abhiya ss: my love only for you chapter 5 on page 5 - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
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its lovely update...abhiya already love each other company
wait for know that who is crying for help? pia is vry shy types...don't speaking more
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Posted: 8 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: abhiya2405

it was nice and beautiful update... do update soon..


thankyou so much will update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: bestpasstime

it is a nice update

they both like each other
now who is coming in story
update soon i want to know who is shouting for help in end of chapter


thankyou yah they both like each other and you will come to know who is shouting will update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Supervampire

its lovely update...abhiya already love each other company

wait for know that who is crying for help? pia is vry shy types...don't speaking more

thanku i am happy you liked it yes you will know it soon who is crying for help u will see how shy pia is
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Posted: 8 years ago
#15
thanku so much guys for your wonderful comments will be updating to night or tomorrow 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: lily2003

thanku so much guys for your wonderful comments will be updating to night or tomorrow 😊

ok...waiting😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#17
hello everyone i am so sorry that i am updating so late its almost a
month but i really had some personal issues so pls forgive and thankyou so much for having patience so here goes the the next chapter

chapter 3
piyas pov: oh no please some body help we heard the shout and turned around .The sound was familiar to me we ran towards the well from where the shout was coming .when i saw i totally got panicked it was kabir my best friend he was taking a cart which was fulll of charity he was taking the cart to the only school in our village and suddenly i saw two giant horses coming towards i shouted please some body help him and then i saw a man standing in front of the horses and saying calm downy iy syaw yhim as he said look into my eyes and they calmed down it was noney otyher than abhay and from that time i started feeling something about a feeling that i never felt for anyone after the horses got relaxed the villagers came and took them in the stable i ran to kabir i said are u ok i helped him stand she said i am fine pia he saw abhay and said by howing infront of him he said thanku somuch for saving my life he said no problem i am glad u are fine now

abhays pov: i shifted my eyes from kabir to pia i saw her smiling and that smile made me feel so happy and i smile her back the next thing is saw kabir mother and uncle aunty coming towards me and i can see kabir mother almost crying she said thanku son for saving kabir i said no problem then i shifted my gaze towards piya she was holding kabirs hand and saying sometbing i got extremely jealous and i thought that how cute we will look if she will be holding my hand stop it abhay you shouldnt think somuch about piya u just came to know about her today onky and u are going crazy for her my thoughts got interrulted when i saw uncle saying abhay u and piya also come in i said yeah sure after when they went no one was standing there except for me and piy it was already evening when the incident happened and now it was night she was standing 2 feets away from me she came running and hugged me tightly i was surprised by her act and i thought she was also surprised that what she is doing but still i felt that pls god make us stay like this forever oh that silly i am scolding myself not to think like this but still i come on the same point she parted from me and i saw her blushing than i heard madhu aunty saying pia I need your help by hearing the voice she quickly backed off from me bluffing and she said in Ber soft voice please come in and we started walking to the house

Precap: piyas POV
Ahh I shouted and closed my eyes in fear when a strong grip of hands hold me by my waist I opened my eyes and saw it was abhay he was staring at me and I was also lost in him
Edited by lily2003 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#18

guys my exams are starting so dont know when i will get time to update but i will try to give chapter 4 in between my exams

laiba
Edited by lily2003 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#19
important note
every one i forgot to explain that the cart which kabir was taking to the school got slipped by water on the ground and as the cart jumped the horses got seperated from cart making kabir fall on the ground
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Best of luck for exams and thank you for such a nice update

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