Abhiya ff: Destined To Be Alone * Chapter -14 :updated* - Page 5

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Posted: 7 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: eufara_naghm

Loved it

Thnx for the pm dear

I glad u loved it😛
n one more thing STOP THANKING ME FOR PM😡
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Posted: 7 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: hriti713

Always wanted to see this friendly relation between Abhay and Kabir... Nice update!

Thanks for the pm

me too wanted this friendly relation.
M glad u found it nice😛
N plz don't thank for pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: taahir004

Congratulations on your story

Thank you😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: taahir004

Character Sketch is very Interesting

m glad u found it interesting😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: cuteariya

Wow abhay & kabir became friends

Loll misha introduction was really interesting
Kabir & misha fight like tom & jerry so cute
On the other hand abhay was totally shocked knowing misha is pia's sister
Oh god abhay is in danger
I feel that wolf is jai & pia saved abhay
Abhay families were so worried for him
Why abhay dad & Sid have such hated relationship?
Thank god sid came with police in time & took abhay from the jungle
Glad nothing happened to abhay
Continue plz

I'll dear,keep liking n commenting😛
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Posted: 7 years ago
#46
CHAPTER -4



DOBRIYAL MANSION

Piya was trying to sneak into her house but Mr.Dobriyal caught her.

Mr.D: where were u darling?

Piya stammered: dad ..actually...I...I..hunting.. m..yes I went for hunting..

Mr.D: Don't fool me sweety ...tum kaha thi n kya kar rahe thi...

Piya: wo .main..

Mr.D: listen piya tum janti ho ye kitna dangerous hai... phir bhi

Piya: m sorry dad..

Mr.D: okay now go to your room.

Piya nodded n left

NEXT MORNING

Abhay slowly opened his eyes

Haseena(crying): Abhay?...beta..

Sid: Abhay...

Abhay(weakly): mom...

Chand: u okay na ?...beta...

Abhay(smiles): yes..dad perfectly fine...

Sid (sadly): ya I can see that...

Abhay: bhai plzz don't be sad ...I fine see..

Abhay tried to sit but Haseena stopped him...

Haseena: no need to ...just lay down.. u need rest

by this Haseena & Chand left leaving the brothers alone...

IN PIYA'S ROOM

Piya was thinking about something n smiling..

Misha came from behind n almost jumped on Piya...

Misha: mere sis kya soch kar smile kar rahi hai..

Piya : Misha tu kab properly behave karna sikhegi..

Misha:NEVER..

Piya: arghhh...

Misha: waise bata na kaha gayi thi tu kal...n don't u dare to lie

Piya: wo main kal ek human ko wolves se bachane gaye thi..

Misha: oo...to tu abhi usike bare me soch rahi thi..

Piya: Ha...

Piya casually answered but next moment she realized what she said n looked at Misha who smirked at her. ...

Piya: MISHAAA...

Misha: what u can't hide anything from me sis...

Piya glare at her..

Misha: common Piya...don't glare at me...now tell about your prince charming...

Piya: Shut up! mishu its nothing like that...he was just in danger ...so I helped him..

Misha: ooo...achha...that's y u were blushing...

Piya: Mishu stop it yaar...

Misha: OK..OK...just tell me his name ...do I know him..

Piya: y u wanna know his name...

Misha: Bas uhi Piya...u can't even share this much with me...u hurt me Piya...

Misha said making a fake sad face...

IN RAICHAND MANSION

Abhay: no bhai m not going to eat this...its...

before he cud complete Sid pushed a spoon full of Dalia into Abhay's mouth..

Abhay: uurrgghh...bhai its so yucky..

Sid scold him: stop it...n just finish this...

Abhay: nooo bhai...

Abhay started moving his head back as Sid tried to feed him ...

but suddenly a pain shot up in his head n Abhay hold his head in pain

Abhay: Aahhh...

Sid : Abhay !!

Sid gave him a glass of water n tried to calm Abhay..

Sid asked with concern: u okay?..

Abhay: much better bhai...

Sid: see I told u na... u r weak ...eat some more dalia u will feel better..

Sid said taking the bowl of Dalia in his hand...

Abhay made a puking like face : no bhai not again ...n only your smile can make me feel better... so bhai plzz ek smile de do

Abhay plead cutely

Sid's lips immediately curved into a smile..

Abhay: hahh ..ye huina baat... now see main pura fit ho gaya...koi weakness nahi..

Abhay said showing his biceps

Sid playfully pinched his nose..

Sid: badmass kahi ka

suddenly Sid remember something ..

Sid : acha Abhay tum forest me kya kar rahe the..

Abhay: wo bhai kal main jab college se wapas aaraha tha to maine dekha ki ek admi ek girl ko forcefully forest me lejaraha hai...so maine unhe follow kiya ...but I lost in the jungle... phir kuch wolves waha agaye aur unse bachne ke liye I ran from there n bumped into a trees n faint...

Haseena: Tumhe pata bhi hai hum sab kitna darr gaye the..

Haseena said as enters the room with Abhay's medicines..

Abhay is embarrassed now

Abhay: m sorry...

Haseena sit beside him n cares his cheek

Haseena: plz beta aisa kabhi maat karna ...humari jan basti hai tume...

Aabhay looks down: m so sorry mom...

Haseena (smiling n kissed on Abhay's forehead): its okay beta ...but don't do this again...

Abhay smile back n hug Haseena..

Abhay: I love u mom...

Haseena hugged him back n said: love u too beta...

Sid angrily left the room. Abhay saw that

Abhay: mom bhai ko kya hua...

Haseena tried to ingnor him: Bahut bak bak karte ho chalo jaldi se apni medicines lo aur aram Karo..mujhe bahut kam hai...

By this Haseena left the room making Abhay confused by her weird behavior...

Abhay: koi to problem hai ...but kya...I need to know..

IN DOBRIYAL MANSION

Piya : ok ..ok...jada natak maat kar batati hu ' Abhay'

Misha: what!! Abhay...u mean Abhay Raichand...

Piya: yes

Misha: u mean that Abhay Raichand who joined the college yesterday..

Piya rolled her eyes : yesss...Misha

Misha: hmmm...not bad Pita love at first sight..

Piya said while blushing: shut up Misha ...aisa kuch nahi hai..

Misha: ya ya I can see that...

Piya: nahi Misha aisa kabhi nahi ho sakta he is a human n I'm a monster...

Misha: o cut the crap Piya nothing is impossible... waise tell me one thing ..tumne uski memory to erase ki na..

Piya: memory...

Misha: ya memory ...he must have seen u fighting with wolves na..

Piya: Actually Misha main uski memory erase karne hi jarahi this ki suddenly uspe ek wolf ne attack kar diya to main us wolf se fight karne me busy ho gaye ...n I think accidentally he bumped into a tree n faint...bad me kuch humans waha aagaye so I left the place...

Misha : O GOSH!! Piya how cud u be so irresponsible..agar usne kisi ko batadiya to... pata hai na dad kya kahte hai ...vampires ka ek hi rule hota hai n its SURVIVAL..

Piya: I know Misha..usne darkness ki wajah se mera face nahi dekha hoga...n I hope he didn't remember anything about the fight...

Misha: ya I hope so...

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So how was the chapter??... Lemme know it by ua comments😛

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Posted: 7 years ago
#47
Awesome and lovely update
Thnx for the pm dear
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Posted: 7 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: Pkyekdiehardfab

I glad u loved it😛

n one more thing STOP THANKING ME FOR PM😡


You're still new
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Posted: 7 years ago
#49
Ohoo... Piya is blushing thinking about Abhay 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
#50
Nice story.
Pia is vampire and abhay human.
And that jay kabaab main haddi.
Abhay become friend of misha and kabir.
Pia is behaving rudely with abhay.
She save him from wolf.
And forget to eres his memory.
I think abhay will remember everything.
Pia is blushing while talking about abhay to Misha.
May be thinking about his talk to wolf😆
Edited by appuhatti - 7 years ago

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