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Posted: 9 years ago
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[COLOUR=black]Mystery of Tangled Lives[/COLOUR]

Hola everyone.
The name is Namrata but I prefer Nammu. I'm a huge 'Abhiya' fan or you can say 'Pyaar kii yeh ek Kahaani' fan and this is their story by me and my 1st write up hope you all will enjoy it as much as I enjoy it writing. Here you all are welcomed, the good comments and even the criticism. Any problems with my story or any track is boring just tell me will change it or try something else. And one more thing this story is in English-Hindi language anyone having difficulty in reading then tell me I post it in fully English only. I wanted to have it fully English only but other forums public demanded in English-Hindi so... but if any of you want it fully English then I'll try n make it.
Now moving onto the story ...

This story is fully supernatural as per the demands but at the same time it is more human love story. This story is a full package of actions, mystery, romance, drama, comedy, revenge, love, hate, dark, light, death and life.
It is a dark love story but still having the light within it self, light of hope, love, happiness.
This story is possibly of 2 persons searching the meaning of their existence and their destiny. They would cross their roads but will they accept their destiny after knowing it, what it wants from them, for them.
A soul was brought into world by the ritual to gain power by power hungry people, but was taken away from them by it's mother, a mere human.
Another soul came into existence for the 1st one, to protect it and keep it safe from those greedy hands. But is unknown to its destiny now. No memory it there to know it's master, searching the cause of it's life.
Will they ever know about each other and if know will they accept each other.
To know what happened please read the story because this time history will repeat it self to create history.

If you want to compliment or even criticize then do it in comments box. I would love to know your views.

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Part 1 - pg. 1
Part 2 - pg. 2
Part 3 - pg. 4
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rmifzala thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#2
hey namrata...prologue...is interesting... 😊
do continue...
& all the best for ur writing 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#3

Originally posted by: rmifzala

hey namrata...prologue...is interesting... 😊
do continue...
& all the best for ur writing 😊


thanks for encouragement🤗😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Seems nice ... Intriguing !
bestpasstime thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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its totally interesting and superb 👏
and it seems that the baby is supernatural or magical
please continue this story and update soon
i love to read your story 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi... First thank u for writing on abhiya. ...prologue seems supernatural... The baby is born... And now waiting for the right time... Waiting for next... Update soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: bestpasstime

its totally interesting and superb 👏

and it seems that the baby is supernatural or magical
please continue this story and update soon
i love to read your story 😊


thanks dear 🤗
btw u r right about the baby and its the lead in my ff guss who could it be???🤔😆😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: NamrataPatil



thanks dear🤗
btw u r right about the baby and its the lead in my ff guss who could it be???🤔😆😉


hey I think the baby is piya...bcz abhay always in supernatural avatar..a vampire...so the baby which is born is piya ...
I hope I'm not wrong... 😆
if I'm wrong don't take me seriously its just my assumption...
😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: NamrataPatil


thanks dear 🤗
btw u r right about the baby and its the lead in my ff guss who could it be???🤔😆😉

abhay, am i right ?
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Posted: 9 years ago
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A w e s o m e prologue.. Namata... !! Very catchy & intriguiting...!! Loved it...!! Is the baby abhay or pia.. Cont soon.. :))

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