AbhIyaAT#207 *I Cant Live With Or Without U ❤️* - Page 42

Rosh then maybe u wont like what I am planning to write. Abhiya will be there but the central focus wont be on them. I dont intend to change any scenes having them I had originally planned but I am focusing on Abhay Sid relation more.

Rosh abhi bol du then surprise kaise rahega? 😛 Sabr karo kyunki sabr ka phal meetha hota hai 😆

Originally posted by: .Chashmish.

Please don't say that , I really love the romantic track of story . That's why I love guardian , it was perfect blend of love , mafia , characterisation , action and everything . Dunno why u don't like it but personally I love it . ❤️

Originally posted by: FieryHeart

Rosh to be honest in mafia there are many things u need to keep in mind. Falling in love n giving it utmost priority isn something a typical mafia guy will do. There are many things which take precedence which I ignored bigtime. I am not saying u wont fall in love but considering the backdrop if I show only romance then there is no point in choosing a backdrop like that. I can write normal romantic gibberish 😛 The central theme of Guardian was never Abhiya romance but Abhay Sid friendship and Abhay's loyalty which was lost 😭

Originally posted by: FieryHeart

Rosh thats the sad part All everyone liked if they did was the romantic angle of it but what abt the crux of the story? More than Abhiya I really spent a lot of efforts on Sid, Reva and Sana. No one bothered. All they saw were Abhiya 🤢 So in a way its my failure as a writer.

Originally posted by: FieryHeart

Rosh abhi bol du then surprise kaise rahega? 😛 Sabr karo kyunki sabr ka phal meetha hota hai 😆

Originally posted by: FieryHeart

Rosh tu guess karo 😆

Originally posted by: FieryHeart

I still feel like crying when I think of how I screwed Guardian by making it all abt romance 😭 and I barely focused on backdrop. Here n there I threw few scenes I cant bear reading it now coz it feels like garbage to me 🤢 And plz dont tell me I crib abt writing. I stopped that but abt guardian I stand firm on my what I said. I was solely responsible for the trash it became.

Tanzie u retained the focus on Abhiya right from start unlike me 😆 and u used the other characters well by making them an intrinsic part of ur story. I introduced so many characters but I shd have realised by doing so I will have to focus on them too coz every other angle was twisted but later when I read them I realised I wasted them. Even if u write a para on them they need to be used. For ex take that waitress in BD. U used her well. She came in just one update but her character was used well. U knew what u were writing n u didn waver ur focus but in my case what I wrote and what I visualised were contradicting n for a writer it gets depressing and I am sure u can understand this part.

And just to clear the air Tanzie I never said I dont like romance at all 🤣 It depends on how u mould it in ur story. Thats the mark of a true writer. U do write romance but u incorporate it in ur story seamlessly. Thats what I loved abt ur stories n I still do