New AbhIya FF:The Toxic Affair(pg68,Chpt10,Nov7)

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Wow... Read ur story today... Nice and a very realistic choice of plot...i must say that only few writers are writing ff ss os... But their way of writing is exceptional.. And yes,u are one of them..coming back to the story line... Abhay works under arnab dobriyal... Have suffered through his life.. He loves his father though his dead... Nor his relation with his mother is in good book... I think they both have lack in their duties..if haseena would have taken a step towards abhay to console him as a mother.. I think things would have been different but the situation is NT kinda worst but it would have been of piya wasn't there with abhay.. To share his sorrow..yeah not in true meaning but piya was there... Piya too don't have a very good past.. Her own father sold her.. She has bruises not physically but on her heart... After reading last update piya should accept his offer.. They both don't share a hate or love relation though they both like each others .. The proffession in which piya is feeling are not present but the pleasure and abhay just wants someone to be his side to whom he can share what's in his heart.. Both are perfect for each other as they both are satisfying others need but they are denying.. talking about other characters which holds their own mystery and importance I feel so much pitty for misha.. Her own dad is womanizer and the person whom she say her bf kabier too is the same.. But her mind is started to work and now she have fixed cameras to look whether her nightmares are true or not... Kabir should NT play with misha's feeling..rest of all the characters... All have broken relations or hatred for their partner.. That's made them what they are now .. update soon... ND yeah plz give ur blog link ..as u mention above that u have started another story .. As u are nt posting here ... Let me read ur work on ur blog... It will be highly sweet of u...ND do pm me...

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Posted: 10 years ago

#412

Sorry but I can't hold myself back after seeing how long comment I have written.. Wow..hehehe...

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Posted: 10 years ago

#413

Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--
First off I have no idea how active I can be on wattpad. My phone doesnt allow me to comment there so I might be irregular. Please dont mind.

Now coming to the update...as usual it makes me think. It makes me wonder!
Abhay and Piya seemed to be dancing around the issue of commitment and relationship and why not. Its fun to watch and I want to hear Piya say her answer :P
Intriguing stuff coming up with Misha.

Loving this FF. This might become my fav of ur works soon :P

i wont be updating very frequent you know that so you dont need to be active but just need to remember your id password there 😆

their relationship history or background isn't smooth so it will never ever be easy for them. and yea i decided to play around Mishas character. lets see how it goes.

thanks a lot. I hope you will keep liking it.

Originally posted by: ..juhi..
Tanzie...!!!!! my darling...how are u...so good to see u are back with the update...I just loved it...so Abhay wants piya to be always around him...they have been spending tym together...*naughty naughty abhiya* there is so such spark b/w them... but alas...the complexity of there relation...there job and there past will take ounce of tymbfor them to realise their love...hope they realize soon...OMG!! abhay asked piya to stay with him...yo man...am so eagerly waiting for piya's answer...yaar...Misha will be so broken to know the real face of Arnab and Kabir... god provide her ample strength for that...and wat does haseena wanted to talk to Arnab and that too about abhay...lets hope for the best...hope she doesnt do anything against abhiya...*fingers crossed* oh and i forget abt the telefilm...he is specially making this for piya right...i mean keeping her in mind...

no coming to the most important part...why does ppl haress u so much...oh agar meko mil jayein na wo log...main unke chote chote chote chote pieces kar k...unka seakabab bna dungi...oil me fry kar dungi...aur bhi bohot kuch...
tanzie darling...u dont take tension yaar...u update wen u want...we will always wait for the updates... no pressure...everyone has a busy lyf too...kuch kiya nai ja skta...

waiting for updates...luv u...❤️

Hey Juhi.. thanks for the sweet comment 🤗 yea having chemistry/spark is on thing and either the relationship will work or not is another. this is how i plan to show it. nothing much between Arnab and Haseena don worry. yea in Abhay's mind the telefilm story will be based on piyas story or her to be precise.

thanks a lot. im going through so much anyways. i was out of all network for months but i wont leave the story and wherever i post i will PM you.

Originally posted by: Syed695
Super Awesom Update!!!!

Piya after a lot of thinkin gave in to her desires...n abhay put through his thoughts...abhay will b giving in more shocks to arnab...waiting for nxt n thanks for the PM!!!

Happy New Year!!!

thanks a lot. no shocks to Arnab from Abhay except his unplanned leaves from ofc. 😆

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Posted: 10 years ago

#414

Originally posted by: ..Bournville..
will she or won't she take up his proposal ?

lets see 😉

Originally posted by: cuteariya
Beautiful update
God kabir start doubt on abhay if he seeing eye candy
Abhay was lost in piya memory
They spend time together & abhay like to spend time with piya
Abhay really want to know abt piya past life but she didn't say anything
So misha fix camera in her home so she can get to know abt her dad
Poor girl don't know abt her dad & her boyfriend
Abhay took piya for new year party
But piya was scared if anybody will see her with abhay not for her but for abhay's reputation
Abhay is so sweet that he ask piya if she feel good or not
Bcoz nobody was concerned abt her ever
Abhiya romance was hot hot me blush blush
Loll Arnav was surprised that abhay took leave
Poor piya was scared that she will fall for abhay
Continue soon
HAPPY NEW YEAR

thank you. Kabir wont be a problem any soon. thanks for the comment. they wont fall in love soon.

Originally posted by: ---Lizo---
It was brilliant work! Loved it!
Happy New year!

thank you.

Originally posted by: VISUforEternity
happy new year, thanks for such a lovely new yr gift...😃
ok the update was fababhay and piya were sooo hot😳😳 I loved the way abhay makes pia feel, not like all other lusty men...she is soo carefree with him..
she didn't share her childhood with him though...
don't know why I feel hasina and arnab are gonna create some problem... arnab is a dirty man, feel bad for misha, she loves her mum. atleast arnab should think about his daughter.
well, I m loving abhiya bond, i m sure they both are in love but will not except in so easily esp pia.
well, awesome update, this FF is becoming more and more interesting. u r surely a fabulous writer. i m so in love with this FF😳

Thanks so much. Piya wont be sharing her history with Abhay so soon. she doesnt trust anyone or she isn't in a position to trust anyone. no haseena jus shared her concern with arnab otherwise nothing personal relationship or so. no there is no love between Abhay and piya. its jus a phase and they enjoy each other for now and no love wont be easy for them ever. thanks a lot. 😳

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Posted: 10 years ago

#415

Originally posted by: ..juhi..
Tanzie...!!!!! my darling...how are u...so good to see u are back with the update...I just loved it...so Abhay wants piya to be always around him...they have been spending tym together...*naughty naughty abhiya* there is so such spark b/w them... but alas...the complexity of there relation...there job and there past will take ounce of tymbfor them to realise their love...hope they realize soon...OMG!! abhay asked piya to stay with him...yo man...am so eagerly waiting for piya's answer...yaar...Misha will be so broken to know the real face of Arnab and Kabir... god provide her ample strength for that...and wat does haseena wanted to talk to Arnab and that too about abhay...lets hope for the best...hope she doesnt do anything against abhiya...*fingers crossed* oh and i forget abt the telefilm...he is specially making this for piya right...i mean keeping her in mind...

no coming to the most important part...why does ppl haress u so much...oh agar meko mil jayein na wo log...main unke chote chote chote chote pieces kar k...unka seakabab bna dungi...oil me fry kar dungi...aur bhi bohot kuch...
tanzie darling...u dont take tension yaar...u update wen u want...we will always wait for the updates... no pressure...everyone has a busy lyf too...kuch kiya nai ja skta...

waiting for updates...luv u...❤️

thanks a lot. im going through so much anyways. i was out of all network for months but i wont leave the story and wherever i post i will PM you.

yay!! will wait for it tanzie!!

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: Princess_jiya
awesome update:) and happy new year:)

thank you

Originally posted by: rhtkumar672
The Update...this is the best new year gift you can give to your readers. Thanx a lot !!
Update is as usual brilliant. Abhay Piya bonding, corporate culture everything shown so beautifully and the last paragraph makes you keenly await the next update.

thanks so much. will update soon.

Originally posted by: Fierce.Dreamer
I rode ur story in wattpat! Its outstanding! Do continue!
As I don't have a account there so I will comment here or scrap u .. but do continue it :D

thanks. yes you can comment here no problem. i will pm everyone.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#417

Originally posted by: sanghita0000
WOW!! outstanding update...loved it...So u r in wattpad...I also follow wattpad writers specially supernatural , angel & demon , vampires & werewolf stories...they are cool..& the writers are very talented...I recently finished Bad boys with wings...its brilliant...Now currently reading renesmee & jake stories...😃

thanks Sanghita. yes wattpad has cool stories. if you read my story there do comment on that also. thanks.

Originally posted by: mahi4ever
Amazing update, loved da character abhay . M too curious to know more abt Arnab n haseena n wat exactly shez worried abt , it's Gud to see abhay pia having some Gud n carefree time with each other. Poor misha , she might b devasted after knowing Arnab n Alina's affair . Her respect towards Arnab vil b gone forever n her trust on friendship vil b lost due to Alina .

thanks Mahi. thanks for loving Abhay. haseena is worried about her son since he has shut her down. yea there so much more to Misha. and yes more to Alina. will concentrate on that on right time.

Originally posted by: 1993.ssg
Read all parts together.
Superb story.
Love Abhay's character very much.
Pia is still a mystery. Looks like that pia has a very pathetic past. Hope Abhay will always be there for pia.
Love how Abhiya's relationship is growing.
Pls continue soon. Very eager to read more.

thank you very much. im very glad you are liking Abhay here. sometimes always being there is not realistic and becomes very difficult. lets see.

Originally posted by: -Monayaholic-
happy new year ... great update and thanks for the p.m.

thanks so much

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Posted: 10 years ago

#418

Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--
Tanzie sorry for commenting again, but I had forgotten to ask you something. Piya's dress when AbhIya danced, was that directly inspired by Suraj Dooba Hai Yaaron? Coz when I read the dress description I literally thought of that song and voila there it was :P

no it wasnt inspired by the song but on that moment i couldnt thought of any other song and i jus visioned the dress and thought its perfect for petite piya so there you go... 😆

Originally posted by: AVELINA
amazing update di...i m sure piya will not be able to stay away from abhay for long...pls updt nd pls pm me...thnks

thanks a lot. i added you in my pm list.

Originally posted by: muzikk93
Nice update :) keep me updated with this story please😳

thanks a lot.

Originally posted by: hema_rawat
Happy New Year tanzie
beautiful update tanzie
sn misha has doubts abt her father afairs, wondr what she"ll do aftr knwing truth .
Abhiya part was awsm , I am waitng for pia's answer.

thanks Hema. misha will be devastated.

Originally posted by: pink_rose
Happy new year. Beautiful update. Loved the bonding between Abhay and Piya. Looking forward to more such Abhiya scenes. Felt bad for Misha. Hope that father and daughter relation does not break.

thank you. about Misha cant promise. lets see.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#419

Originally posted by: Gudiyaaa
first of all Happy new year dear...
awsm update i loved it ..
plz update here only if it is possible..
thanx fr pm..

thanks a lot. i will try

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma
happy new year tanzie😊

another awsum update from you. i feel very sad for pia . she is forced to do things she hate the most. i am really looking forward to see how abhay's telefilm would shape up and i love the title the forbidden girls. thanks Megha. Abhays telefilm will be just in discussion now but it will sure play a major part later.

abhay and pia are attracted to each other like magnets and it's not only the physical part but also the communication they have with each other. they both needed someone to talk to as they have bottled up their entire feelings in their hearts only. abhay is indeed very straight forward here . he clearly told her what he wants from her and pia knows he is right but i am not surprised at her reaction. she is scared to get hurt. abhay has indeed treated pia well not only the monetary part but the respect and care he had shown to her. no wonder she broke so many of her own rules for him. you wrote everything perfectly. thats all i wanted to show and i hope it will continue in future too.

misha is in for a shock and she is going to be distraught after finding the reality but the part where she will find out about abhay and kabir knowing about arnab's affair would leave her totally destroyed and heart broken. they are two ppl she trusts the most.

simply amazing chapter. Misha will be broken true i got a different role for her here. hope it will work.

new ff-

for a change i liked the angry pia and patient abhay in the prologue. pia thinks her father traded her for his own gains but i would like to read further to see if that is true or not. the concept is superb and i am looking forward for their fights actually. pia does have a temper and considering she told abhay not to marry her but still he went ahead would have already got him in her bad books.

prologue was awsum. thanks a lot. i saw your later comments too in wattpad. thanks a lot for commenting there as well 😳 and i promise that FF will be different from anything i have ever written.

do pm me the link whenever u update.

comment in black.

Originally posted by: siggi
HAPPY NEW YEAR TO YOU TOO
update was excellent... make them realise that they r made for each other... i got sad knowing that u wont update this further in IF but in blog... do pm me for further updates plzzz as i love to read ur stories...

Now abt new ff
as i already mention i love ur writing and for that i can go to any extend... i sign up the wattpad acc to read the new story eagerly waiting for that do update soon and this one also... thanks...

thanks dear. i will see whr i update. thanks so much. i already updated till chapt 2 in wattpad i will hope to see your comments.