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@piaviviandsena

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

In d start my reaction was lyk 'wht d hell is dis?' bt by end of d story i was lyk awww. Abhiya's princess wid purple eyes, wow! Awsm os!

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Trishna

@trishnawaliya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

hey dear i cant stop myself from reading story one more time... i love this alot...:-))

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kirti

@Andromeda001

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Awesome OS!
Abhay an Alien😆.
Dr. Delicio reminded me of Dr. Nefario😆. Aahaana soo cute! Loved d whole set up n very well written!

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Raatry

@forever.alone

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

thnx guys for such nice comments 🤗 though i'm lil disappointed for such less readers..maybe its my fault..my writting isnt that good i know.. ..i wrote this os from 11pm to 4am hampering my studies and sleep😆result is not good😔..but those who liked and commented love u all 🤗

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vikramdey

@vikramdey

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

i have read the os today its really nice. at first during reading i thought that mad doc may find abhay and piya will come for his rescue just like in koi mill gaya but i like ur concept also human ET lovestory

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zara

@meerubzara

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

fabulous os
different story line
thanks for pm

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Kakoli

@MistiAbhiya

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Really I love this os ...ur concept soo much beautiful & different...I love it🤗

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Janani24

@Janani24

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

wow that was a different story😊 abhay is an alien thank god u didnt give him an antenna😉 alien or vampire he is rocking all the same😛 gud writing😊

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.SmokeySilence.

@.SmokeySilence.

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

This is such a beautiful OS ratry 👏 👏 I loved it dont bother about the number of readers, many people left the forum. so cant help it.

and when you wrote Abhay is an alien i was imagining vivial standing with Jadoo's hood and dress 🤣 🤣 it was really sweet and i really thought he left.

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flora212

@flora212

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

wondefull story loved the concept😆

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