Oh Shreya, another update within a short interval. I am so glad and also very very scared. At this speed, this would get over soon. What will I do once its ends.With DFL ending, I dont much visit forum and if this also ends soon what will happen to me. How can I stay away from my most favourite forum which is like my second home. Please please please thoda drag karo.
The intervals of the updates are so fast that I am yet to comment on the previous ones and I have a new one here.
Last week's episode was really touching. I was expecting that Piya would tell Abhay about everything but the Sid part was something that I never expected. This had come as an interesting twist. I was really taken out by surprise when Sid turned up. I thought that Piya might back off not wanting to reveal her identity before him without the permission of Alina. But it turned out to be very very interesting.
When Abhiya confessed, the nature sided with them with the rain and all and now when Piya was in a state of shock not knowing what to do, the wind blew the veil from her face exposing her identity before Sid and Abhay. It could have happened before when there were vulnerable moments among all the three. But it happened only at the right moment. Alina had been urging Piya to tell Abhay the truth. But did she want Sid also to know. She knew the outcome of Abhiya confrontation earlier and she must have also guessed Abhay's reaction on knowing Piyali's identity. It could be because she knew both of them and how they felt towards each other. But could it be she could also predict the future? That she already knew Sid would also be present or was it a shock to her?
I could feel Sid's feeling of being betrayed when he came to know Piya was Piyali. For him it was two different persons. Piya, just a tool whom he could use anytime to take out on Abhay and Piyali, whom he considered as a good friend who brought out his true self. There were only three people who meant to him -
Abhay - his younger brother who stole the heart of the woman he loved and his affection for his brother changed to jealousy and hatred.
Maithili - The woman whom he sincerely loved and to obtain her, he would go to any extent and his end justifies all means. The woman who chose his younger brother while she was a human. The woman whom he was willing to condemn to the world of undead just to be with her. The woman whose feelings he is still not sure of.
Piyali - The one whom he considered as a true friend. The one whom pushes away the manipulative side of him and brings his own honest self.
And now that friend not only turned out to be the human whom he thought he was playing with but she also chose Abhay only makes him feel worse.
Now my question - Why was Piya really sent into the past when she already knew the story of the two brothers and the princess. Whether or not she went into the past, her path and Abhay's were to cross and they fell in love with each other much earlier. Piya's going to the past did not really matter for their falling in love. But it really matters in case of Siddharth. Piyali held a special place in the mind of Siddharth and that would really change something. So what was Reina's intentions in sending Piya to the past and then making her appear as Piyali in the present before Sid to bring out some realization?
Coming to Alina, you really tied a loose end which was never explained properly in the show on why a werewolf chose to support Sid in the first time. Ofcourse it was told in the show that Gaurav loved Alina a lot. He could not go against his mother - the Luna wolf even to protect his dear sister. Obviously he was grateful that Sid saved Alina and that feeling of gratitude is immense in Alina also.
But why did Dipannita offer a child Alina to a werewolf. When all her three sons loved Alina, why did she hate Alina so much. She loved her sons then why not her daughter? Is it because Alina would be a threat to her because she was given the powers of a high witch? Was it insecurity which made her go to that extreme throwing away her maternal feelings?
Coming to Abhay and Piya, I really have no words for them because I am fully drowned in Abhiya land. Their moments remind me so much of the April 9th locker wala episode and the 29th April - Itna kareeb aao sequence. How nice it feels to see them together.
I could not thank you earlier for the previous episodes where Abhay takes her out to the pond and insists that she sleeps. Realizing the love is one thing, but realizing what she had lost all these days and trying his best to make up is something else. The way, you subtly mentioned that he threw away her sleeping pills, was mind blowing. I always wanted Abhay to feel the torment she was undergoing all these days. Knowing is one thing and feeling is another thing.Without making it much, you told it in a mild and beautiful way that Abhay not only knew, but he also felt her disturbed state of mind.
You wont believe it, but all these months, I have been imagining such scene between the two and when I actually read your update, my heart leaped with joy.
I could also feel his pain when he tells her that he cant take her like this but he would really make her his one day. But did he knew what would be the right way to take her. Obviously its not just marriage but something more as they are different. Oh Shreya, I really wish that this torture would end soon. I dont mean that they should physically become one. What I intend to convey is that they should shed all inhibitions before they become one.
Piya knews that Alina has some powers, but did she think that it was a wolf trait to possess such powers? She now is surprised that Alina is not just a werewolf but also a high witch. She did not seem to realize this when Alina was performing magic earlier.
Is there any significance in Piya's curiosity about the conversions of witches. She also wondered if Reina was a high witch. But how would that matter to Piya if Reina was a normal witch or a high witch. I mean from a human angle Reina is just a supernatural.
Coming to Misha, in the last episode when you mentioned that Reina smiled to herself when Piya calls Misha about the landslide, for a moment I wondered if Reina was Misha and then I cursed myself. I was also surprised why you had added that Haseena also called Madhu to inform about Piya being at their house. I mean it made sense as a responsible woman for Haseena informing Madhu. Now it makes sense why Piya did not call up home to inform as Haseena already informed Madhu.
Oh Shreya, how is it that you are able to think in entire 360 degrees.
So now Abhay can read Piya's thoughts ? Reina had blocked them right. I mean all these days he could not see about her thinking of being Piyali and her dilemma of revealing her identity.
I also did not understand what Piya meant
Piya suddenly remembered how it had all started...and her eyes widened at the realization. She turned to Abhay. "Did you just-" "I should go," said Abhay. "Have a nice day, Misha." "No way!" Piya began. "I didn't- you can't- I can't believe you just did that!
Did she mean about Abhay distracting her and making her to say yes to his request of keeping him informed about her whereabouts?
I also did not understand the game she played on him
Piya began calling Abhay when any of her family members went out. The first time she did it, she'd been in tears of laughter at the look on his face.
"You told me you were going out," he'd said. "Well, I was," she'd replied. "But I changed my mind, so Misha went alone." Needless to say, Abhay did not find it amusing at all.
That she made him come home by not going out, just to be with him.
I am so sorry for being dumb. But I cant help it
Looks like its not just Abhay who is keeping an eye on Piya's movements, but also Sid. He seemed to know exactly when Piya would be alone that he sent Kerath. But then why Kerath . He could have taken her himself. There is no need for an element of surprise as Piya is alone and defenseless and any harm done to her will only lead to him.
Now what will happen to her? Will she be so mortally wounded that she has to be turned into a vampire?
From the beginning Reina desired the union of Abhiya. But did she know how they would end up together?
Reina/Alina dont seem to sense the attack on Piya's life . Abhay guessed that Sid might attack Piya anytime. But didnt Reina/Alina know that?
Is that all with Luke and Dishu? I really started liking him and wish to see more of him.
Why do you say that you havent done justice to one of the most important things in this story? - I don't think I've done justice to one of the most important things in this story...
Oh Shreya, please please do take your time for the next update. As much as I am happy to read one, I dont want it to end soon.
I wholeheartedly agree with Mandy that you have the potential to become a great writer. Infact, you already are . The way, you wear the hats of every character and bring proper logic to the tracks and make sure all the loose ends are tied, you are really a very good writer.
My sincere wishes for a very bright future in this line.
Edited by harinisriram39 - 11 years ago
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