AVELINA thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#1
My feet stumbbled in the wet mud...the heavy rain drops were drenching my senses..."i love you!!..." i screamed to the sky, to the green friends around me...the sky roared in response with white vibrating rays...my heart was thudding louder and louder...as the water kissed my skin, i felt shy and hid my face within me...the soothing fragrance of rain and mud overwhelmed my very soul...I danced with the motion of rain drops..i felt the loving and passionet touch of my beloved within the rain drops...my almost deserted soul were waking up with his memories...the memories of our last moments together...the moments from when my heart started to beat his name "abhay, abhay, abhay"..."will you marry me?.." a smile touched my lips as his voice rang through my heart...i closed my eyes and his glowing face reflected within my soul..."yes"...i murmured again and his smiling face again touched my memories..the exact same smile of that day when I said yes to him...my eyes shot opened as his last memories made me to crave more for him...I welcomed the heavy raindrops with open arms to sooth my soul...i saw his reflection in the clouds as if he was watching me..."i will wait for you..forever" i whispered and embraced the rainfall dearly..i felt i was embracing his strong stature...the cold wind increased its speed and the surrounding became darker...i felt his touch on my back skin...i was shocked...i opened my eyes and my brown mirrors got locked with the familar magnetic blue oceans...i witnessed the same cravings, passion and love within those eyes ...my senses hit the reality as i realized he was really there...the sudden storm of emotions captured my heart...joy, pain, love, passion, fear, anger i felt every emotions within me and i hugged him like a longing soul..."are you really here"..i heard myself saying while caressing his features with disbelief..his eyes were silently witnessing my reaction...suddenly i felt my lips were caged within his...his touch of love passion and compassion made me feel how real he was...i could not hold my self and locked him within my embrace...he caressed my lips with such a hunger and cravings that my dead heart started to breath again with passion...i held him more closure as the fear of loosing him again ran through my thoughts...he drank me with his kiss as if his thirsty soul were longing...his caring but hungry touch in my inner mouth made me dizzy and i wrapped my arms around him like a feable doll...i felt out of breath and he unwillingly withdrawed from the kiss with a growl...my fast breathing and loud heartbeats felt so alive after ages..."are you real!!" i whispered again...his magnetic smile enthralled my heart...he whispered in my ears "only for you" and kissed my earlobe...my widened eyes voiced my confusion to him...he cupped my face and said " my love your yearning and promise to wait for me made me be here, only for now.."...i clutched his shoulder tightly with fear..."what..what do you mean...by... by only for now?" i stammered with my weak voice.."piya i have to go after a while...i am not real for reality"..he sadly uttered..my new born hopes and dreams again shattered with this...the ran had stopped all of a sudden as if it was also shocked..."no...never...not again...I wont let you go"...i screamed but my voice choked...my eyes refused to shed tears as if my tears were dried...the thought of letting him go made me hold him closure again...i kissed him again with fear and anger...he meakly responded..."you cant go..not again" i mumbbled between the kiss...he kissed my forehead and whispered "i have to"..i slapped him hard..."why did you came back then..to made me shattered?...why abhay?...i was happy in this wait...why did you came back...karne diya hota intezaar mujhe?...my torned heart cried in pain..."piya please understand...we cant fight death...i came here to free you from this promise...please move on..i am nothing but a soul piya...but you are alive..."..abhay pleaded..."no...never...never...i cant survive without this wait...this promise is my life...why abhay..kyun nahi aasakte tum wapas?"...i collapsed on the floor...the burden was too much..."I am sorry piya!!..i am responsible for this...agar maine tumse wo promise nahi liya hota to tumhe itni takleef nahi hoti.you are free from my promise.please piya for me dont destroy your life...i can not be free till you let me go...please let me be free.i will allways love you"...abhay tried to make her understand..."no...i wont let you go..please abhay dont do this to me..tum mujhe firse akelaa nahi chorsakte..if you cant stay then take me with you..."..i stubbornly muttered..."piya...!!..are you insane!!..it cant happen...you are alive piya...life is a rare gift...i know how it feels to loose it... i cant be selfish...you have to move on for me.."..."its not worth living if you are not with me...i waited for you and this wait was the reason of my life...but tum wo bhi lechuke ho abhay...kya tum jee paate mere bina.. mujhe bhulke aage bar paate?"..i shooked him for answer...but he was silent..i knew he cant deny me anymore...i hugged him again..."please abhay..dont leave me this time"...i snuggled more closure to him..."I am sorry"..he whispered and stepped backwards...i saw him slowly fading away..."abhay...no!"..i ran towards him and held his hand to stop him...he was vanishing slowly...only his upper body was visible..."i will kill myself if you leave me again"...i said desperately trying to stop him...his eyes filled with tears...i knew he cant stop now...what was the point in leaving then!!...i ran towards the empty road where a car was coming forward...it was so close and i ran infront of it...and a sudden jerk made me numb...my senses blurred with the sudden pain as i hit the road...i got lost in darkness...[ TWO DAYS LATER- ]...[" piya...!..love...look...i m here..."...his husky voice was so soothing...i thought i was in heaven with him...i slowly opened my eyes..."are you real!" i asked slowly...he smiled again and kissed my forehead and whispered " real in reality"..i was astonished...my eyes searched for the truth...i saw my surroundings was a lot like my own room..i touched him to realise i was not dreaming...he seems so much alive...i pinched him a little...my heart was not ready to believe he was here..i was alive..."oouch!!...it hurts..i am a human piya!!.."he flinched a little and i instantly hugged him..."abhay...you are real naa!!...tell me i m not dreaming!!.."..i sobbed like a baby..."its reality love!! you me and us very real...your promise...your stubborn heart..your love your wait made me fight the destiny..your love has the power to fight everything..you wont believe piya, I felt alive again after your sudden suicide attempt...the pain of loosing you was stopping me..i just could not see you dying...are you mad huh!!..you went to kill yourself...i wonder how stubborn you can be to win against almighty?"..abhay smiled and hugged her..."I dont know anything!!...i just know that I can't live without you..promise me you wont leave me again!..i murmured in his ears..."promise..I will be with you in life and with death and forever, besides now you have a huge task to do.."...abhay said with mischevious voice..."what task abhay? i wondered what he meant..."being my wife...and being mother of our 12 babys..." abhay teased me.."what!!...12 babies !!...in your dreams...i want 30 babies understand!!...I replied with a grinn and took his lips in mine to never leave again..."I love you.."...we whispered to each other to cherrish our reunion again...]


Edited by samwllms - 12 years ago


DO NOT COPY THIS POST AS THIS IS EXCLUSIVE TO INDIA FORUMS


Created

Last reply

Replies

34

Views

4.1k

Users

16

Likes

33

Frequent Posters

Sh_Abhiya thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
#2
update was full of mysetry when I started reading I thought abhay leave pia ,then nxt moment abhay arived infront of pia - then think abhay came back , again think pia died due to accident -then pia & abhay both alive
this worked is really outstanding , when anyone while reading keep gacing what happened nxt , then what happened didn't expect it
so atlast god give life to abhay due to pia unconditional love , dedication for abhay , promised which both made , pia ready to give life ,if abhay is not with her -this all unconditional love make god to redecide give life to abhay
thanks for pm
Edited by singhshailesh86 - 12 years ago
bookworm-ALS-- thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
#3
Thank God. Ive read too many sad stories of Abhay leaving Piya in the end.
Good you changed him :P
AVELINA thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#4

Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--

Thank God. Ive read too many sad stories of Abhay leaving Piya in the end.
Good you changed him :P




i didn't change abhay...he was dead long ago...but he got his life back bcs of piya's love..
alicia212 thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#5
wow great os plz update soon
thanks for the pm
vampireking thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
#6
first of all i hate you for making me cry 😡like a baby😭 but i am really happy that you give this os a happy ending 😭!it was beautifully written 👏!you are the new shinning star⭐️ of this forum dear!and the way you show piya feeling is just mindblowing !!hatts of to you dear😳!!thanku you so much for the pm !dear!i cant belive that you update this from the selfphone 😲 👏 👏 👏 3o children !omg 😆
Edited by vampireking - 12 years ago
AVELINA thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#7

Originally posted by: vampireking

<font size="3">first of all i hate you for making me cry 😡like a baby😭 but i am really happy that you give this os a happy ending 😭!it was beautifully written 👏!you are the new shinning star⭐️ of this forum dear!and the way you show piya feeling is just mindblowing !!hatts of to you dear😳!!thanku you so much for the pm !dear!i cant belive that you update this from the selfphone 😲 👏 👏 👏 3o children !omg 😆 </font>

omg!!...shining star??...thanks dear...i m still very new in writing...the precious comments are motivation for me...yeah i updated it from phone...thnks again
AVELINA thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#8

Originally posted by: singhshailesh86

update was full of mysetry when I started reading I thought abhay leave pia ,then nxt moment abhay arived infront of pia - then think abhay came back , again think pia died due to accident -then pia & abhay both alive
this worked is really outstanding , when anyone while reading keep gacing what happened nxt , then what happened didn't expect it
so atlast god give life to abhay due to pia unconditional love , dedication for abhay , promised which both made , pia ready to give life ,if abhay is not with her -this all unconditional love make god to redecide give life to abhay
thanks for pm




thanks a lot for supporting...
--Janvie-- thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 12 years ago
#9
Wow Sona!!This one is beyond appreciation.👏👏⭐️
I'm lacking words to express.The emotional turmoil of Piya is so beautifully Shown by You.I really like the Mystery element here.I was not able to guess at all What will happen the next moment.😳
So Finally Abhay Got life back bcoz of Piya's unconditional stubborn love for which She can was ready to embrace death willigly and happily.Even Destiny and Almighty bows down in front of Our Abhiya' Special and Unconditional love.!!😉😳😃
Really Loved it alot.!!!!!❤️And Love My Abhiya alot.!!❤️ 😳
And OMG 30 Kids,😲🤣 🤣Piya toh Apne Tharkey Abhay se bhi Do kadam aage nikle.🤣 🤣😆
Really Hats Off to you for writing in betwn Exams.!!👏👏⭐️Hope They are going well.😊 😳 😳I prayed for you.😳 😳
Thanks for the pm.😃






Edited by janvie - 12 years ago
AVELINA thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#10

Originally posted by: janvie

Wow Sona!!This one is beyond appreciation.👏👏⭐️

I'm lacking words to express.The emotional turmoil of Piya is so beautifully Shown by You.I really like the Mystery element here.I was not able to guess at all What will happen the next moment.😳
So Finally Abhay Got life back bcoz of Piya's unconditional stubborn love for which She can was ready to embrace death willigly and happily.Even Destiny and Almighty bows down in front of Our Abhiya' Special and Unconditional love.!!😉😳😃
Really Loved it alot.!!!!!❤️And Love My Abhiya alot.!!❤️ 😳
And OMG 30 Kids,😲🤣 🤣Piya toh Apne Tharkey Abhay se bhi Do kadam aage nikle.🤣 🤣😆
Really Hats Off to you for writing in betwn Exams.!!👏👏⭐️Hope They are going well.😊 😳 😳I prayed for you.😳 😳
Thanks for the pm.😃









thnks mishika...have you finished reading my other updts too!!...i dont remember how many updts were there...

Related Topics

Pyaar Kii Ye Ek Kahaani Thumbnail

Posted by: White-Lilac

10 months ago

Abhiya AT #344 ~ Hum Dheere Dheere Dheere Pagal Ho Rahe Hai

Welcome to Enigmatic AbhIya AT #344 Welcome to Enigmatic AbhIya AT, heaven/home for AbhIya lovers..come relive the memories, share, shower your...

Expand ▼
Pyaar Kii Ye Ek Kahaani Thumbnail

Posted by: simply.meghana

1 years ago

| Abhiya SS - And They Were Roommates | Ch 5 Pg 7

Hello folks! My writer's block is gone for now so writing an SS with the following writing prompt You are a vampire hunter. Your roommate is a...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".