but don't worry I'll change u...

'I know only u can change her' Misha said while patting Abhay

Abhay look at her n smile and left for his home.

But Misha was standing there tense

Misha: I'm so scared for tomorrow... don't know how jai will react after knowing all this...hope koi garbar na ho...

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Don't forget to tell me how much you like this part...now I'm trying to focus on Abhiya more...

tc& keep smiling

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Pkyekdiehardfab

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Posted: 7 years ago

#66

CHAPTER-7

**Surprise surprise**

NEXT MORNING... IN COLLEGE.

All students were excited for the dance practice..

Especially Abhay , he was continuously checking his watch..

Abhay: were is Piya??... O God I can't

wait more ...kaha ho tum Piya..

Someone tab on his shoulder

n said: patient young boy!!

Abhay found Shankar smiling at him. n got embarrassed..

Shankar shook his head n move forward smiling.

Suddenly Abhay's face lit up as he noticed Piya coming with grumpy face.

BOYS LOCKER ROOM

'How dare that b*****d touch my

Piya' shouted a furious Jai..

' calm down jai' said a guy who was glaring at Abhiya in library.

' How can I calm myself Neel that b*****d is trying to steal my Piya...I'll kill him' by this started to leave the locker room only to be stopped by Neal..

' Stop being stupid Jai...what do u think u will beat him and Piya will come running to u??.. No she will hate u and that guys will gain sympathy from her' Neel hissed at jai..

' so u tell me what should I do...let him take my Piya in front of my eyes' Jai hissed in same tone..

' No brother I didn't said that!!...u know we wolfs are famous for cleverness...we just need to patient and use our brain instead of power.' Neel tried to make Jai understand..

'what r u saying?? m not getting u' Jai asked confusinly.

' Come let me tell u about my plan' Neel said pulling jai out of the loker room.

BACK TO DRAMA HALL.

all students were present now..

By now Misbir have also arrived

Kabir saw Misha tense

Kabir: Hey champ !! whats the problem..

Misha: Its Jai..

Kabir: what Jai?? kya kiya usne??

Misha: ab tak to kuch nahi kiya...but

I'm sure wo jarur kuch na

kuch garbar karega...

Misha was interrupted by Shankar

Shankar started to speak: So dance couples... are u ready for today's practice session

Yes Sir! Couples shouted.

Shankar: so students...

Before he cud complete T cut him off

T: How cud u do this to me???

Shankar : excuse me !! who the hell r

u???

T: don't u know me ??...I'm T The

Prom Queen... And U (pointing towards Shankar) didn't bother to enter my name in this dance Performance ...HOW CUD U??

Shankar (a bit louder): check your tone Miss P or T whatever u r ...n about entering your name ...I didn't asked u to be absent yesterday..

N yes its the first time so I'm forgiving u ..but next time if I heard u talking to me like this ...u wud be thrown out of the class..NOW GO N ENTER YOUR NAME. IN THE LIST!!..

Everyone in the hall were trying to compress their laugh while T was highly embarrassed n angrily..

Seeking everybody's attention Jai spoke while entering the hall : Sir even I want to Participate.. may I ??

Shankar looked at him n nodded in yes.

Shankar: Tanushree your partner will be jai.

And without arguing T stand beside Jai..

Now Misha was more tensed

Kabir patted her

kabir: see everything is fine now.. Jai didn't created any mess..

Misha: No Kabir I know him very well..there must be something cooking in his head...I think ye tufan se pahle ka sannata hai..

Kabir: Uffo..aisa kuch nahi hai ...u just chill Mishu...this tensions n all r not your cup of tea!!

Misha: shut up kabir!!

n she hit him playfully..

n once again they got interrupted by Shankar..

Shankar: So lets start now ...and the song which I chose is HAWAYEIN from movie JHMS..

U liked this song students.

YES SIR!! came the reply

Shanker played the song n started showing them the moves...

After sometimes all the couples were dancing well except Abhiya.

Piya was dancing maintaining a distance from Abhay as if he's untouchable while Abhay was trying hard to follow the beat with Piya.

Shankar came towards them: What u guys r doing.. is it a way to dance...follow me...

Shankar again showed them the steps n asked them to do it again

But alas! again they started like before..

Now Shankar is getting angry on Piya...

Shankar: Piya !! wrap your hands around Abhay neck properly...

this time having no choice she did as Shankar said..

Shankar: Abhay !! u wrap your hands around Piya's waist...

Abhay did as Shankar said..

Now both are having tickling sensations in their bodies

'Now follow the beats ' came one more order from Shankar..

Now Abhiya were moving there body perfectly with music but mentally lost in each other..

Abhay

She is so soft , Her smell is making me insane , her eyes are most beautiful eyes I ever seen..

Piya

O God he is hell handsome.. n his eyes most mesmerizing eyes I ever seen...No Piya u need to stop ...How shud I n the sweet smell of his blood...No!!! Piya stop it u can't lose your control..O God help me.

Piya forcefully shut her eyes n tried to control herself..

While Jai clenched his teeth in anger...

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Don't forget to vote n comment..

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sahira kabir

@eufara_naghm

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#67

Very nice

Thank you for the pm dear

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Kawan

@Kawan

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#68

first of all.. i loved the concept..
i never imagined pia as vampire and would to read more..

part1

awesome update
loved it
why always the younger once everyone fav.. hehehe
im curous that why sid is so indifferent to his family except abhy???

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Kawan

@Kawan

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#69

part 2
i always loved kabir character.. such a kind hearted guy he is..
i didnt except abhiya will meet liek that.. where pia will be shouting.. and poor abhay listening to her

loved it