Threeshot : A Matter Of Life And Death Part 3 Page 10/3 May - Page 9

Awesome👏 aahhh am seriously addicted to your writing . Eagerly waiting 😊

Originally posted by: --geny--

Just WoW WoW update...made me emotional at confession time...with each flow had many feelings while reading..somewhere *goosebumps* too!Beautiful written and i love ur some witty lines... and possessive Abhay...!Unexpected update...i predicted something else but i loved this one...enjoyed reading and it was one of ur mind blowing writing!

Thank you, am glad you enjoyed reading :)

Originally posted by: shreyarupa

Wow! Another brilliant story from you! 👏

It was different, experimental yet beautifully written. The scenes between Abhiya were really very realistic even though they were supposed to be Yamaduts. That's the thing I love about your stories- REALISTIC. 👏

Now , again I am speechless. Really, nothing much to say! 😃

And...will be waiting for your next work! 😊

I think pretty much all my stories are an experiments 😆 Thanks a lot. I'm really happy you liked it.

I don't know when I'm going to write next. The response is so overwhelming that I'm quite overwhelmed 🤣

Originally posted by: mahi4ever

Awesome👏 aahhh am seriously addicted to your writing . Eagerly waiting😊

Thanks so much Mahi :)

Originally posted by: SANJANA9167

i loved reading it shreya absolutely amazing update
Pia was yet again confused too comit to ABHAY seems like her past scars ya relationship still scares her.
Haan the game they played was quite funny,even though PIA tried to flirt with some idiot but ABHAY played well.
I loved it ,I was sure ABHAY was faking when he was about to explain about FALL
yama did his job finally letting PIA knew why and how ABHAY landed in hell
That was emotional still that sadistic yama found it funny.
Finally both gave into thier feelings, I really visualised PIA expressions while abbhay said he faked it all the tym.
Thanks for a lovely update
Hope I get to read another work of yours soon

Yeah Piya was a commitment phobe.
I won't say Yama was sadistic as to him it was just silly of them to withhold information from each other, so he did the needful :)

I'm glad you liked reading it. No idea when I would be able to write again as I am so overwhelmed by the response you know 🤣 Thanks for liking and commenting!

Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--

Yeah Piya was a commitment phobe.
I won't say Yama was sadistic as to him it was just silly of them to withhold information from each other, so he did the needful :)

I'm glad you liked reading it. No idea when I would be able to write again as I am so overwhelmed by the response you know 🤣 Thanks for liking and commenting!

No need to thanks dear
It's my pleasure to read such unique works
Wilb waiting for your another unique one

Amazing update . Pia has been a detached person for too long & that is why she did what she did . Only Abhay could have handled her & knew how to push her over the edge . Yama played Cupid for both of them . Abhay 's idea of making her jealous worked big time . Even when she was in her denial mode she couldn't stop herself from being there for him when he needed some one . The final revelation by Yama about Abhay taking her place was like the final straw . She couldn't just stop herself anymore though she did accept him a long time ago . The final scene where Pia was literally pleading for Abhay to give her one chance was lovely . She was too desperate not to lose him . It was an awsum story & loved reading it . It was unique in its own manner . Just loved it .

Nice update..Piya was so confused for her own feelings bt later Abhay pushed her to the edge..
She was so eager to find out about Abhay's punishment & Finally, she came to know abt that.I loved how she was shouting at him for not telling her about all this.
I love their confession alot. U wrote it really Beautifully
Thanks for pm.Keep writing 😳
It was Amazing reading this ts 👏

Definitely an interesting read. 👍🏼 In most stories Abhay is the one in denial about his feelings so it was nice to see it the other way round. The good old game of jealousy always does the trick and it did produce the desired effect on Piya, but the truth about Abhay's punishment was what made Piya yell out her love for him from a roof top. Loved the confession part. Thank you for this story dear. 😊

Loved the story a lot. Piya loved Abhay too but she wouldn't voice it out. She needed something big to push her and that something was a combination of jealousy and the truth about Abhay's time spent in hell. This was surely fun to read. 😊