FF: Fate CH 15, 16, epilogue PG 20 *7 DEC*

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Anj01

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Posted: 11 years ago

#61

wow
finally this story is updated...and it was superb update
loved it
abhay is so naughty...he loves teasing pia
n pia is happy after long time. hope everything goes well now

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Peehu24

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Posted: 11 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: Phoenix.Xeelan
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OMG that song lyrics 😲 🤣 i was imagining Abhay dancing wth that song.. omg ☺️ 🤣
it was hilarious and sweet... im just so hope they are happy.. finally but scared too and i hope nothing comes again and Pia stays happy and Abhay keeps her that way. he didn wish her for two years.. oh god. so much of bitterness. Abhay really gotta cover up a lot. i hope he does his best. looking forward to the update and Peehu thanks again for continuing this. i told you before how much i love this fic ❤️ even after so long break i read it in between aise hi.i missed it a lot. thanks so much. miss Anji.

lol tanz...i was so confused with this song. you have no idea. i wasnt sure if i should post this 😆 then i asked shreya and she said that the song was perfect and so i did the honors 😆

thanks a lot :) yes, they are happy. FOR NOW 😛 Abhay still has lots to make up. lets see, how he does it..

i am still not sure about writing this. 😕 yet, i will continue it. i miss Anji too

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Peehu24

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Posted: 11 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: trishnawaliya
hey peehu kitna wait karaya reposte ke bade... but i enjoy imagine abhay raichand doing pole dance 4 pia... omg such a funny... waiting 4 next update actully abhay's surprise 4 pia...

sorry like button not working...

Originally posted by: Fearless_Lover
Poll dancing 🤣 prt ws bst 😆
m happy 4 Abhiya ❤️ wow!! Piya's bday is coming.. Abhay wuld try 2 mk it memorable :*
thx 4 pm

Originally posted by: ..Bournville..
thanks for finally updating this peehu. and it was really an interesting and funny update.
looking forward for the birthday party now

Originally posted by: ..juhi..
fantastic update👏 Abhay doing pole dance and stripping too...😲🤣

Originally posted by: i_luv_abhiya
Muze dusre ka nhi pta muze pm chahiye, warna... 😈 and update was fadu! I cnt belive abhay actully did dat pole dancing. I was turning pink while reading. 😳 eagrly waiting fr next part. Thax fr pm.

thank you so so much 🤗 i can see that everyone enjoyed "the pole" dance 🤣 will update soon, tonight or tomorrow :)

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Peehu24

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Posted: 11 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: hema_rawat
amzng update
pole dancng part was to gud nd song was perfct , abhiya r happy now 😊

Originally posted by: devilish-grin
awesome
the song was really naughty🤣
liked it
cute update

Originally posted by: Abhiya_Visu
Wow superb
Abhiya so happy
Yippie

Originally posted by: snitchseeker
eeepppiii i cant express how happy i am that u updated it love u. lovely update waiting for bday

thank you so so much 🤗

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Peehu24

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Posted: 11 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--
Oh gosh Peehu I could so imagine Pia's shock in that scene. haila!🤣
Hilarious update. I wonder what Abhay's gonna do for her birthday?

Update SOON please. This is my favorite of your FFs.

thanks a lot shreya 🤗 did it meet the expectation of "piya ki Hawaiyaa" 🤣 will update tonight or tomorrow 😛

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma
superb update
abhay was too naughty and smart for pia!!
happy to see them finally happy after such a long time and i am hoping abhay would make her birthday an occasion to cherish for ever thoug i am a bit disappointed that he didn't even wish her once in 2 yrs:((

thanks a lot...yes, abhay has a lot to make up. lets see what he does

Originally posted by: dreamyjennice
Wow...abhay dancing...sexily...that was hott...

thank you 😳

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Peehu24

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Posted: 11 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: pink_rose
Wow a really hot and naughty update. Would have loved to see this in reality ... Abhay doing a striptease on a pole ☺️. ( I envy Piya 😉😃)
Looking forward to Abhay's surprise for Piya's birthday.

thanks a lot 🤗

Originally posted by: Abhiya_eternal
Love it🤗

thanks a lot 🤗

Originally posted by: arwakantawala
Thank you so much for continuing this FF and the update was as usual very awesome and waiting for more updates egarly and once again Thank you so so so much

thank you so much. will update soon :P

Originally posted by: singhshailesh86
enjoying with fulltoo , love the naughty abhay when he dancing n pia run to stop abhay for more n after dat love the karan n pia bonding like sis-bro
thanks for pm n continue soon

thanks a lot 😊

Originally posted by: anjali0111
wow
finally this story is updated...and it was superb update
loved it
abhay is so naughty...he loves teasing pia
n pia is happy after long time. hope everything goes well now

thanks a lot. yes, abhay loves teasing piya. finally, piya is happy. well...cant tell u about the last part though 😛

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Anon

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Posted: 11 years ago

#67

unresd my comment on pg-7

alaspan ki maari hoon isiliye comment nahin kia 🤣

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Peehu24

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Posted: 11 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: withered
Phir bill phadu kya ?😈😉 chalo woh portion ya nahin likhti 🤣 . coming to the chapter , so so so so happpy finally abhiya are united and eagerly waiting for Pia's birthday 😳 and how abhay is going to make this day memorable for her .😳

ayu itna bill phadna achi baat nahi 😛 😆

yes they are united, FOR NOW 😛 lets see...what happens on her bday 😛

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Bisweswar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#69

omg!!!such a hilarious update 🤣 i can imagine piya's reaction..bechari abhay ko dekhkar pagal hogayi hogi 🤣 di pls pls update soon..uff my stomach is paining..

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Peehu24

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Posted: 11 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: Bisweswar
omg!!!such a hilarious update 🤣 i can imagine piya's reaction..bechari abhay ko dekhkar pagal hogayi hogi 🤣 di pls pls update soon..uff my stomach is paining..

thank you so much :)

i will update tonight or tomorrow 😛