New AbhIya FF:The Toxic Affair(pg68,Chpt10,Nov7) - Page 41

awesum... i loved it ...pls pm me also

wow this fantabulous

I have just started reading this story and finished it in one go, it was too amazing! :) I really love your writing and how you explain the differences between abhiya and the emotions hanging between them too:D . Please do continue this story :) btw love your watt pad story too:)

This is an amazing story.

Originally posted by: Paint.It.BlacK.

edited---
Comments on chapter 8.

Beautiful. ...


He was definitely physically attracted
to her. He is a man afterall and be it her body
language, her cloths or her eyes everything call
him in and there's only so much a man can resist."

👏 amzing!! Spot on! You know i really loved this one! You've given the view from the angle of a man's perspective and in so less words!! That's what makes this little part so wonderful i suppose! :) thanks you Indu. you know how I always love to read your comments. they are always so meaningful and its great to have a reader like you 🤗 i did..thanku. it's not easy to write things from a men's perspective but im trying my best as i have known them 😆

She doesn't reveal any name but Abhay was
surprised one client cried almost all night and paid
her to sit with him. He was 45+ and his wife left
him and his 3 kids breaking their picture perfect
happy family. Sometimes people have too much
money but nobody to spend on except forbidden
things."

👏 extraordinarily amazing! Too too well reserched tanzie! 👏

You now--this i know for a fact! There was a survey and the reporting came out with things such as this--and more...most of it were shocking!!
Anyway i feel so glad and pleased as a reader, to see how wonderfully you are merging facts with fiction. Amazing!!!! 👏 you are too kind towards me Indu. thanks so much 😳 its true and i have seen it from my own eyes who lonely ppl are even when they have tons of money. sad.

But it wasn't his pain to share. he isnt
close enough to her to ask her what happened in
her past or why her life is like this. He isn't
anyone in her life to impose his rights on her and
ask her to share her pain with him as it's integral
part of who she is. Strangely it makes him feel a
bit disappointed."

👏 what a beauty!!!
again sooo beautifully you've presented a man--Abhay--the protagonist's mind, soo wonderfully!! We not only get to know how he thinks...but also how his mind works and is quite different from others! As a man he is far more wise and generous in his thoughts! Really really loved this Abhay n the manner you portrayed him and singled him out from his gender, simply brilliant!!!! 👏 👏 some ppl wont try to intrude into other ppl's life if they are not close enough or they dont have the right to do so and Abhay is such kind. he sill when he will feel he has the right.


Kabir and Abhay had a relation that is strictly professional and i liked the way you explained their relationship. Kabir's thought --the way he saw the whole Abhay affair---his pov on rich kids and satisfactory life, were very well penned! 👏

I felt bad for Misha. She is almost facing the same demons as Abhay. :( sad.
But good to see that instead of crying...or cursing her fate-she is actually set her foot on the task of revealing the real face of her Father's conduct! This i think is really brave of her!
Loved Misha's character here as well. 👏 I have tried to be as much realistic in this story as possible. we all have friends, (so called) we talk with but will never share out secrets they are like this and when time comes we will never find those friends anywhere to help. life is like this. and Misha- i m experimenting with her character here. lets see how ti turns out.


Coming back to Abhay Piya!

Abhay seems to be having a gala time with Piya! Both are enjoying each other's company and living their life .

I like the fact that though Abhay isn't definitely a saint, but he is clear about what he wants. He is straight forward and yet has a compassionate heart that sees beyond money and cheap pleasure in life! A very commendable portrayal of the male protagonist from you! Kudos to you Tanzie! 👏⭐️ he is an honest man. he is having a good time just wat he needs but he isn't desperate to force himself to anyone. he will never. he lives with dignity and honor ppl for whoever they are.


Abhay spent time with Piya with was pleasure as well as his way of granting her the importance with which Abhay sees her! Piya is different from others, to him and that's why things are so intense between them. Abhay might not know it yet but he'd already allowed her a special place in his life! Yet he is clear in his dealings and approaches Piya, with an offer that he thinks is a kind of business, Piya had nothing to object about!

This makes things a bit complicated. It shows Abhay in a very different light but then again, he is a complete mixture of variant shades here and that makes his character so very interesting! 👍🏼

The turning point had me more interested into the story. I am expecting a lot of twists now. And with Haseena's phone call to Arnab about Abhay, seems to be indicating for something big!
I may be wrong...but that's what i feel right now. thanku. abhay and piyas relationship is indeed very complex here. im apprehensive how far i will be able to justify that. haseena n arnab- no it won be that big. they are sort of social butterflies but sometimes we need help from ppl we less expected.

Piya--well she is a human n a girl afterall! I can understand. The fears she has begun to harbour is quite natural at this point! And she has a valid reason too.
I don't know...but who knows what if her fear tomorrow turns to be true? Then what would become of her?!!

All in all Abhay piya both intrigued me with their different thoughts and behavioural patterns. As protagonists--both are interesting and keeps the story compelling to read! :)

At this point--the way you're taking reign over the story n taking it forward--i don't know what to say...
Truly the more i read...the more i feel fascinated with the manner in which you're dealing with various issues, as well as human facets, here! All i can say is that you're a very capable writer and i have faith in your abilities to know well, that this would sure be another of your most memorable stories in the future.😳 thanks Indu. i hope you will like their characters in future too and i wont disappoint you.

Carry onward tanzie! We all are waiting to read more. 🤗take care.

Originally posted by: Abhiya-4ever

First of all Happy new year Di 😊
This update was SUPERB
I was missing ur update n here it is
Luv each n every bit of it
AbHiYa dance moment was soo beautiful
N AbHaY is soo gentle n he dsnt care if d people saw him wid PiYa or what they said
N PiYa was afraid now bcz she fear that what if she started to feel for him

Aww Abhay took leave for PiYa soo cute
Poor Misha feeling bad for her

Plzz plz pm me when ever i update bcz ur updates are worth waiting
Waiting for nxt 😳
Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: Dark.Desires

Awesome update as always :D Continue soon Di and thank u for the pm :)

PS- I think u should be happy Di and never give up on writing because u r one of the most talented writer Di and my sole inspiration 🤗 Love u Di 😳

PSS - I have commented on wattpad too! My username is Pristinesoul with Abhiya pic