~~~FAIRY TALE THREAD-2--WELCOME EVERY ONE~~~,Pg42,Oct9,Note-38-page - Page 19

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma

amazing os

it was a beautiful story and abhay-pia were very sweet. glad to see that none of them lost their rationality even in time of adversity.

I like the way you notice things and mention them.😳

loved it

Originally posted by: .Rhythm.

Hello Ani !

It was a lovely story.😊

I hav read the original story and I found it good.

Sm1 else has read it.What a sigh of relief ! 😆

But this ABHIYA story of THE PURPLE FLOWER was truly magical.👏

I seriously feel flattered . 😆 Thank U ! 😳

The description of the palace was really good. Loved it. Abhiya were all set to perform a contemporary dance. 😉

I see that Abhay is a smart guy, 4 he, even in his dream went to the witch quietly.😆

Piya ki sangati ka asar. Piya toh star student thi na 😆

Do u like Abhay or not ? I m asking this cause, u made Abhay a wild boar once & the second time an anteater.😆

Oi Manisha girl you know that is not true. I do like Abhay , but maine socha ki Panchi ne Piya ko ek nightingale mein turn kar diya , toh Abhay ko bhi equal footing mein daal doon. 🤣

Well, jokes apart, the way u described Abhay's pain and love for Pia is praiseworthy.

Abhay's proposal was really new and funny. 😃 Abhay never fails to turn Pia scarlet.

Nice choice of names - Aasha and Pratik.

Loved this story a lot. Always luv ur work.

Keep writing such beautiful stories. 😊

Originally posted by: Abhiya-4ever

Hy its really nice..

The way Abhay teased her was really cute

& Abhay's proposal was Sweet n beautiful

I jst hate tha Panchi 🤬

I didn't like her a lot as well 😳

Do write more on Abhiya dear :-)

Originally posted by: Dark-Beauty

Beautiful story
i love fairytales so this is my favorite
brilliantly written
thanks for pm

Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--

Okay, I confess I put off reading this story since I haven't read the original fairytale.

I like that confession dear honest friend of mine. 😳

It was cute. I liked the way you write.
You seem to have an affinity for supernatural stories huh?

Kind of 😆
Well for me the most memorable part was the proposal 🤣

Thats my favorite part too.

Keep writing.


PS. I know no one will read this but I hate seeing so many people just commenting "nice update" or "awesome" basically two words.
I wonder if this story deserves only this two words as feedback from a reader because I'm pretty sure it doesn't.

Keep your chin up Anita :)
I really liked it. :)

Originally posted by: Purple.shade

Magical !!

Anita u got a gift for supernatural stories , girl!!
Unfortunately I am just not good with words when writing comments , so my comment is going to be short compared to the others :)

First of all, Panchi witch and she is made up of fatty acids, I was seriously ROFLing.
🤣 I love u , for that ! ( Vahbiz would really hate us reading or ff 😛 )

I hope this story doesn't seriously anger Vabz , coz it was just her character in the show that I didn't like a lot and which was kind of suitable here.

Well I did enjoy using the character as it provided the story the humor I wanted to add.😊

Second of all, loved the cute Abhiya romance , and 'Habhay' part was so true! TV Pia did call Abhay like that 😆

Yes that can't be forgotten. 😆

And basically loved the story , but now my mission is to read the Jorindel story . It seems interesting!

Go ahead , I hope you wud like it. 😊

Keep it up and give us more! :D

Originally posted by: cuteariya

mind blowing OS
totally love it ❤️
abhiya confession part was quite funny yet lovely 😃
it was like fairy tale 🤗

Originally posted by: bellaaa

I just loved the concept of story

Panchi as witch ... hahahaaa ;) gud choice

Thank U ! Panchi was the only one that cud do justice to this situation i.e. according to me.

Awww abhiya r so cute & like the proposal scene :)

Keep writing .. 👍🏼

Originally posted by: .SmokeySilence.

Fabulous one. I havent read the original story, nevertheless i loved reading this.

That's not at all a surprise , many have not read it. If I didn't have it in my English Literature book in school once , probably I wudn't have known about it either. 😳

and you are a good writer Anita. im reading your another story too which i absolutely like so please keep writing more and more.

It means a lot to me that you like my story. 😃

I love the proposal btw. unique and cute 😆 and totally enjoyed reading this.

Originally posted by: sanghita0000

superb os dear...loved it