Abhiya ff: Destined To Be Alone * Chapter -14 :updated* - Page 4

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Posted: 7 years ago
#31
VERY nice update 👏
Edited by soniakhanna01 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: janumkrk

nice update... but seems abhay is strong human he even made vampire to fall...


stay away from me...

piya now you started, hehehe.. where is misha and neel,

jai piya ki bodyguard.. werewolf bodyguard of vampire interesting... loving their friendship

but pia is little too much rude to abhay??? kabir and abhay are friends.. nice


waiting for next update

Thanks for reading
I'll update soon dear
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Posted: 7 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: cuteariya

interesting update
oops this is exactly opposite from the show here pia is rude & abhay is so sweet 😆
love sid & abhay bonding both love each other very much 😃
ouch abhiya first meeting wasn't so good pia shouted at abhay
but abhay lost in pia 😉
oh god coz of kabir abhay also got punishment but both became friends 😃
continue plz

Thanks for reading
I'll continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#34
Thanks
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Posted: 7 years ago
#35
CHAPTER - 3


Both Kabir& Abhay went to cafeteria

Abhay: O God she was so dangerous yaar..

Kabir: I know yaar ...chal kuch khate hai m so hungry..

Abhay: Ha chal.

Kabir was about to sit when somebody pulled his chair n he fell down..

Abhay: Hey dude u okay..

Abhay's eyes travels to the person who was holding the chair n laughing..

A tomboyish girl with short n curly hairs..

Kabir shouted without looking at her :
MISHU MAIN TUJHE CHORUNGA NAHI

That girl said in challenging tone: pahle pakar ke to dikha thakur.

After this both kabir & the girl started pakkram pakrai ..

Abhay was laughing at their funny antics

They continued this till kabir gave up.

Kabir introduce the girl to Abhay: Abhay this Misha n Misha this is Abhay..

Both shook their hand..

Kabir: Abhay u won't believe she is Piya's sister..

Abhay was shocked: what!!

Kabir: yaa n see they are poles apart na ..

Abhay: ha yaar

Misha: m not saddu like Piya ...always putting her head in books an all..

After there chit chat they went to attend other class..

while driving back to home Abhay was very happy ...coz he made so many new friends today

His smile faded when he thought about Piya he had seen pain in her eyes...but why ...

Suddenly he saw a boy forcefully dragging a girl inside the deep forest..

Abhay: are ye admi iss girl KO kaha lejaraha hai I think mujhe iski help karni chahiye.

Abhay stop the car n started following them.

But after following a few steps both the figures disappear

Abhay was hell shocked to see that...

Abhay: abhi to yahi the ...kaha gaye

Now its getting dark n Abhay is lost in the jungle..

Abhay: O God ab main kya karu..mujhe wapas Jane ka rashta bhi nahi mil raha ...ghar par bhai..mom..dad sab pareshan ho rahe honge...

AT RAICHAND MANSION

Everyone is worried for Abhay ...

Haseena: Chand kuch pata chala Abhay ka?

Chand : Nahi Haseena ...

Haseena (crying): Chand mujhe bahut daar lagraha hai agar Abhay ko kuch...

Chand cut off her

Chand: kuch nahi hoga mere bete ko.

They were interrupted by Sid who was shouting on phone

Sid (angrily): WHAT DO U MEAN .. U R TRYING ...mujhe mera bhai chahiye wo bhi sahi salamat..

Sid angrily cut the call n threw the mobile on the sofa.

Chand: Haseena kahdo use ki srif chikhne chilane se kuch nahi hone wala..

Sid cut off Chand

Sid : So what u want... aapke tarah chup chap baitha rahu.

Haseena angrily: SIDDD..

Chand: ise samjhane ka koi faida nahi Haseena... Abhay ka Dad abhi zinda hai ..kisi aur ko uski phikar karne ki koi zaroorat nahi..

Sid: bhai hai wo mere main use kuch nahi hone dunga..

By this Sid stormed out of the house in a range.

Haseena: Chand ye kya kia aapne..

Chand: what Haseena ..tumne dekha na wo kaise batamizi kar raha tha..

Haseena: wo tension me tha Chand..

Chand: whatever Haseena...tum tension maat lo main ho na..main apne bache ko dhund ke launga ...plz trust me..

Haseena(crying) : I trust u Chand ..but mujhe bahut dar lagraha hai...

Chand wiped Haseena's tears n hugged her

Chand: kuch nahi hoga Abhay ko I promise.

IN JUNGLE

Abhay was continuously walking through the jungle

Abhay: are yaar pichle 2 ghante se chal raha hu... par bahar Jane ka rasta hi nahi milraha...mobile bhi car me bhul gaya ab kya karu..

Suddenly he heard growling of wolves .

Abhay: Are nahi ..Abhay jaldi bhag yaha se warna aaj tu in wolves ka dinner banjayega..

Abhay was about to leave when a wolf came in front of him...it was glaring at him..

Abhay is scared now but he tried to clam the wolf ( like seriously?? )

Abhay: H...Hey...Wolfy...what's up...nice build body huh...well my name is Abhay raichand ...n you're..

on this the wolf growled

Abhay: wow nice name huh...I'm impressed... mmm...what about your family... Do u have any girlfriend..

on this wolf growled even more louder..

Abhay: ooo..calm down ...I think u r a bit sensitive about this...don't be sad even I don't have any...

Its seems like wolf is getting irritated by Abhay's baak baak (ye to hona hi tha)

that wolf was about to pounce on Abhay when a hooded figure came between them n fight back..

In no time that hooded person n the wolf started fight but the wolf get highly injured n ran away...

Then the hooded person turn to a shocked Abhay n removes the hood and look into Abhay's eyes

Only then a wolf was going to attack him from back.

but the person pushed Abhay harshly n punched that wolf hard.

On being pushed Abhay bumped his head into tree... his head started bleeding n he faint.

SOMEWHERE IN JUNGLE

Sid and some police officers were searching for Abhay as they found his car outside the forest..

OTHER PART OF JUNGLE

After defeating the wolf that hooded person came near Abhay n was going to heal him ..but on sensing other humans that person ran away with a inhuman speed

Sid & the officers reached n found unconscious Abhay lying there

Immediately Sid ran to Abhay

Sid: Abhay? ...Abhay akhe kholo ...O God kitna khoon bahraha hai...

Sid picked Abhay's lifeless body n drove towards Raichand Mansion

RAICHAND MANSION

Doctor came out of Abhay's room

Dr.: Dekhiye ghabrane ki koi baat nahi hai... he is fine now...Subha tak unhe hosh aajayega...Maine kuch medicine de hai unhe time pe dete rahiyega...I shud leave now...

when the doctor left Chandeena & Sid enters Abhay's room

Haseena sat near Abhay n hold his hand.

She cares Abhay's bandaged head

Haseena with teary eyes: bacha plz akhe kholo I can't see u like this..

Chand put his hand on Haseena's shoulder

Chand: He is fine Haseena ...doctor ne kahana Abhay ko subha thak hosh ajayega ...sambhalo apne aapko..

While Sid was silently looking at Abhay's pale face with his teary eyes.

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Posted: 7 years ago
#36
Loved it
Thnx for the pm dear
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Posted: 7 years ago
#37
Always wanted to see this friendly relation between Abhay and Kabir... Nice update!
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
#38
Congratulations on your story
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Posted: 7 years ago
#39
Character Sketch is very Interesting
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Posted: 7 years ago
#40
Wow abhay & kabir became friends
Loll misha introduction was really interesting
Kabir & misha fight like tom & jerry so cute
On the other hand abhay was totally shocked knowing misha is pia's sister
Oh god abhay is in danger
I feel that wolf is jai & pia saved abhay
Abhay families were so worried for him
Why abhay dad & Sid have such hated relationship?
Thank god sid came with police in time & took abhay from the jungle
Glad nothing happened to abhay
Continue plz

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