New AbhIya FF:The Toxic Affair(pg68,Chpt10,Nov7)

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_Tangled_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#251

Very nice update such an interesting story..!!

Felt so bad for Abhay and pia's condition 😭 i hope they find solace in eachoder soon

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arwakantawala

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Posted: 11 years ago

#252

Wonderful chapter Pia and Abhay's caring for each other was shown wonderfully and please update early if possible.

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Syed695

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Posted: 11 years ago

#253

Fantastic Update..!!!

Loved Abhiya nd their interaction they missin eachother and finally found or say Pia went back to him..Simply Nice...Like the Precap...Thanks for the PM!!

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varsha

@rose.three

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Posted: 11 years ago

#254

wonderfull updt dear...

loved this part...

gr8 job...

keep updating more...

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zara

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Posted: 11 years ago

#255

wow . . superb update

feeling sad for abhay

it was emotional update

can't w8 to read more plzzz try to continou soon

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BadtameezBrat

@BadtameezBrat

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Posted: 11 years ago

#256

wow awesome update dear...
umm m really luving ur ths ff... its so balanced... spl m luving bg of d story...
n d way u describing abhay n pia's life... is amazing... we can relate with abhay... n also luved abhay's bonding with misha... would luv to read more abt thm...
n d emo end was very touchy... smtimes u need nearone to jst be with u... n pia trying to be with him.. superb... .. very well written... tanzie... 👏...

btw y u said ths is ur most neglected ff 🤔... from ur side or from readers side 🤔😛... jst would say.. m luving ur ff... plz update soon... 😊

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Himanshu singh chauhan

@himanshu1990

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Posted: 11 years ago

#257

Awesome storyline. Very different and intersting.

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Mrs.mohit sehgal

@.Chashmish.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#258

Comment upd on pg 34

Edited by Mohit-deewani - 11 years ago

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Ramona

@PristineSoul

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Posted: 11 years ago

#259

Amazing update Tanzie :)

feeling sad for Abhay. Liked the Abhiya moment.

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megha sharma

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Posted: 11 years ago

#260

superduper hit update tanzie.

everything in this ff is just too interesting and with every update it leaves me wanting to read more of it.

abhay and pia though they both live in different world altogether they are both very much alike . the convo b/w hasini and pia was nice and i really felt sad for hasini...poor women almost sacrificed her life and her daughter doesn't even wanna see her. that's tragic.

i do feel that pia might keep herself away from abhay later on due to the kind of treatment meted out to hasini by her bf.

both abhay and pia are the occupants of the lonely corners.

that party that pia attended was so ugh..but still she had to and i lvd how abhay also did something out of his routine and made tme for his friends. liked how he was warning her to be careful in the party ...it seems he had started caring for her.

that men was pathetic who hit pia...disgusting and it's sad also that even though pia hate it there's nothing she can do. no one deserves this kind of abuse .

lvd how pia went to abhay and took care of him.i lvd the emotional quotient in the chapter.

simply amazing and fab update.

loved loved loved it!!!