'My life after death',(INDEX IN FIRST PAGE)Update in pg-100 - Page 21

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: My_VivJaan

read last 2 chaps
both r super awesomee!!! I m loving the story moho dear!!!

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: PRATHA1

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Awesome update Mohana! Abhay showed maithili's portrait to pia & also told about his past love to clear future misunderstanding, but if pia will get to know about the history of maithili, then it will become more difficult for Abhay to hide the truth!
Abhay brought dress for pia, he is so sweet!
waiting for the next update!

Thanks for liking it dear. I am exactly going to show that only. Pia will soon found about Maithili's history , I cant reveal more dear.😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Totally different abhay 😊 thanks for pm
very nice story
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Originally posted by: Supervampire

Totally different abhay 😊 thanks for pm

very nice story

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: vivkriti

Awesome. Thanks for the PM

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Posted: 10 years ago
The guests for the party started arriving , it was 7:00 P.M. My eyes were searching for Pia. After sometime Kabir & Misha arrived together. They both were looking gorgeous , absolutely made for each other. "Where is Pia" ,I asked them. "Chill dude, she will come but she haven't come with us", Kabir replied. "Looks like someone is anxious for Pia over here," said Misha teasingly.
The DJ haven't come yet so I only have to put the music till he comes. The moment I put my favourite track " Dil Ibadat" , Pia entered. She was looking soo beautiful, much more beautiful than in my imaginations. She looked quite nervous, her eyes were searching for something, the search of her eyes stopped as soon as they met my eyes. I felt as if no one is over there except us. With Dil Ibadat getting played at the background and Pia coming towards me slowly, it looked like a dream. A dream from which I never want to wake up. "My god, She looks just like Maithili. So she is your new friend! Abhay dont ever forget who you are", Said Mom taking me back to the reality."You dont need to worry, I know what I am ", I answered her. Pia came and stood in front of me and smiled. "Pia, she is my Mom , Mrs Haseena Raichand", I said pointing towards mom. "Hello darling, its a pleasure to have you here", Said Mom . Pia smiled innocently & shook hands with Mom. After that Mom went to recieve some other guests. "Your Mom is soo sweet & thanks for this dress". "You welcome" , I replied. She was expecting a compliment from me, I knew that by reading her mind but I purposely havent given her the compliment as I was in a mood to play with her. I wanted her to ask me how she is looking . "You wont say anything"? She asked. "Anything about what", I asked, pretending as if I dont know what she means. "Nothing", she said lowly. "Well, Pia is over here, you know Pia, someone was missing you a lot", said Misha coming near us. Before Misha could say anything more I quickly said," Misha, today you are looking gorgeous". I also have a hidden motive to tease Pia & I succeded. "He gave compliment to Misha then why didnt he said anything to me, am I not looking good?" asked pia to herself in her mind. She looked upset and I decided to end this game as my intention was not to make her upset, I cant see her sad face. "You are looking very beautiful, just like an angel", I said taking her hand in my hand and kissing it. She blushed & said,"Thanks". Her face brighten up & I understood that my reactions affects her a lot just as she affects me . There were some dance performance in the party. Kabir & Misha also performed . Suddenly Misha went up to the stage and made an announcement." Guys the next dance performance is by Abhay-Pia" , She said shocking both me & pia. "But Misha we haven't prepare anything", said Pia. Everyone started cheering for us & we were left with no other alternative. "Lets do it", I said to Pia . "But how"? She asked. "You trust me?" I asked. "More than myself", she said. "Then come", I said taking her hand in my hand. We went up to the stage and all the lights were switched off except the spot light which was on us at that time. The whole world became invisible to us and we can only see each other. Then the music started, the song was "Pyaar ki yeh ek kahani suno", we danced on it. It was like a dream, too good to be real. Finally the song ended and all the lights were switched on. We came down from the stage, Pia was still holding my hands. "Wow, you two are fantastic. I have never seen such a chemistry in my life," said Kabir."You guys were the best, really no one would believe that you did it without practising", said Misha. After that Misha went to the bar counter. She drank a lot and Kabir was busy in looking after her. "Is Misha ok?" I asked Kabir. "She is fine, its quite normal for her" , replied Kabir. I showed Pia my whole house . We sat in my room & talked for a long time. "I dont like loud music", I said to Pia. "I can understand that as we are sitting in your room instead of being in the party," she answered. "We can go over there if you want ", I said. "No, I prefer to be here with you. Lets talk for some more time. Tell me what you like to do"? She said. "I generally like to read books, tell me about you?" I said. "I love to watch movies, you know I am a big fan of Superstar Rishab Kundra( RK). I feel, you looks quite similar to him, Just your hairstyle is different," she said. "I dont watch movies so I havent seen him, " I replied. " Its 9:40, I have to go otherwise the gates of my hostel will get closed," she said. I dint wanted her to go but reluctantly I said, "Yes, I will drop you".
We reached Pia's hostel , finally its time for her to leave. "Thanks for coming , I had a great time with you. I want to give you something", I said. "What", she asked excitedly. I gave her a chocolate box. "Wow Abhay, I love chocolates soo much. How do you know this"? "I guessed it, girls generally like chocolates", I replied. "First this beautiful dress & now chocolates, you are too sweet Abhay",She said. I can do anything to see that smile on her face , in a short time she have become soo much special for me. She blushed and said ,"Good Night". After that she started moving towards her hostel gate, suddenly she stopped and turned back towards me . She gave her sweetest smile & then went inside the hostel building.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Yayyy I'm first...for once in forever 😆
Loved the update Mohana di
You mentioned RK in this as well...I love you! 😆
Dreamy RK and Dreamy Abhay
Loved the dance sequence...they are getting closer 😳
Continue soon
Edited by Abhiya4life - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Abhiya4life

Yayyy I'm first...for once in forever 😆
Loved the update Mohana di
You mentioned RK in this as well...I love you! 😆
Dreamy RK and Dreamy Abhay
Loved the dance sequence...they are getting closer 😳
Continue soon

Thanks for liking it dear . Superstar RK is my second favourite after Abhay so I thought of mentioning him too. I love Abhay & RK.Embarrassed
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thanks for liking it dear.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Very Nice update once again...
thanx 4 d pm

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