FF-Time and Again[Book 3]COMPLETE!Epilogue now up.PM list page 74* - Page 46

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Originally posted by: Pkyek.rocks

Its a disheartening fan fiction I had ever read. I don't felt a connection to the characters u described on your ff since so long. I numerously read the updates but can't felt a simple connection. Dragging a story since so long its not a good idea and now its proving to u. People really gets bored as well as reading the same thing again and again looks like a old wine in an new bottle. In India forums people like to read short story but with innovative ideas but some writers love to make it like long, boring stuffed book with nothing good in it. Maybe u should change your writing skills and try to improve to be a little better. I noticed u put a cooma in every two three words in a long line and probably u pen down short lines but its confuses the mind of reader as well as confused the story so much


It was only my opinion, if it look criticism than its your problem. A writer always faces criticism and u know that.

Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--

NOTE.

As I have already said before, this will in all likelihood be the last chapter on IF. For an extended explanation, look here.

Once the story is over, I will post the remaining ones all at once on IF. Now if someone would like to read the chapter as they get uploaded, or if you want to recieve PMs to the links, then please write it in your comments. I do not want to trouble people unnecessary with my disheartening writing and poor grammer.😆

res..
You updatd already?? 😲 you said you will update this one later!😕
thats why i thought i have time to comment.

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Why can't
humans be more responsible?" Piya glared at him, but since he was
studying something on his phone, he
didn't appear to have noticed. "I
can't believe you made such a racist
statement!" she spluttered. Now he
looked up. "Racist?" He said in surprise. "Oh...right. Sorry...I didn't
mean-" "Yes, you did." Now Abhay
looked defiant. Well, most humans are. You included,
if you were responsible, you'd have
stayed away from me." 👏wow Superb lines!👏


"Oh, forgive us for not being cold
hearted beasts," she threw at him,
her eyes flashing. "Excuse me, I'm
going to bed." She switched off the
lights and pulled out her night clothes
from the cupboard. As she turned around, she almost bumped into
Abhay, who had been standing
behind her. "What?" she said
irritably. He looked amused. "Are you
really mad at me?" She scowled. "Yes, I am." Abhay
raised an eyebrow. "How long are
you likely to remain mad at me for
one statement?" He always knew exactly how to make
her feel guilty. "Look, I'm just
objecting to treating humans as a
sub par species-" "And I could say the
same, since you just called vampire s
cold hearted beasts," he interrupted. "A true description, but
nonetheless...I wonder what Mom's
going to say when she hears that?"
She stilled. She'd said it in a moment
of anger, but now she noticed the
slight bitterness in his tone. "Abhay-" "Don't, Piya." He shook his head. "You
don't have to feel bad about that. It's
true anyway." She bit her lip. "And if I don't take offense, you
shouldn't either, right?" "I didn't mean it," she said, shaking
her head. "At least, not you anyway.
Or your family. I didn't mean to-" He silenced her with a brief kiss.
"Yeah. I get it, Piya. No need to
apologize. I won't tell Mom. Now go
change." haha..awesome. Loved these lines!❤️ Abhay sure knows how to have his way with her. Clever.😉

humm alina is having nightmares. Is that some indication?


It had been an age since Siddharth
had painted anything. But now, in
his Dehradun house, his pencil flew
over the paper, and soon a portrait
of a woman was made. His chest
seemed to constrict as he stared at a stunning likeness of the woman he
loved. She was smiling, yet not : even
in his portrait, she was enigmatic.
And he found himself wondering if
she would ever really know how
much he loved her.He grimaced. Probably not. Still, a man could
dream. He was not going to turn into
a sop like his brother. Love wasn't
everything. i sooo heart these lines! ❤️And Sidh as well!😳Simply loved the way you portrayed him and his thoughts here.👏


so Abhay likes Alaska,Iceland,Ladakh..😆well that suits him.😉 and Piya -Greece..hum nt bad Choice! ;)


so whats maithlr upto nw? On one hand She wants sidh on the otherbt she wnt let Pia have Abhay. Pretty dangerous woman! Or she she psycho? Whats her problem exactly ?😕

anyway i loved sid. He is changed so much! Quite natural for Abhay to be shocked.😳

i just want Alina n sidh to confront each other n talk about their feelings. I really want. :)

Oopps Pia in danger! Bt am sure she will be saved somehow.afteral she is the lead. Right? ;)
plus a whole gang is against maithli, so am hopeful. :P

update soon my dear. Overall it was an amazing update.🤗

anyway i already told you my wish. So Dnt forget to keep me in the list.😳

As I told you I still didn't read this book. So I can't comment on this chapter but I want pms of the links of future chapters if you are writing. I will coment on the whole story after I come to book 3. Sorry for that

Amazing update...they are getting married...but that maithili has to intrupt...😡 oh god hope piya will be fine...

That's one gripping update. Finally Sid came to abhay's rescue. I wonder what will happen to piya now.

😭 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 Want to cry for many reasons