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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 2 - That is a sweet confession. Abhay.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 3 - So Pia shuld understand that yes there is thin line between friendship and love... she loves him... she loves him near her... Abhay is planning to make her jealous. He is playing his card perfect. Nice update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 4 -

But y? it was me who wanted him to be normal with me...i shook those thoughts away.Sometimes I could be all weird and stupid...

😆 I loved this line and then heart attack wala.

Abhay is too much he went away saying don't run from him now. 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part5 - So finally Pia realised his love for Abhay. The end is shocking. Nice story. Keep it up and thanks a lot to share.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sketches of FATE : PART 6

After two days :

Piya's Pov

A beeping sound woke me up from my sleep.My eyes were suddenly blinded by the stream of light.My head was throbbing wildly.Every part in my body was hurting.It was as if someone was peeling my skin.


Where am I?

I heard beeps and stared at the group of white dresses rushing inside the room before I fell into the darkness once again.

Abhay's pov

I stared at her.she was no more the cheerful piya I know.The doctors said she was not fighting for her life.she had given up living.

She always wanted to live a long life.she wasnted a dozens of babies.she always wanted to die with smile on her face.

But she was dying slowly cruelly before my own eyes...and that killed me...

I then heard her talking to me something...

"I would never hurt you again Abhay"...


A tear drop rolled down my cheeks...

Plz don't cry abhay...piyas mom told me...

"aunty what will I do if she leaves me..." I sobbed like a baby...

She is only I have...she is my world...i couldn't describe my pain...

But im living it...im living through it every second while she is on her hospital bed...

AD:abhay u have to eat...

Piyas father asked me to eat...

A:no uncle I cant...and I wud fight for her with god until he decides to give her back...to me..

A:piya come back to me plz piya...i wud never do like that again...Thats a big fault of me...we could always be just friends...nothing more as u wished,...plz piya...

To be continued...

I know it's a short update friends but il update this SS daily...so plz forgive me for this...and also I want to inform u all that this story is a very short one ends in just 11 Parts sorry guys...if I dissapointed u.

Hope u all liked this PART...Thank u so much in advance for liking this PART.

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Posted: 11 years ago
#76
nice update 👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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O Abhay loves Pia so much that he decided to gave away his feelings for Pia. On other side Pia a jolly girl don't hope to live because she thinks he lost Abhay forever and she hurt Abhay. They love each other very much and it is very good part showing perfect point of view from both side through Abhay and small glance from Pia. Love this update. Keep it up and thanks for sharing it. 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#78
nice but so short 😭
tfs for pm ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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loved it
very emotional one
poor abhay is ready to compromise his feelings for her
hope everything gets well soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing updates. Abhay loves Piya so much that he is ready to give up his feelings. Lovely dear. Excited for the next part continue soon.

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