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Mrs.mohit sehgal

@.Chashmish.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#401

Manu di , I have problem . I can't comment on wattpad . I tried but nothing is happening , where should I post my comments now ?

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Mrs.mohit sehgal

@.Chashmish.

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#402

Originally posted by: FieryHeart
Rosh there is another surprise though 😆 and well many of them were asking for it. So decided to go bring it on 🤣

Wat ???? 😃😃😃

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Mandy

@BeyondHorizon

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#403

Rosh writing a book isn cakewalk re 😆 My vocab is average n so is my story telling. And besides my backdrop is mafia and I have read some mindblowing hardcore stuff on it and my FF is nothing infront of it. In FFs we romanticise everything be it consciously or unconsciously and serious story telling should remain true to the plot and the essence of the characterisation shouldn be butchered with excess romance esp for a dark theme which is not my cup of tea right now 😆 I am happy writing Guardian in a blog and if it turns out to be even 10% worth publishing I will give it a thought 😛

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Mandy

@BeyondHorizon

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#404

Rosh its easy to create an acc re. U need just an email ID. Bas. If its that difficult give it here only 😆 if u catch me here else via PM. Anything is fine.

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Mandy

@BeyondHorizon

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#405

I still feel like crying when I think of how I screwed Guardian by making it all abt romance 😭 and I barely focused on backdrop. Here n there I threw few scenes I cant bear reading it now coz it feels like garbage to me 🤢 And plz dont tell me I crib abt writing. I stopped that but abt guardian I stand firm on my what I said. I was solely responsible for the trash it became.

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Mrs.mohit sehgal

@.Chashmish.

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#406

Originally posted by: FieryHeart
Rosh writing a book isn cakewalk re 😆 My vocab is average n so is my story telling. And besides my backdrop is mafia and I have read some mindblowing hardcore stuff on it and my FF is nothing infront of it. In FFs we romanticise everything be it consciously or unconsciously and serious story telling should remain true to the plot and the essence of the characterisation shouldn be butchered with excess romance esp for a dark theme which is not my cup of tea right now 😆 I am happy writing Guardian in a blog and if it turns out to be even 10% worth publishing I will give it a thought 😛

Ufff shut up , I don't think at all that your vocabulary is average . It's really very good and your story telling style is very intriguing . 😃 And oh come on , there can be a mafia lovestory too . Nothing wrong in that . I really think it would be a very nice book 😃

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Mrs.mohit sehgal

@.Chashmish.

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#407

Originally posted by: FieryHeart
Rosh its easy to create an acc re. U need just an email ID. Bas. If its that difficult give it here only 😆 if u catch me here else via PM. Anything is fine.

Oh well I never really thought of account thing , thought there was some prob in my IPad ... 😆 Sorry . I will make one then 😃

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Mandy

@BeyondHorizon

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#408

Rosh to be honest in mafia there are many things u need to keep in mind. Falling in love n giving it utmost priority isn something a typical mafia guy will do. There are many things which take precedence which I ignored bigtime. I am not saying u wont fall in love but considering the backdrop if I show only romance then there is no point in choosing a backdrop like that. I can write normal romantic gibberish 😛 The central theme of Guardian was never Abhiya romance but Abhay Sid friendship and Abhay's loyalty which was lost 😭

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Mrs.mohit sehgal

@.Chashmish.

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#409

Originally posted by: FieryHeart
I still feel like crying when I think of how I screwed Guardian by making it all abt romance 😭 and I barely focused on backdrop. Here n there I threw few scenes I cant bear reading it now coz it feels like garbage to me 🤢 And plz dont tell me I crib abt writing. I stopped that but abt guardian I stand firm on my what I said. I was solely responsible for the trash it became.

Please don't say that , I really love the romantic track of story . That's why I love guardian , it was perfect blend of love , mafia , characterisation , action and everything . Dunno why u don't like it but personally I love it . ❤️