Abhiya ff: Destined To Be Alone * Chapter -14 :updated*

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Supervampire

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Posted: 7 years ago

#11

total opposite cs from show

Raichand are human nd dobrial are vampire

interesting story

Congrats for second ff

All the best

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Pkyekdiehardfab

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Posted: 7 years ago

#12

CHAPTER-1

A lady enters a lavish room and sit near a boy who is sleeping.

Lady: Abhay beta ? abhi tak so rahe ho college nahi Jana kya?

Abhay: Mom plz thora aur sone do na...

Mrs.R : No beta jaldi Karo warna first day hi late ho jaoge.

Abhay: okay mom..mom bhai ghar par hai kya..

Mrs.R: Ha ...

Abhay : okay main abhi ready ho kar ata hu..

Mrs.R: thik hai tum jaldi aao main breakfast ready karti hu..

Abhay: okay mom.

Abhay quickly gets ready for college n run towards Sid's room..

Sid was getting ready for his office. Abhay hug him from back.

Abhay: bhai...

Sid: Are my baby brother utt gaye kaise ho..

Abhay: mujhe aapse baat nahi karni bhai. ( n makes a puppy like face)

Sid: O God to mera bhai mujhse naraz hai ..waise kyu naraz hai mera bhai

Abhay: kyu ki kal aap mujhe airport se lene nahi aye aur ghar pe bhi nahi mile.

Sid: m so sorry Abhay... wo kal mere bahut imp meeting thi is liye main airport nahi aapaya aur jab ghar aaya to dekha ki tum ek innocent baby ki tarah so rahe ho...

Abhay: wo sab main nahi janta aapne galti ki hai so aapko punishment milegi..

Sid: okay baba m ready for the punishment.. .to. kya hai mere punishment..

Abhay: aapko mere ek wish puri karni hogi..

Sid: Jo hukum mere aaka ...to kya hai aapki wish..

(sid said in a dramatic way)

Abhay: hehehe ...u r looking so funny bhai...main apne wish apko baad me bataunga..

Suddenly Haseena called Abhay for breakfast..

Abhay: bhai chaliye breakfast karne ..

Sid : tu ja Abhay main yahi karlunga..

Abhay: but bhai aap yaha breakfast kyu karange..

Sid: oho ...tu bahut questions karta hai ...maine kaha na main yahi kha lunga tu ja niche or else u will get late..

Abhay made a sad face.

Abhay: bhai aapne kaha that ki aap mere wish puri karoge yehi meri wish thi ...but its okay agar aapko mere wish puri nahi karni to..

n he started to leave, but Sid hold his hand..

Sid : sad maat ho plz I can't see u like this ...chal sath me breakfast karte hai..

Abhay smiling: really bhai (n he hug sid) m so happy...

Both Sid & Abhay came down for breakfast..

chand & haseena were shocked to see Sid .

Haseena thought n smile: I know ab abhay agya hai to sab thik ho jayega.

After breakfast Abhay went to college

He was so excited to start a new phase of his life...

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I wanna apologize to all the readers here for not replying to their comments properly.. Actually m stuck with this "10 post in 24 hrs " rule😡

...can u guys tell me till when I'll have to suffer like this😭...I can't pm too 😭

Edited by Pkyekdiehardfab - 7 years ago

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Pkyekdiehardfab

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Posted: 7 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: janumkrk
you mean pia is vampire am i hearing right???

ABHAY an human so good...

so now pia will say "stay away from me..."

start soon

yea u heard right😛

Piya is a vampire here..😉

N yes..here she gonna sing "Stay away from me..." Song here🤣

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yuvashree

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Posted: 7 years ago

#14

where is the vampire entry... my abhay is just behaving normally... sleep like innocent baby waking late... bro romance, hehehe i can't believe my abhay being so normal.

ohh god am loving this ff... continue soon

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Pkyekdiehardfab

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Posted: 7 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Supervampire
interesting 👏
pia is vampire nd abhay is human
continue...

Thanks for reading😊

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Pkyekdiehardfab

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Posted: 7 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: soniakhanna01
Interesting ,so abhay is a human in this story.update soon.congratulations for your new ff👍🏼

Thanks for reading dear😊

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Pkyekdiehardfab

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Posted: 7 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: eufara_naghm
Interesting
Continue soon
Thank you for the pm

Thanks for reading dear😊

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Pkyekdiehardfab

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Posted: 7 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: --Evil_Angel--
Nice changes..
Excited for the concept..
Cont. Soon..

Thanks for reading

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Pkyekdiehardfab

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Posted: 7 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: eufara_naghm
Continue soon

Thanks for reading

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Pkyekdiehardfab

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Posted: 7 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: janumkrk
where is the vampire entry... my abhay is just behaving normally... sleep like innocent baby waking late... bro romance, hehehe i can't believe my abhay being so normal.

ohh god am loving this ff... continue soon

vampires will enter in next part.

I just tried to present a sweet and cute Abhay 😛

M glade u love this ff😳