abhiya ss: my love only for you chapter 5 on page 5

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Posted: 8 years ago
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guys i am starting a new ss finally i understood howw to update chapters with the help of asshi aapi
thanku so much was not in a mood to write that old one but i promise that will update th first chap
soon ok i think i should shutup.i am posting the first chap instead of the prologue
chapter 1

abhays pov: i was living in dehradun the city was hot in summer i remembered how much i like the
country side i enjoyed everything in the country villages we recently went there 3 months back
i wanted to see the country again so i sat in my car and drove all night in the country .in the morning
i could see the beautiful blue sky and the birds singing

suddenly the car stopped what happened i thought oh no i hav no petrol thats silly now i have to walk to a town in search of peteol i took out my mobil and went to map but i remembered i don s she was scaredt have wifi
even i got a strong feeling that i was not near a town oh god what will i do now .and then i saw a young beautiful walking at the corner of the road with some flowers in her hand.She had brown eyes
silky and glossy hair that were shone in the sun and was wearing a long dress .i wanted to talk to her so i stood up

piya pov:i saw him coming towards me he was so handsome he had oceanic blue eyes he was wearing a tight black shirt which was showing his well built body with blue jeans and i couldnt help to stare at him
abhay pov i asked her i don hav petrol can u pls help me i saw that sh was scred so i spoke softly
pls can u tell me wher can i find some
she replied in her beautiful and soft voice think u should come to the village there i think we can help u
what a pretty girl i thought yeah yeah i will come i was really happy to go with her actually i started liking her and they both startd walking through the forest




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Posted: 8 years ago
#2
pls do tell me that i should continue or not
good or bad comments i dont mind at all infact i feel good that someone is telling me pls do tell
me with your precious comments and pls ignore mistakes
buddy me if you want pms

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Posted: 8 years ago
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nice story
please next time long chapters post karna
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Posted: 8 years ago
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congrats for new story
first chapter is nyc but short 😃
continue...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: bestpasstime

nice story

please next time long chapters post karna

ok and thanku somuch for your comment 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Supervampire

congrats for new story

first chapter is nyc but short 😃
continue...

thanku so much will try to give long updates
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Posted: 8 years ago
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chapter 2

abhays pov:we were walking through the forest i was continiously staring at her and she was smiling but she didnt looked at me i thought that she knew i was staring at her.i asked her several questions like what is her name she answered piya in a very soft voice than there was silence than i finally
asked dont you wan to know mine she giggled softly oh my gld i am going crazy wait a minute am i
really no no no.than she said whats yours i answered me abhay abhay raichand

piya pov: raichand i thought i dont know but i get a feeling that he is the trustee of the school no piya
that cant happen there must be many raichands in the world he saw me i was smiling
he said u look really very beautiful when u smile and i blushed he saw me blushing and laughed

abhays pov: then we finally reached the village the thing i remembered was that i had seen this place before the village was quite beautiful there were lots of animals and i saw a man entering a house .the house had two floors down was quite big and the up one had a room it was so cold there .we came infront o the house and then she said please come and i went in happily ther was a big room with small sofas and a kitchen and a room i met uncle and aunty i mean arnab dobriyal and madhu dobriyal so her full name was piya dobriyal they were nice people and i liked them then uncle said u must be thirsty by walking so long i smiled in return he said piya bring im some water she said yes papa i saw her angelic face and then her soft skin i wanted to tuch her she brouht the glass of water
and i took the glass with both of my hands so i could touch her.i touched her hands and she was blushing.she removed my hand and went and sat with her mother than i said thanku

piya pov:he hold my hands oh my god i was smiling so brightly and he notuced it ane smiled back at me no it cannot happen oh god

[DIV]abhays lov:she looked so beautiful smiling i was staring at her when aunty cleared her throth and brought me bavk to reality than I saw piya was smiling at me than ii asked uncle do u have petrol I wished they don't have because I want to spend time with her I don't want to leave then he surprised me by saying what is petrol what I thought am I dreaming I said to him how yo travel he said we travel on horsesdontyou have cars than madhu aunty said ni that thing with four wheels only trustees have those ok ok enough of this conversation madhu piya beta go and show him the village he asked me do you want to or u need some rest no no Ill love to see the village than she said ok papa and then we both went out

arnabs pov ; they look so nice with each other I thought madhu don't u think piya likes abhay yah you are roght arnab nand seems like he also likes her but youknow na arnab there is suchabig difference in both of them then I spoke I wish my piya could get someone like him who cares for her yes arnab madhu said

piyass pov ;we were walking together he was again staring at me at last he spoke what a wonderful villageits different from the city I wish I could also have a house here .I wanted to laugh but I contolled myself he said what I said why do u want a house here u must be having a really big house but still u are reightthe scenery Is so beautiful but nothing is more beautiful than u I saw him he wanted to say something but suddenly a shout came oh no please someone help and we quickly turned

guys I hope youlike it worked so hard to make it big tell me how is it and pls ignore mistakes and hit like and comment
Edited by lily2003 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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chapter 1 and 2 updated pls comment karna mat bhool na
love
laiba
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Posted: 8 years ago
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it was nice and beautiful update... do update soon..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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it is a nice update
they both like each other
now who is coming in story
update soon i want to know who is shouting for help in end of chapter

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