||Abhiya OS - Once In A Night||

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Don't know what's wrong with me šŸ˜• I am writing my ever first OS on my only favourite couple 😳 I really don't think its even good what I expected but still posting it because I want to know your reactions my friends šŸ˜† I really feel like slapping myself for penning it down Still posting it in the everlasting hope that u all will read it 😳 Please do like and comment 😊







Once In A Night






"Please don't leave." The little girl spoke in between her short gasps. Her eyes filled with tears and her hand wrapped in his enormous palm. "Its good if we set apart. We are not meant to be together. Just believe it Pia. Please ?" His husky voice choked as he spoke to the little Pia who was innocently staring at him with her widen brown eyes. He gazed at her, his blue hues met with the chocolaty ones, he was getting weak. She was his prey but he wont attack her. He can't destroy a life who has lighten his dark, merciless world with her cute antics and innocence with childishness. He bent a little only to hold her in his arms. When he held her, the seemed stopped for him. She is his world, his everything, his light. He wrapped his cold arms around her, protecting her from everything that will ever harm her. He sipped her tears as he kissed the eyelids of her beautiful eyes. She felt a shiver in her veins as she realized how cold he is. "You know, you are too much cold." She meekly chuckled. A wide smile crept on his lips. His dead broken heart announced a beat as he felt there is she, who will mend his shattered dead heart, the only reason of his forbidden existence. As if she heard him. " I will... I promise." She said softly. He felt immense pain in him as he realized how they are connected to each other so much that there is no need of exchanging words in between them. But she doesn't know the actual truth, if she would ever got to know what exactly he is, she will definitely leave him, she will run away from him and will never come back. He will be lost and devastated forever in his forbidden darkness. Her eyes started dropping and a warm yawn announced by her. She leaned towards him only to place her small head on his broad shoulder. She closed her eyes and whispered slowly only to wish a good night to her Predator. She wrapped her arms around his neck. It was a deep sleep as she was tired very much. Her warm breath felt on his cheek as if kissing on his cold one. He could feel her human heart rhythmically beating with her soft breath. He held her more tightly, not too much because if he use his power more on her, he would ended up of what he yearns for. She is still a human. A weak mortal and top of that a child of only 6 years. But this mere human has captured his dead unbeated heart. He gazed at her, how can someone be so like her. She is his, she is Abhay's Pia and its written on the stars as well. He placed her on his enormously large king size bed. A black silken blanket put on her by him as she was shivering from the cold breeze flowing around. He sat beside her. His eyes held so much intensity that it could turn someone else into ashes, if it was not her. The night was calm and cold and of course dark, just like him. He brushed his rough fingers on her soft,smooth pink milky cheeks and she smiled. A beautiful smile that can make smile the devil itself. The smile that can make everything so beautiful. She recognized his cold touch and her smile widened. He felt an ecstasy of something deep in him that he couldn't resist and he bent closer. The only light was some candles brewing on some chandlers in the room as today even moon didn't dare to appeared to disturb them. He bent closer to her, much closer as he felt her warm breath on his lips. His dead heart beat once again sensing the irresistible urge to broke the barrier that stopping him to getting closer to her. He would destroy everything that will come in between them. He will tear apart every single being who will take her away from him. She is his and it will be forever and ever. She was unaware of anything can happen here, because it was her devil's den. The haunted mansion stood alone in the middle of a dense forest. The dark woods echoed some deep hissed as if there was someone. But it had nothing. No one is allowed to even roam at the surface, which owns by her Predator. Even in a daylight sun rays stopped at the edge of enormously tall big trees and nothing can slaughter the devil but a feeling can, by his Angel. If he ever felt a hint of fear in those fierce baby brown eyes, it would shattered him eternally. If a fear can bound them together than the same feeling can tore them apart. His fear of loosing her. It scares him to the death that one day she will leave him, forever in his darkness. His light would be taken away from him. Only a thought of imaging his life without her has evaded him into severe destruction. He was almost on the verge to destroy his entire kingdom with him. But he didn't because she called his kingdom, his town, his place... beautiful. She loved the people out here. And he won't destroy the thing which will took her interest, Never. He planted a deep kiss on her forehead. He didn't move than. He stuck to that poised, feeling her so close with him in such precious night its what desired by him, forever. The mystical night was getting more dark. He gently took her in his lap and his arms protectively wrapped, pulling her impossibly closer to him. He also closed his eyes, just to feel the same.




She belongs to him. She is his. He will wait for her...for eternity.







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What I expected and what it turned 🤢 I seriously think I should discontinue writing 😭 I know its not my forte Don't what was that...but please like and comment people it really encourages me trust me guys šŸ˜† love u all my friends šŸ¤—

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Willy_Wonka. thumbnail
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Pls forgive my typos šŸ˜†
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omg u r back😊
i m so happy
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thanks for the pm dear
bokul thumbnail
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fantastic os
it was a bit unique too
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Shut up and keep writing.
This was a beautiful OS!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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it was super amazing shreya dear nd I loved it!!! never ever think to stop writing... got it...
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omg it was damn beautiful
& fabulous
keep writing more
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow great os please update soon
I can not wait for the next part of your story's
I do miss reading your story's so much and do countries to write the a amazing story's that we all like. And welcome back
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely OS. Loved how Abhay feels alive wid d little piya. Though u can continue this one as Piya growing up n developing feelings for him which reciprocate his.

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