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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello everyone here is the new and first chapter of this ff exclusively for u all
Happy reading😊

Tangled Lives
The Mystery Begins...

CHAPTER 1


(Present)

Mt, College

Its early morning with a new day of another year of the college. Students have gathered to their regular places for discussions about what would happen this year, etc. A car comes through the gate in the parking lot and the playboy or the flirty of the college gets down with his handsome good looks and a charming smile to the girls of the collegewho immedietly start dolloring over him. He is none other than our Kabir'

Lamborgini murcielago lp640 Kabir's car

Kabir


As Kabir was busy in charming girls, he got a hit on his head and shouted ouch, then turned and angrily shouted Misha'.


Behind him there was a girl in her tomboyish avataar, with short curly brown coloured hair, laughing at him and said, "Now stop it Thakur, today is the only first day, and you started ot that you had enough all these years, for god sake its our last year." Kabir cut Misha and said, "yeah, thats what I m saying its our last year. Ab nahi karenge toh kab budhape me. Comon Champ now u stop hitting me and lets find the others." Misha,"Oh comon Thakur we don't need to find them we know where they could be. One in library, love birds must be doing their PDAs and remaining ones in the canteen. Lets go." Misha goes And Kabir follows her, they go to canteen and find their whole group expect one, Kabir and Misha wave their hands go to their group. They both go to their group which were sitting at the table.

Ruhi (Tracker)

Angad


Maya


Jeh


Kabir and Misha came and also sat along with them.

Misha, "where's Abhay?"

Tracker, "As usual in the library, where else can he go, we asked him to join us but he refused and said that he would see us dirctly at the class and went away to the library."

Misha, "See Thakur I told u na "

Kabir joining his hands and bending down saying, "Tum mahan ho Misha Devi aap ki kripa sadev bani rahe"

Misha raising her hand and giving aashirvad to Kabir " Ladkiyon se door raho "

All started laughing along with misha and Kabir making faces at Misha. Misha saw T coming and Announced, "Look Kabir u forgot ur garbage there. (to T) Hello hello christmas tree." All turned to T and starting laughing. T stomped her foot in angerand called Kabir. Maya " Go ur gf is calling u" Kabir " friend sirf friend ah get that" and went to T. Tracker "Tu bhi na Misha. Uss T ko pareshan karne ka ek moka bhi nahi chodti ho."

Angad " Tumne T ka chehera dekha kya?"

Jeh "Pura red hogya tha jab tumne usse christmas tree kaha thaa"

They all were still laughing .

Library

A boy was arranging the books in the shelf, who was tall wearing cobalt blue- black coloured checks shirt. A grand mother age woman called him," Abhay" tha boy turned having dimple smile on his face and a twinkle in his intense blue hypnotic eyes.

Abhay

Dida (just imagine her as grand mother)

Abhay "yes Dida"

Dida "Thanks dear. Tumne toh sare books arrange kar diye."

Abhay "Ab iss college ki sabse khubsurat girl ne mujhse help mangi or mein na karu yeh kabhi ho sakta hai kya bhala."

Dida "Besharam. (Dida catches Abhay's ear) Tumhe zarasibhi sharam nahi aati, ab mein tumhare dadima ki umar ki hu."

Abhay "Dida kaan toh chodo dard ho rahe plz. (Dida leaves his ear) Vese mene kya aisa kehediya, u r really so beautiful from ur heart (Dida melts) and at this age ur even hot and sexy."

Abhay kisses Dida's cheek and ran away from there leaving Dida in shock.

Dida smiling "Badmash. Bhagwan iss ke zindagi me jo akela pan hai usse door kar do mujhse ab or nahi dekha jata iss ka akelapan, plz god plz."

"Kis ke liye pray kar raho ho?"

Dida turned to find her husband is standing behind her

Dida "Adi aap kab aye? Mein toh bas Abhay ke bareme soch rahi thi"

Adi


Adi "Sona, (cupping her face in his hands) tum uske bareme itni chinta mat karo sab ke liye koi na koi bana hota hai jaise hum do vese hi Abhay ke liye bhi koi na koi bana ho ga waqt anr par vo do no bhi mil jayenge. Btw, Piyali Kahatak Pohochi?"

Mt. College Campus

A girl wearing cobalt blue colour chudidar with black embroidary entres the college, all boy heads automatically turns towards the girl, scanning her from top to bottom. A group of senior students gather arround her and are circling her.

Boy 1 "what's ur name...behenji?"

Girl 1 "Let it be, WE will call her behenji only. So behenji as u r new in this college u have to follow some rules"

Girl 2 "Rule 1 when ever u see us or any one of us u will salute us

Rule 2 what ever we will tell u u will do it without asking any questions"

The new girl who was standing there just walked out from there without giving them a hoot. All where shocked by this act of the girl and the senior group was hell shock and angry at her. A boy from went to her in anger and hold her hand to stop her but to his and every ones surprise she caught his hand and twisted it back which caused the boy to turn and cry in pain.

New girl " My name is Piyashree and i m ur new Professor, get that in ur empty head."

Piyashree


Piyashree jerked him forward whiched caused him to fall on his face and she went away. All were beyond shock and that group was tembling with fear of restication.

Piyashree brought her book out which she was reading and started walking towards the class while reading the book. From the other side Abhay was running towards the class as he was getting late and dashed Piyashree at right angle point means the corrner and both of them fell down.

Abhay "Kya yaar, tum dekh kar nahi chal sakti."

Piyashree while getting up "Mein dekh kar nahi chal sakti ya tum dekh kar nahi chal sakte. Bhaag toh aise rahe ho jaise kt tumhari train chuti jarahi ho. Idiot"

Abhay in anger "Mein idiot toh tum stupid. Ek toh galati karti ho or sorry bolne ke bajae mujh par hi chilati ho. Baat toh aise karti ho jaise tum khud bade dhyanse chal rahi thi, tum toh apni uss book ke andar ghussi padi thi"

And he went from there without waitting for her reply.Piyashree now started to find her book and she found it lying in a corrner and she also went off to the class cursing Abhay.

In class

It was research class, all the students were sitting at their regular places. Kabir, Misha, Maya, Jeh, Tracker and Angad were sitting 2 on each bench from 3rd bench onwards. Abhay hurriedly entered into the class cursing Piyashree and sat on the 2nd bench (which was only empty).

Misha "Abhay kya hua, Kise itna kosraheho"

Abhay "Nothing yaar bas ek girl thi, usski apni galati thi aur mujhe lucture de rahi thi. Really she was the stupid girl"

At the same time Piyashree entred the class and Abhay+Piyashree both were shocked to see each other and anger rose in both, but Piyashree calmmed down her self and went towards him and sat besides him (class was full). By the time Ms. Das Gupta came and welcomed everyone.

Ms.D "Welcome everyone. I m ur Research teacher..."

Abhay angerily in wisphers "y r u sitting besides me?"

Piyashree calmly "Becoz class was full other wise no interest in sitting besides idiotics"

Abhay was now hell angry, but calmed himslf as Ms.D called his name, "Abhay, let's start the intro with u"

Abhay stood up and introduced himself. "Hello everyone, I m Abhay Raichand and last year student. Thank u" and he sat back to his sit. Then Ms.D called to Piyashree. "Now start with some new comer. Ya u, the girl besides Abhay. Tell us about urself"

Piyashree stood to introduce herself but someone announced, "Piyashree Jaiswal"

Guys iss ff mein aap sabko bahut sare surprises milne wale hai, so hold on to ur paitience level.

Do Read like and comment.

I also need a banner Plz some one make banner for this ff plz, from my side.😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
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amazing update
love abhiya fight
piya is smart
and abhay is a bookworm
interesting
thanks for update

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Posted: 9 years ago
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hey dear quite an amazing update... I'm really waiting for ur story mystery to reveal...& I loved the the whole scene of college & abhay a lot hez so cute... & abt piya can't say anything soon...
so I wanna say u that u wrote ur update very well...so keep it up as its ur first attempt to write...:)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: NamrataPatil

Tangled Lives

PROLOGUE

1997

Near the mountains were thich vegetations was there, a hut was on fire and screems were coming from inside of the hut, there war a woman who was pregnent and was having labour pains. She was wearing dark blue colour saree with golden border in 2 strips. As the flams rose high the screem would increase, there was no one to help her, to save her, flames had rosed very high as if covering all the sides of the hut like curtains as no one should penitrate through it to see whats happning inside. The flames rose so high and we hear a deadly screem and no sooner the screem vanished we hear the cry of the baby. And with that first cry of the baby the rains started pouring heavily and nature dancing with heavy blowing wind in so much happiness that they could not describe, as if what they were praying for from centuries had now finally happened. As if this new born has given them hope for peace. All the forces of nature were celebrating the birth of the new born.

Somewhere in the mountains an old aged man was strolling around near the forest on the road when suddenly it started pouring cats and dogs, he took shelter in a nera by tea stall. As he observed the nature he smiled widely and said to himself in his mind that the soul has taken birth and when time will come destiny would bring the soul to its ultimate destination. He will just have to wait till the time comes.

This is my first time😳 so sorry for the mistakes and plz guide me through this journey.

For pm please add me😎

Happy reading


Index

Chapter 1 - pg. 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome start... T garbage..christmas tree... Hehehe... Is Abhay a bookie ...alwayzz in library.. Pia collide with abhay.. Their first meeting.. Nice.. Going great... Thanks for pm.. ;) and cont.soon.. :))
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting concept. I guess dat baby was piya. Plz continue.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Mystery of Tangled Lives


PART 2

Piyashree stood to introduce herself but someone announced, "Piyashree Jaiswal"

All heads turned towards the source i.e. towards the door, where an Inspector with his 2 constables and a sweating principal, was standing and now wwalked into the class.

Inspector," Hum hai Inspt. Pandey aap log hume Rhobinhood bhi bula sakte hai-"

Piyashree cut him and said,"Aapne hume kaise yaad kiya, Inspt. Rhobinhood Pandey?" scarcasim visible in her voice.

Inspt.-" Well, it's not me it's he, who wanted to meet you so I brought them here, to you"

Piyashree-"Who he?"

Inspt. pointed towards the door at a standing boy of age approx 10. No sooner Piyashree saw that boy and uttered in shock,"Raghav"

And the boy ran and hugged her tightlywith tears streaming down his cheeks. Piyashree soon parted from him and while holding him she asked him,"Raghav. What are you doing here? Tumhe toh vaha..."

Raghav -" No Akka. Mein wapis nahi jaunga, vaha sabke dil kaale hai. Par mene diya saaf dil se hi jalaya tha, woh sab aap se nafarat karte hai aapko doshi mante hai jabki aap ne unn sabke liye kya kuch nahi kiya. Mein nahi jaunga unke pass vahapar sab log bure hai mujhe unke bich nahi rehna , mein aap ke saath rehne chahta ho."

Piyashree sitting down on her knees to level him up and cleaning his tear sticken face with her hand said in clam voice "Aisa tumse kisne kaha? Aur rahi baat mere saath rehne ki toh yaha na mere rehneka tikana hai aur na toh kkhane pine ka hai toh tumhe kaise mein apne pass rakhu?"

Raghav-" Because i heard them saying that they would find you and kill you and noe they are searching for you Akka They want to kill you. I can't let them kill you They are the bad people that's why I came here to tell you and to protect you" Piyashree cassed his face lovingly and said "Sorry but I can't".

Raghav in pleading voice,"Akka mujhe kuch nahi chahiye, mein bhuka reh lunga, aap jaha bhi aap rahogi mein bhi aapke saath rahunga, koi shikayat nahi karunga, aapko pareshan bhi nahi karunga, aap jaha bologi vaha mein aapke saath chalunga, koi sawaal bhi nahi karunga, mujhe sirf aap chahiya , sirf mujhe meri Akka chahiye aur kuch nahi." With last line he said and hugged her, Piyashree also hugged him tight. He parted from her and looked at her with his pleading eyes and kept muttering,"Please Akka i want to be with you..."

Whole class was witnessing this and were more curious about the boy and in the nick of time Dida and Adi entered, they had listened to their conversation.

Dida with a smila on her face "Piyali, beta he is requesting so much to you, please manjao na, he loves you alot"

Piyashree -" It's not about him leaving with me, it's about mein kese ussko usske neccissities provide kar paungi. It would have been a complete opposite thing if I had all those things but now I don't have a single pennie with me I gave it all. Dada can't you understand the situation, I have nothing with me. I can tolerate anything but Raghav is just 10, just a small kid, he won't be able to"

Dada (Adi) -"If that is the only case then we have the upper floor of our house empty and were wanting to have someone to stay with us and if thats not enough then we can offfer you a job also them\n that will be ok with you two.

Raghav requesting "Please Akka...please.."

Piyashree accepting her defeat," Fine "

Raghav hugged her again but this time in happiness and Piyashree too.

As piya noticed her surroundings she started turning scarlet due to embaressment and nervesness. Abhay noticed this and smiled a small smile by thinking of something. As Raghav parted from Piyashree and ran towards Dida and Dada

Dida asked looking at her," Piyali why are you turning scarlet?"

On this questioned she turned deep red and murttured a nothing to them and went back to her sit and sat back.

With this everyone except the reliefed principal , teacher and studnts went out. Principal made anannouncement, " Attention students, I did to introduce you to Piyashree Jaiswal, our new rsearch student and your new Professor in litreture and not just that, she has got a full Harason Scholarship, one of the prestigious and a really difficult one to get"

Everyone was shocked and surprised, with such reaction from everyone Piyashree again turned scarlet. Principal then continued,"And one more thing, you all will gona have 4 research subjects this year i.e. History, Litereture, Ayurveda and the last one of your own choice. These all researches are to be done in pairs given by me and i have decided that with whom you are sitting are your partners. And mind you all, if anyone research not done properly or done without the contribution of both the partners in anyone also will not be allowed to sit for final exams. Got that! I am circulating a paper, write your and your partner's name sitting besides you and do it fast and give it to Ms. Das Gupta. (to Ms.D.) Sumit the list after the class."

Misha - Kabir, Maya - Jeh, Angad - Tracker were partners and were happy, T was not as she wanted to be paired up with Abhay.

Abhay - Piyashree were paired up Abhay was fine with it but Piyashree was not, she was again turning red due to anger.

Abhay with a naughty smile whispers to Piyashree,"Comon Cherry now there is no use of this anger we have to work together for the whole year on 4 research subjects." Piyashree was surprised on what Abhay had named her and asked,"What?? What did you callme with?"

Abhay "Cherry because you are most of the time as red as a cherry"

Piyashree - "Don't call me that"

Abhay - "I will, Cherry"

And the bell rang with Abhay outside the class and Piyashree inside red in angre.

Do read like and comment.

Happy Valentines day to you all.

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It's superb dear
Happy valentine day to u too
N thanks for update
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Awesome update... Thanks for the pm..
Continue soon..

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